6/3 - Hum Tum - Poetry

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for the delay - my net was down...

Here I go on today's episode -

Kumud's thoughts

At last I 've peeped and managed to see...

Your face - my dream - so real and clear...

How can such a miracle exist...

I'm happy, thrilled but still do fear...

I'll fan you - but whenever you're up...

I'll move away... lest you...

Catch a glimpse of my beautiful face...

And like me, change your mind too...

Saras's thoughts -

You've stopped the fanning and I'm up...

And now I cannot sleep...

You're hiding away and causing me to ...

Break the promise I wanted to keep...

( After the saving of the child...he continues to think...)

Ah! so finally I can clearly see...

We both do think the same...

Your hand in mine and mine in yours...

Lets start this everlasting game...(of life!)

Hope you all liked it!
I tried my best as I lost the tempo after the delay in the net!😃




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