WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE~~MANVEER SS~Prt24 newpg 78 - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
yaarrr update toh kardo next prt i'm waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Mahi👏it was very beautifully written👏 and the song was just perfect!! loved it!

don't be sad with the response😳, ur a very good and talented writer👍🏼, your writing is worth reading👏i really love both of your SS!! they are wonderful, only one shikwa😆 the update ends so soon😭!! please give a longer update!😉

update soon please!!😃 & thanks for the PM.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very very cute update plz update soon & do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 19: MANVEER: <3:::::::

Anya freshens up and comes with breakfast in Uday's room'

Uday was having bath so she waits in his room near window facing outside'

Uday comes outside and hugs her from back'.

Resting his head on her shoulder'

His wet hair touching her face'

Both lost in the wonderful moment staring at the outside world which suddenly turned beautiful'

Anya turns back and takes his face in her palms'

Anya: U barbar mujhe hug mat kiya karo Uday hath mein dard hoga'

Uday smiles: itni fikar karti ho humari??

Anya: khud se bhi jyada'

Uday:I love you princess'

Anya: love you too'

Ab chalo jaldi breakfast karlo'

Anya use shirt pehnati hai..

They have breakfast and she gives him tablets'

Anya: suno mein college ja rahi hu' tumhe nurse khana khila degi..aur tablets bina nautanki kiye lelena'

Uday: no never hum khana sirf tumhari hatho se khaenge..

Anya: Uday please'

Uday pouts :f9.. jao hume chodkar'

She sits near him: are mujhe nahi jana tumhe chodkar par meri practicals hai na'please mereliye'

Uday still pretending to be angry: f9 jao tumhe college keliye late ho raha hoga'

Anya kisses him on his cheek and leaves for college with vijay and unnati'

In car,

Unnati: anya kal rat tum kaha thi??hum tumhare room mein aye the par tum nahi thi'

Vijay: hmm' anya rat ko gayab thi?? Toh kaha thi han?? Kahi tum uday' uday tum..

Anya: shut up vijay esa kuch nahi tha'

Hum garden mein fresh air le rahe the'

Vijay:really'kiske sath??

Anya: akele..

Unnati:ofo vijay kyun bichari ko pareshan kar rahe ho?? Apni question bank bad mein khol lena..

Anya: seriously yar Unnati'

Both girls laugh on this'

They reach college..

Everyone was eager to see Uday as usual but were disappointed'

Anya gives her practicals and is sitting in her class'

Kia and he toli present there too'

J comes angrily: what the hell anya..

All are looking at the two..

Anya: hua kya j??

J: tumhari wajah se humare uday da ka accident hua hai na??

Anya: no j humahri baat suno tumhe kuch galatfamilie hui hai..

Be4 she could speak further kia interrupts..

Kia: wow anya tum toh humse bhi tej nikli'

Uday ka accident karwadiya??

Kya hua usne tumhe bhi ditch kardiya??

J: just stay out of it kia'

Anya crying'

Unnati comes there'

Unnati: kya hua anya??

Kia: cum on j baby we sail in the same boat' we both hate this bloody gawar anya don't we'

J: no we dnt sail in the same boat'you sail in some cheap boat being a rajwada'

And just because I don't like anya doesn't mean I hate her'like you samjhi you gavar kia'

Kia: mind your tongue j'

Be4 j could speak anya's cell rings..

Anya: hello' kya?? Acha thike mein abhi ghar ati hun'

Unnati worried: kya hua anya??

Anya: tumhara bhai na ek din meri jan lekar hi dum lega'

J confused kia jelous..

J: uday da' unhone kya kiya??

Anya: pagal Bandar khana nahi kha raha nurse ke hatho se' mujhe hi jana padega.. anyways bye unnati mein tumse ghar par milungi'

Unnati: oho' bye princess achese khana khilana humare dada ko'

Anya blushes and leaves the class..

Kia super duper jealous..And j is angry'

~mahi~

hey guyz i know this chappy is short but mere exams hai so i won't be able to update much in coming 10 ya 20 days...

sorry if i disappointed you all with my chapters...😭

NOTE: GUYZ I NEED TO MAKE PM LIST FOR THIS SS TOO KYUNKI MUJHE BEWAJAH 100 PM'S BHEJNE PAD RAHE HAI... JUST LIKE THE UPDATE AND MENTION ONCE IN THE CUMMENTS IF U WANT PM'S GUYZ...AND HAN JOH MERE BUDDY LIST MEIN NAHI HAI AND WANT PM'S PLZ SEND ME REQUESTS...

AND YEAH FOR ALL THOSE WHO ARE NEW FOR ME I WANTED TO TELL YOU ALL THAT I HAVE ALSO WRITTEN A MANVEER OS NAMED THE BABY CUPID...

HERE'S LINK :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3195615/the-baby-cupid-part-2-page-5

HOPE U ALL LIKE IT😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Awesome update Mahi👏it was very beautifully written👏 and the song was just perfect!! loved it!

don't be sad with the response😳, ur a very good and talented writer👍🏼, your writing is worth reading👏i really love both of your SS!! they are wonderful, only one shikwa😆 the update ends so soon😭!! please give a longer update!😉

update soon please!!😃 & thanks for the PM.😳

THANKS ALOT ALOT YAR GLAD U LIKED IT AND PAKKA PROMISE EXAM KHATAM HONE KE BAD I'LL GIVE A VERY LAMBA UPDATE...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
i really liked it plzzz update quickly next prt
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is very short yaar!!!! But chalo koi ni manveer doze mil gyi...mere to boards k xams r goin..band bji hui h...manveer stories pdh k hi mind fresh ho jata h...ok now cmin to the chapter..bht mast h uday yaar,itni notanki!!! God pta ni aise anya graduation b kr payegi ya nhi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear
awesum update...👏👏
loved Manveer scenes...👍🏼❤️
but it was less of manveer...

hate dat kia..😡
gavar kahi ki...🤣
eagerly waiting 4 d next update...
do cont soon aftr ur exams...
n
thnks for d pm...
n
All D Best...👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update mahi n thankx fr pm... pls continue soon na...

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