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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: -sree13-
[COLOR=MAGNTA]@ Priya
your every writing is always gives more than my exceptation. It was just a honest thaught from me,I hope you did not mind 😳[/COLOR]

Na na I felt gud...😊
Dont u worry abt that at all...Comments wud only help me to improve..

And moreover, watevr u said was tru..I was feeling the same after posting the update also..

I lyk reading ur comments...and feel happy after reading them..so chill!...🤗

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Moner_Radio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

priya :

commenting on two updates together, you know when i was reading roshni's hilarious attempts to apologize to arjun, i was like , " has she lost it 😲? aadhi raat ko koi kisiko phone karta hai kya 😲?"😆 but then, the way you handled the entire "mission sorry " .. must say i loved it😳. specially the write-up in the card .. too good👏 ! and yes, loved rathore's teaming up with roshni in her mission😉 , poor shree, bechare ki toh bad luck hi kharab hai😆 ! update soon.

ps : my exams are starting from 18th march, that's why i have become so irregular these days ..aur aage toh fully inactive bhi ho jaungi, but keep the pms coming ..baad mein padh lungi ! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: polly_03
priya :

commenting on two updates together, you know when i was reading roshni's hilarious attempts to apologize to arjun, i was like , " has she lost it 😲? aadhi raat ko koi kisiko phone karta hai kya 😲?"😆 but then, the way you handled the entire "mission sorry " .. must say i loved it😳. specially the write-up in the card .. too good👏 ! and yes, loved rathore's teaming up with roshni in her mission😉 , poor shree, bechare ki toh bad luck hi kharab hai😆 ! update soon.

ps : my exams are starting from 18th march, that's why i have become so irregular these days ..aur aage toh fully inactive bhi ho jaungi, but keep the pms coming ..baad mein padh lungi ! 😃

Thank u so much Puloma!😃
Cant tell u hw much I miss ur comments...which hv become so irregular lately...bt now I know the reason...so all the vry best for ur xams...rock it!*hugs*

Thank u so much for lyking the update...sorry wale writeup k liye badhi mehnet ki thi..😃

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846182

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

lol!!

Shree nah, he is so cute... I loved his part... I loved Arni's interaction as well...

Please continue soon...

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Nazneen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

dat part where shree ws complaining and rathore turned back to take the paper ws funny...lol😆

loved roshni-arjun convo nd scenes...nd d sorry card..nyc..!!😊

continue soon...

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Liza S.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Hey :)
I just read the entire story,
Yes, all 36 parts, LOL
In one go!!

I have to say I'm addicted !
Awesome story.
I really really love it !

I'm anxiously waiting on the next update
Which I hope will be soon !! LOL

& can you Please pm me when you update :)

Once again , super awesome fantabulous story !!!
Hope there's an update soon ;)

~ Liza.

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..pink..

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

@ ...Mithuz..., naz_2012

Thank u so much🤗

@ Liza.

Oh boy! I also did this once with one FF here in this forum...it really requires a lot of patience and tym...Thank u so much for the lovely words🤗

Yes new update is cumin soon...i'll pm u definitely...

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Part 37

Arjun smiles and leaves the rum. Roshni was standing there smiling, saying "Thank u sir!"

Roshni looks at the tym. It was really late. She runs to the door and looks to her left and right for Arjun and then shouts...

Roshni : "Arjun sir!" *runs to him*
Arjun (turns) : "Hmm"
Roshni : "Aap ghar ja rahe hai?"
Arjun (nods) : "Hmm"
Roshni : "Great! Sir kya aap mujhe ghar drop kar sakte hai?"
Arjun (confused) : "Wo main..."
Roshni : "Plzzz...plz plz plz! Chotu aur Shree busy hai...meri car me kuch prob hai, itni raat ho gayi hai, mujhe auto b nhi milega... Gia ka phone b aaya tha... "
Arjun : "Stop it Rosh! Kaha se recharge karati ho jo tumhara talktime khatam hi nhi hota! I am just saying ki main Rathor ko file dek aata hu...Windup karo aur mujhe parking me milo."

In SUV

Roshni : "Sir thank u so much! Aap mujhe ghar tak lift de rahe hai. Mujhse kal ki wajah se gussa b nhi hai. U know wat sir, aap bahot acche hai...kabhi-kabhi hi sahi."
Arjun (smiling, sarcastically) : "Thanks!"
Roshni : "Aur sir..."
Arjun : "Tumhe nhi lagta ki tum aaj k liye kaafi bol chuki ho!"
Roshni : "Sry! Shayad aap irritate ho rahe hai...Ok!"

Roshni starts the fm radio in the car and starts looking at the window.

Sham bhi koi jaise hai nadi
Lehar lehar jaise beh rahi hai
Koi ankahi, koi ansuni
Baat dheemi dheemi keh rahi hai
Kahin na kahin jaagi hui hai koi aarzoo
Kahin na kahin khoye hue se hain main aur tu
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai madhosh dono
Jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein
Gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein hai na

Slowly her eyes felt heavy and she slipped into sleep. After some time, Arjun stopped the car at her gate. Her head slowly slipped and landed on his shoulder. He looked at her and smiled. She was looking cute lyk a small baby.

Arjun (in mind) : "Ye Gia ka khyal kaise rakhti hogi! Ye to khud baccho se kam nhi hai..."

He felt that its bcoz of him that she cudnt sleep yesterday and that made him feel little guilty also. He jerkd her shoulder to wake her up.

Arjun : "Roshni! Roshni!"
Roshni (blinking her eyes, lifting her head) : "Siiir! Aap... yaha... kya kar rhe hai?"
Arjun (smiled) : "Get up! Tumhara ghar aa gaya hai."
Roshni : "Ghar.."

Roshni raised her head and found Arjun's eyes looking at her amusingly. She lookd here and there and realized that she is actually sleeping in his car and that too making his shoulder her pillow. She immediately parted from him embarrased and puts her hair behind.

Roshni : "Sorry wo..."
Arjun : "Its ok!"
Roshni : "Bye sir! Thanx."

She got down from the car, walkd to the gate and then turnd hearing his voice, "Roshni". Arjun lowered the window's glass and duckd a bit to see her face.

Arjun : "Thank u...card k liye...aur sry kal raat k liye..."

A big smile curvd her lips. Arjun smiles too. Arjun never reacted to such gestures even if he has lykd it. He doesnt belongd to that category of people who actually felt its important...nt bcoz he didnt bother or care but coz he just not felt comfortable with these kind of emotions. He has a reserved nature. The first tym he opened up to someone was with his Roshni, his lyf and now this Roshni was slowly making him do that.

Roshni slowly waved her hand to say bye and Arjun gestures her with a nod and then leaves.

Next Day - ETF Office

Rathor : "Guyz! Head quarter (HQ) se ek training session k liye letter aaya hai Mumbai se bahar...3 din ka..."
Arjun : "Hmm ye to acchi baat hai. I think hume training session ki zarurat b hai"
Roshni : "3 din..m sry sir bt main aap logo ko join nhi kar sakti.."
Rathor : "Kyu?"
Arjun, Roshni : "Gia"

Both lukd at each other. Rathor, Shree and Chotu looked at each other amazed at the understanding they have developed in such a short span. Roshni then continued...

Roshni : "Sir 3 din tak Gia kaise rahegi mere bina...wo to itni choti hai..."
Rathor : "I completly understand that bt HQ se order hai ki sabko ye session attend karna hai. And that counts u too. Tum dekho kuch na kuch arrange ho jayega. I have to leave for HQ, session k liye details wagerah dekhni hai. And all of u, start packing, hume kal shaam nikalna hai. "

Arjun looks at her from one end of the table. He then thought of something and got up from his chair to talk to her. But before he cud speak to Roshni Rathor called him. He nods to him and moves to Roshni, picks her mobile and dials a number. Roshni was seeing all of this all confused.

Arjun : "Baat karo!"
Roshni (confused) : "Hello...Uncle...haan Gia theek hai. Hmm...wo b aap logo ko miss karti hai...kya aap yaha aa rahe hai kuch dino k liye...nhi nhi mujhe kya problem ho sakti hai...sure sure ...ok "

She xcitedly turned to look at Arjun but he has left the rum by then.

Chotu : "To ab tune kya socha hai?"
Roshni : "Sir kaise meri prob ka solution jaan jate hai!"
Shree : "Hai? Are hum kya pooch rahe hai aur tu kya jawab de rhi hai..."
Roshni : "Anika k parents aa rahe hai Gia se milne...mera kaam to ban gaya...ek min gyz mujhe sir se milna hai..." *leaves the rum*
Shree : "Chotu kya tujhe lag raha hai ki Roshni humse chupakar kuch paka rhi hai?.."
Chotu : "Nhi yaar main is maamle me kabhi dhoka nhi kha sakta...agar kuch hota to mujhe pata chal chuka hota..."
Shree : "Offo! Tu kis bare me sochne laga! Kabhi khane ki duniya se bahar b nikla kar...chodh...teri samajh me nhi aayega..."

Roshni was peeping in each cabin for Arjun and finally found him in the corridor. She xcitedly approaches him and in the heat of the moment, tried to hug him but then stops. She moves her hand forward for hanshake.

Roshni : "Thank u sir! Thank u so much!"
Arjun : "Thanx ki zarurat nhi hai. Tumhare liye nhi kiya hai, training session me sabka jana compulsory hai isiliye kiya hai."

Roshni was now getting familiar with Arjun's nature. Even if he'll help, he will not accept it so she just smiles. Arjun then turns to leave bt then turns back to her.

Arjun : "Aur ek baat main tumhe zarur kehna chahunga...har problem akele face karne ki zarurat nhi hoti hai. Sometimes it is ok to ask for help. That's why people have each other. Relying on and supporting each other is what makes the world go round. Tum Gia ko lekar itni stressd out rehti ho ki ye tak bhul gai ki usk nana nani b hai.."
Roshni (amazd) : "Wow! Sir u surprise me always! Such a deep thought...U know wat sir, aap kabhi-kabhi itne acche ho jate hai aur main to acchi hu hi ki mujhe lagta hai ki agar hum senior junior na hote to shayad bahot acche frnds hote... "

Arjun looks at her amusingly. Instead of thinking over wat he said, she was in with her own set of crazy thoughts. He just smiled and goes from there.

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And why are some people nt leaving their comments...plz encouragement chahiye...

Part 38
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77625076

Edited by ..PriyaB.. - 12 years ago