mujey haq hai a short story by me 4 S-G

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HI SWEETIES

the originally idea is from a humayun saeed's long play "bheegi se wo ik raat".................written by seema ghazal ......it was awesome i bring some changes to it occasionally hope u all like it and do comment plz !

MUJEY HAQ HAI

Khanna's are arranging party for displaying of an antique necklace of their family worth of rupees 25 lakhs……and guess what an Naina khanna asked Shiv kapoor the biggest thief in city for security…..it was something stupid and idiotic people of elite class girls are crazy over this thief who luckily get arrest after every three or weeks and very next day any industrialist help him with bale ….what a lucky thief……any ways he was finally coming to the party.

The main hall is fully decorated along with hidden camera's …only Mrs. Naina khanna is in hall when guy enter in khanna villa foot steps are shown the camera move upward a guy wearing Armani's black suiting , Armani's designed silver wrist band and a Swiss watch ….on his both hands he is wearing a unique type of four joined rings ……each has wording on right hand it is king of and on left thieves the trade mark of Shiv khanna from last three year he is most popular thief in country. Many stories are associated with him but nothing prove up till now ….finally his very handsome face shown ….now we get the reason why he is popular any girl can fall for despite the fact that he is a thief . Naina khanna gave him instructions. And he coolly listen to them ….and left the khanna mansion . when he was driving his red sports car of Honda peacefully he gets a call it is from police station "what the heck" he yelled and stop his car at one side of road .."hello Shiv here "…..on the other side "Shiv come to police station urgently "…..Shiv eyes popped "see I didn't commit any crime .." on other side "we know but just come our new inspector want to meet you urgently …" Shiv get pissed off "who is he ?" …on the other side "not he it is she inspector gauri alok" Shiv smiled "ok tell me is she hot like so tasty coffee or cold like Pepsi "….. other side "shut up and come fast " ……and from police station call ended "interesting " Shiv said with evil grin and shift the gears and zoomed towards station.

He enter in police station a lady inspector is doing some thing he head is in the files when Shiv clear his throat ….."excuse me ma'm "……the lady lift her face up she seemed nearly age of 23 ….she had determine look on her pretty face …Shiv is very fair while gauri alok she has bit dim complexion she cooked her brow and her lips move to say some thing when Shiv say "beautiful …u r beautiful "……."excuse me " she said "so you are Shiv the thief duh If I get authority now at the very moment I put you in jail with out wasting seconds "…….Shiv smiled "u know what ur nose become pink when u r angry no worries it suits u a lot " gauri give him a killing look when a guy enter in room he SP nitaish gauri's fiance …..he cleared his throat "u know gauri our days are change ….now thieves will look after the precious things instead of us ……….elite class has give them this duty we are free " gauri give stern look to him and said "I don't know and I don't accept this rubbish thing any more tomorrow I will go and look after every thing it is my duty "…….nitaish "ok don't forget to go in casual wear ….police uniform not allowed remember " …gauri smiled "ok nitaish" he left gauri turned around Shiv still there "what the hell you are doing here "….."u called me and tell me the reason " Shiv said "nothing just leave".

Party is on it full swing gauri is in casual blue t-shirt and faded jeans is there Shiv in white suiting looking over the party and Naina ji busy with guests when light gone people start chirping like birds "what happened what happened " ….light come again but necklace was already stole by some one Shiv is standing there shocked ……………..Naina yelled "omg Shiv u liar cheater u thief and will always be u steal it right " …..Shiv "no madam not me …" …..Naina yelled "guards arrest him " Shiv look guards coming to him gauri is standing near by him he pulled her towards him and keep the pistol on her head "no one dare to come close to me other wise she will dead "……he took her out side pushed her in car and zoomed off nitaish come running towards them ……….but they already left.

Three hours gauri keep bombarding one thing "where are you taking me leave me damn it " but Shiv is silent as snow ………………….he finally stopped in front of one dhaba "u must be hungry come and have some food "…..gauri made a face and said "no I am not going eat with the money of thief wit the money of person who is criminal " ……..Shiv yelled "I m not criminal get it I never did wrong I never theft it is some one else and he is …………..come lets eat something that Is non of your business" …….gauri quietly come out they had their supper at dhaba and then they left for unknown destination Shiv was again quite they left Mumbai far and now traveling in other city it is mid night …Shiv now stopped in front of a big house he come out of his car and gauri followed him quietly …they enter it is beautiful house with white flooring off-white furniture brown windows a maid come and greet Shiv candles are glowing at corners on long old style candle stands giving a beautiful glow to beautiful place.

Shiv leave for his room then come with an outfit in his hand it is fully embroided sari seemed to made for newly wed bride …"what is this "…….gauri asked "it is my mom's sari ……take it and keep it with you ……." Why are u giving it to me " gauri asked …"because u helped me that is why "…….gauri stopped him as he was about to leave again "now what "………gauri said "tell me why are u doing this if u r not the one who is responsible " Shiv turned around "see it is non of your business" gauri yelled "it is my only business now tell me what is truth "…..Shiv took a long breath " I m doing this for my dead brother ..he is no more in this world he robbed and did two murders but at the end he was sorry for what he did and this is what I only know …and after knowing this I m not going ruined his name more so it took all things at my self "………"my mom died when I was too young my brother brought me up for me he did this all how can I let any thing bad to him …..his name " when he looked gauri had tears in her big eyes …"why are u crying" ….gauri weep her tears " I haven't see some one so caring in my whole life nitaish's parents brough me up my father and mom died long time back and for that help they did I got ready to marry nitash.:…..shiv "why are ruining ur life u know what type of person nitaish is …he is a complete jerk …" they discuss this matter for some time …..then gauri left she come out wearing that sari and looking like an angel with open hairs ……they are now sitting opposite and stealing glances and avoiding the feelings for each other …just take birth in their hearts …a back ground song played

Mujey haq hai tujh ko jee bhar ke main deekhoon

Bas yoon hi dekhta jaaon mujey haq hai

Shiv turned around ….

Piya piya iya piya piya boley mera jia

Tumhey haq hai tumhey haq hai tumhey haq hai

Gauri wrapped herself completely in her shawl ……

Dhal rahi pagahal rahi ye raat dheerey dheerey

Barh rahi hai pyaar ki baat dheerey dheerey

Chooriyaan gunguna ke kiya kahein sajna

Ye Chooriyaan gunguna ke kiya kahein sajna

Shiv lay down on sofa in opposite direction …..and closed his eyes

Raat ki raat jagaoon mujey jagaoon

Chaand punam ka churaon mujey haq hai

Piya piya iya piya piya boley mera jia

Tumhey haq hai tumhey haq hai tumhey haq hai

Gauri also turned around and layed on sitter and closed here eyes …………

Kal subha tujh se main door chala jaonga

Ik pal ko bhi tujey bhool nahi paonga

Ye chehra ye muskaan ankhoon main bher ke

Ye chehra ye muskaan ankhoon main bher ke

Main teri yaad main tarpon mujey haq hai

Tujh se milney ko main tarsoon mujey haq hai

Piya piya iya piya piya boley mera jia

Tumhey haq hai tumhey haq hai tumhey haq hai

Candles blown out and night passed in dreams of each other ……………!

Next day they get up quickly and Shiv zoomed towards a port ….a village near by they stopped and a hut was already waiting for them ……."Shiv hold gauri's hand and took her inside "listen I have to go for few days but I promise I will be back ….for you …please understand me they will drop you at ur place ……." ..gauri "but don't go ….please Shiv " …..she had tears in her eyes "I will back for ur smile …I m going tonight ..and I will back in an hour I have lot to talk with you …after that I don't know where and in which circumstances we will meet " Shiv left the hut …gauri thought to herself "I also have to say and confess some thing Shiv ..I ….I love you ….yes I love you "

Nitaish who have already figured out where gauri and Shiv are reach there with whole police force he saw Shiv talking with some guys of village ……a boat near by is ready to sail …..nitaish yelled Shiv's name Shiv looked at him and try to run towards hut but nitaish thought he is running away …so he fired a shoot a bullet hurt his leg ………he screamed …gauri heard his voice and come running out of hut she yelled his name every thing seemed to be except gauri and Shiv ……..they both seemed black and white on screen else other things …….Shiv fall on ground in slow motion gauri runs towards him and then fall on her knees she took his name for the last time "shivvvvv " and then she become quite as snow ……..!

Gauri in her apartment …..sitting on sitter holding her legs in casual blue faded jeans folded below her knees and pink half sleeves top "love me" written with glittering blue over it ..(that's my fav casual wear of mine) when door bell rang she put her feets down and wear her favorite pink slippers (mine again lolz) her hairs are tied in untidy bun …..she opened the door …it was nitaish standing in black t-shirt and blue baggy jeans …"hi gauri "……..gauri didn't say any thing and make her way back allowing him to come "come in please" ….nitaish come and sit on comforty "gauri I need your signatures on these papers" gauri look at them " I am not going to sign …..it would be unfair .." ..nitaish is pissed off now .."but he kidnapped u "…….gauri looked at him " who said …I went on my own get it now leave" ………..nitaish " my guess was not wrong u r falling for that moron "……..gauri lost her temper "I m in love with him get it now leave"…….

Nitaish forcing Shiv to sign the papers he showed fake signatures of gauri to him but Shiv did not agreed to sign …..Nitaish pissed off left in anger …!

Gauri sitting in terrace when some one rings the door bell she opened the door …it was Shiv …she quickly pulled him inside .."what are u doing here did u break the jail …what if some one come and arrest u again …" she tried to touch him "don't u dare to touch me get it I hate u damn it …no I love u ….i love u crazy but u did to me u signed the damn papers …….but u know what ms .gauri alok ……I m free now ..to go any where and live ….any where I want …….and I m going spend ur life happily with nitaish good bye " …saying he left ……!

6 months later

gauri standing on rocks facing the huge sea ………..waves splashing water over her face she is wearing …….a black long sleeves lightly embroided top …embellished with beads …along with long colorful gipsy skirt (mine again ….see how poor I m giving them my own clothes lolz) ……her hairs are flying every where …on her face …when some one taps her shoulders …she turned around it is Shiv …….standing with all his good looks smiling …." Mujey haq hai ke main tum se ik baat kahoon "……..gauri looked at him "aur mujey haq hai ke main tumhari bakwaas sunoo …" they both laugh …."why u r back Shiv "………..Shiv looked at her .."to make sure u r happy with nitaish " …gauri turned around " I m happy all alone Shiv …" Shiv took a breath …" u r still single …" ………gauri "yes ..and what are u doing these days " …..shiv looked at her " I m doing acting ……I m working two or three serials getting good pay …enough for me to live the life in best way" ….gauri "not married yet "……Shiv looked at " yeah single and ready to mingle "….gauri cooked her brow " with whom ……" ……Shiv replied "with you "……gaur looked at him she has tears in her eyes …and she hugged him ….tightly "I love you Shiv …I love you " …..some one say …"can I save this Kodak moment in my camera " ..it was nitaish " ….smile please"…….they both smile Shiv kissed her cheeks and picture taken ……………..show end at happy note of " and they live happily after ever …"

THE END

WITH LOVE

AMNA😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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really nice... 😳 😳
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dat was awsome!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice Amna I like it

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Posted: 19 years ago
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That was sweet! I liked it 😳 😳 😳

~Jyoti 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hunnii.. fantastic story!!

u should think of writing another one!!

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i luved it...it was so cute

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