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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE:
thank you all for your responses...😊😊 but i need more responses...so i ll be waiting...😊.

i would like to make few things clear in the beginning itself...

1stly, Roshni alone has a dark past...ll reveal in later parts...
she 'pretends' to be an ideal wife, bhabhi and bahu in front of her in laws and their neighborhood.
therefore, no 1 other than arjun, sameer and shree know her true colours. so their family thinks she is perfect for arjun and expect them to give the waaris.

2nd, arjun DO NOT know who Riya is... he just know shree has a friend named Riya but never met her, nor did sameer.

3rd, Riya had huge crush on arjun and loves him. sudden marriage of arjun caught her off guard and she left to kolkata leaving everything behind.

4th, this is ariya story, and i ll take it with darker shade, villian being roshni.

5th, who want pm's please send me buddy request cos i ll be sending pms to those who are in buddy list😊

thank you for reading...
ll update soon...

-pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i hate roshini!!!!

how can she taunt sameer!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡!!! she had a past??? eagerly waitng to know dat!!

awww..riya!! 😭 😭 😭!!!

yay its ariyaa stry!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊!!!

update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice cs plzz do continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww... its an ariya story!!! i hate this roshini...

please continue.. n pm me too!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow so happy it's ariya story
w8ing for riya's entry & ariya meeting😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting cs...
roshni villain and taunts sam... how could she...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Nyc CS & Nyc Title.
plz contiue soon
Thx 4 PM.
plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
it's an ariya story :) so happy
so roshni is the villain...
can't wait to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hola amigos...
thanks for supporting this story... i am posting 1st part today... sorry for delay...

Part 1:

It was 5 in the morning ''

As usual Arjun got up from his sleep and detangled himself from roshni.

She looked so calm, devoid of that harshness, the expression of venom, bitterness in her'..

How much he wished her to be like this always'..

He immediately went to washroom to freshen up and then took a water bottle from fridge on his way out of house.

He met his two brothers at the door and all started for their morning jog'.

"wo uth gayi kya???"

"nahin sameer'"

"kya hua"

" najaane wo aisi kyun hai' I cant understand her at all' kabhi kabhi she behaves so gud and sometimes' I cant even understand her. I am trying hard to make this marriage work but she' I don't know sam' shaayad'. agar usne mujhse shaadi karne ke liye wo sab na kiya hota to shaayad, shaayad main usse pyaar kar pata' but she has lost all respect in my eyes'"

"don't lose hope Arjun' she will come around soon'."

Soon, sameer-shree and Arjun parted.

Arjun stood and taught small kids around cricket, his favourite thing to do in morning after 10 rounds of park, where as sameer and shree continued their jogging.

"bhai, aap ko bura nahin lagta jab bhi bhaabhi taane maarti hai??"

"lagta to hai.. but jitna hosakta hai utna ignore karta hun' pata nahin kyun wo aisi ban gayi' wo pehle to aisi nahin thi shree' she was soo good and caring lady' I think we should give her a chance.."

"aap Arjun bhai ko kyun nahin batate?"

"no shree' they are already facing problems in their marriage, forced and loveless for Arjun' this will worsen the condition' let them sort out their problem na'"

"as you say bhai'"

Then after some time they all move towards their house and yeah not home.

"aagaye tum teeno??? Chola baccho, jaldi jaake tayyar ho jao'.tab tak main breakfast laga deti hun'.."

Shree went to his mom and hugged his mumbling like a small kid.

"mammaaa'.. I mished you'. Me love you a lot'.." he then kissed her cheeks noisily'.

"chi, ganda baccha'' aisa koi karta hai kya???? Chal, jaldi jaake ready ho ja'. Tera favourite poha bana hai'"

"mamma'' you are best'..muuuaaahhh'."

"shree'' aur please beta aaj wo phati hui jeans mat pehan na' "

"maaa'. Wo phati hui nahin hai'. Its latest fashion'."

Arjun and sameer smiled that their mother and little brother.

"tum donon ko specially kehna hai kya??? Ya baba ko bulau?"

"jaa rahe hai maa'. Baba ko kasht mat do'"

"ha arju, roshni bahu ko utha dena'.. shayad uski tabeeyat theek nahin hai'"

"wo abhi tak uthi nahin kya????...iska matlab aap akele hi kitchen mein the subah subah???? App ko zyada der khade hone ya chalne se doctor ne mana kiya hai na????

Ma aapka leg abhi fully theek nahin hua''. Wait'.. ROSHNIII''ROSHNIII'.. NEECHE AAO NOW'.."




to be continued...
do lemme know how it is... as i have been saying, i will post updates when i get good amoun of responses from my readers... which i am hopefull i ll get...😊😊
so please do like and comment...
and i wont be sending pm's for this update...
who want a pm, please do comment...o pm me

Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update...!!!
love how arjun is trying to make this marriage work...!!!
but aisa kya hua ki she lost his respect?
shree and his mom convo was superb...!!!😉😆 love the he was talking like a child with her...!!! sooo cutee...!!!
continue soon...!!!
cant wait for the next part...!!!
plz pm me next time...!!! thx..!!😊
yupiee me first to comment...!!!😆😳
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago

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