new SS: Waaris. part 1 updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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SS: WAARIS

I don't why this idea popped in my mind. It all started when my aunt told me abt a regional language telly soap'. I thought why not use the same idea and create something???


I ll be continuing only after I get lots of likes and comments cos I need your precious responses be your appreciation o criticisms'. I know I need to improve myself, so please respond'.

I have written a small character sketch'.

Do give a try and lemme know'

Character sketch:

ACP Arjun Suryakant Raute: an efficient, super cop.😊 (tooo hot to handle)😉

Married to Roshni shekawat due to family pressure and do not really love her, heck not even close to liking her.

Second in command in ETF

ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod: arjun's best friend'😊.

ETF Chief. Strongly dislikes Roshni.

Stays with arjun's family as he is orphan.

Roshni Arjun Raute: an egoistic, boastful, I-am-all-superior- attitudes. Very rude by nature. Thinks she loves Arjun but is obsessed about him. always tease sameer abt him being an orphan.😡

Shreekant Raute: Arjun's younger brother. Computer geek'. Nerdy types' but adores both brothers. Strongly dislikes his bhabhi. But pretend to like infront of his parents. Best friend with chotu.

Chotu: shree's best friend. All muscle man.

Riya Mukherjee: shree' s good friend who is heart broken after arjun's marriage.

Aisha kapoor: ETF member, Sameer's GF'

Mr. & Mrs. Raute: Arjun and shree's mom-dad'. Also consider sameer as their own son'.

Eagerly Waiting for their waaris'.


how did you find this??? want me write more on this?

please do comment😊



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cs: above

part 1: pg 3

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Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay...
Me 1st to comment...
Very nice CS.
I so hate Roshni...
Sameer Rathod ko chirhati hai...
How dare she?????
I hate her...
Please continue,Pari.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Grt cs..
bt arni i love dem..
phew rosh negative oops..!
waiting to knw hw u describe
gud title
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic CS :) loved it
Arjun is married to roshni and sameer is an orphan
interesting concept
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc 1...Villian Roshni huuh?? Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting cs!
feeling bad for Riya and Sameer!
not a big fan of Rohhnin or arni!
waiting for more...
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I hate you roshni... How the hell can u tease or taunt my Sam... Arghh... I will kill u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice character sketch , continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Looking forward to this ff,please update soon and add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice cs
hate roshini, how dare she?
she married arjun forcefully & insult sam always
i didn't expect this from arjun's parents
pls give them a lesson & seperate her from arjun asap
poor riya she is heartbroken😭

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