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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: adeeba21
congratz 4 new thread.
nice update.
pehle first kiss now first date.
WOW!!
nice precap.

Originally posted by: Priya_0
Amazing update!! Looking forward to the next update 😃

Hoping to have you hooked! :)
Thanks! :)

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: luvbug
cute precap... loved it... but what abt payal... wasn't she coming bk home?

Oh she's gonna! Just wait thoda aur. ;)

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: avantika_2012
Awww. That was cute. You better make their date long and cute...with a lot of kisses! ;-)

Keep up the good work.

Ahem ahem... request taken. :D
Thanks!

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rush007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Story is superb so far,plz update the next chapter soon thanks.

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: LoveBS
Congratz on the new thread !!!! hope that you get well soon !!!
That was one of the sweetest and my favorite updates of cocktail !!!
Loved everything about it !! From khushi and lavanya to Arnav and khushi(obviously) !!!

That feeling of first love was described beautifully and also the way khushi is getting used to the physical attraction between them and welcomes it !!! The flashback part was soo cute !!! Loved how he understood that she wanted him to ask her !!!

Lavanya is just so adorable !!! Her anger at khushi for not telling her and then the teasing !!!
Lol !! She was thinking about their kids !!!! 🤣
The first date finally !!!! Omg love the precap !!!
She teasing him !! And the last line !!!! 🤣
Can't wait to read the next chapter !! Thnx for the pm !!!

Oh thank god my comic timing was at least good enough to make you laugh. I sincerely suck at it so thank you so so so much maliha! :) I hope the next chapter bags the position of being favourite. I am just too excited about it! 😉

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: ak_maggi
awww this is d second time i read this one! last nt i ve read it half in sleep n i almost foolishly slept imagining abt their kiss n d blush on their cheeks...😛😆 actually think i was all red imaginin actually lol😆

u know this phase cud ve been just written casually like askin on a date.. excitement...romantic it 'd ve been... yes! but not intricate... n thats y i say i love when u detail it wid grip!

Tht butterflies in ur stomach when u ve ur first kiss...n everytime d close proximity sets in after tht...d thin line of shy n bein comfortable...rt of bein playful...flirty...tht smal joy of watchin each other n feelin happy tht he/she belongs to u... sudden realization tht this is d oly thing u forgot to tel ur best friend ever coz somewer u got so carried away n it just happened to u...d eagerness n nervousness to be just perfect for each other.. to be loved n love!! isnt it d most beautiful feelin ever? Oh so beautifully written...

loved lav too... just so genuine n happy for her frnd finding her love.. loved al d teasin.. Khushi gettin nervous wid her... Ohh i am so lik Lav in tht context...ppl just push me out in romantic stituations for makin them red.. i love teasin 😛😆

n d awesome teaser! man how u love her... u wil know soon n much more😉

wel u know wat u did... u made my face look like a love sick puppy😳
he he...

You read this shit twice? Like succhi? 😆 Then please read the next chapter a lot more times, eh? *fingers crossed*

I always thought that too much detail is boring but whenever I sit down to write, the details just flow out of me like a river and I am worried later if in fact becomes boring for the readers. :D

Teaser se khush ho? Pictue abhi baaki hai mere dost! :D

I love you maggi, you know that! Muaaah!! :))