AarYa OS: 'do anjaane ajnabee'

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The car stopped outside a house, small yet a beautifully architecture house and out stepped the Scindiya family. The Dubey's welcomed them grandly.

Mr D: welcome ji welcome

Mr S: thank you ji

Mrs D: please come

Mrs S: your house is beautiful Mrs D

Mrs D: thank you

Mr D: arre aap log waha kyun kare hai, please come

Pankaj the eldest son of Mr and Mrs Scindiya, came along with his wife Vidhi and his two younger brothers Yash and Prateek. They had come to see Aarti, eldest daughter of Mr and Mrs Dubey for Yash.

Yash being the quiet and reserved type of person, was hesitant at this was his first time coming to see a girl, and too for marriage. Mr and Mrs Scindiya gave an envelope to Yash which had Aarti's picture after explaining to him why she is the best match for him and the family.

Yash kept thinking for hours, remembering what his parents had told him, Vidhi saw him and also understood his plight and to a certain extent made him understand the importance of marriage in life, and most importantly the importance of having a life partner. She told him to have a look at the picture just once, and he will have no doubt about this relationship at all.

After she left, Yash slowly pulled out the picture, and was truly mesmerised by what he saw, this girl was truly beautiful, and from her eyes he understood that what his parents and Vidhi Bhabhi had explained to him, she could truly be the one. He gave his consent to go and see the girl this coming on weekend.

****

They all were sat in the hall, enjoying the snacks< Mrs D went to fetch tea for everyone, and the men were talking away, whilst Yash was looking around here and there.

Prateek: Bro control your emotions, she will come down soon.

Yash: what!! I was not searching for her, I was looking around house

Prateek: Bhaiya I was talking about Aunty Ji (referring to Mrs D), look here she comes with the tea, who were you talking about?

Vidhi started to giggle, and Yash was embarrassed.

Do anjaane ajnabi

Chal bandne bandhan

Haay re..dil mein hai yeh uljhan

Milkar kya bole.. kya bole kya bole

Re milkar kya bole

In Aarti's room, a girl is shown getting ready in front of the mirror, she has worn a pink coloured saree and her long straight hair was making her look more beautiful.

Nayi umang..nayi khushi

Mehek utha hai aangan

Ghar aaye man bhavan

Milkar kya bole..kya bole kya bole

Re milkar kya bole

Back in the hall, everyone is still chatting away, and Mrs D along with Vidhi had gone up to bring Aarti downstairs. Mr D, was very impressed with Yash, the way he talks, his respect for elders and love for his family members, he knew that Yash was the right groom for his beloved daughter Aarti.

Bechaini..betaabi aaj mujhe yeh kaisi

Aaj hai jo pehle ne ti...dill ki halat aisi

Aankhon ko usi ki intezaar hai

(Yash sipping his tea and looking around, waiting to get a glimpse of her)

Uni ke liye..yeh roop yeh shringaar hai

(Aarti adorns eye liner into her eyes)

Dehkhi hai sirf tasveer hi.. aaj milenge darshan..

Haaye re..bharne lagi hai uljhan milkar kya bole

Kya bole kya bole, re milkar kya bole

Mrs D and Vidhi made their way down along with Aarti in between, the Scindiya's were bowled by her beauty, Yash could not move his gaze away from her, only after Prateek's taunt he looked away.

Roop ki rani aayi hai, jaise gagan se utarke

Mere liye kya mere liye aisa sajke savar ke

Mrs D made Aarti sit in between Mrs S and Vidhi and asked her some questions, Aarti answered them very well, she knew a lot about the household and cooking, Mrs S was very impressed.

Yash was lost in her voice, she sounded very melodious, even the Scindiya gents were impressed by her, she was truly deserving to be a Scindiya bahu, she had the good values, good saanskar instilled in her.

Whilst Aarti was talking to Vidhi, Prateek and Pankaj, she somehow knew that Yash was looking at her, she could feel his gaze on her, which made her blush. This blush did not go unnoticed by Yash as he in fact was lost in her.

Sabse chupake idhar udhar se

Mujhko hi dekha chor nazar se

It was a yes from the Scindiya's, they had no reasons what so ever to reject, even the Dubey's liked the Scindiya's and Yash.

****

Vidhi: Uncle Ji, if it's okay with you can Yash bhaiya and Aarti meet alone

Mr D: arre why not, after all after today their lives might take a big yet beautiful change..

****

Yash was waiting on the terrace with Prateek, he was nervous, he didn't know what he would say to Aarti, what he would ask her, how would he start the convo. Obviously everyone would expect the guy to start the conversation in these situations, but he had no clue what so ever.

Prateek: bhaiya what are you thinking? I know you're nervous, but trust me there's nothing to be nervous about.. usually it's the girls who are nervous in this situation but you bro??!!!

Yash: shut up chote!!!

Prateek: bhaiya here she comes

Yash: where

He started to look here and there but could not see her, Prateek bursted out laughing.

Prateek: you're this eager to meet her, but clueless about how to start talking to her

Prateek notices Vidhi coming with Aarti.

Prateek: bhaiya she's here

Yash (looking the other way): shut ut Prateek, I aint gonna fall for your tricks again

Prateek: bhaiya serioysly she's here with Bhabhi

Vidhi and Aarti were literally behind Yash now

Prateek: bhaiya they're here

Yash did not seem to move so Prateek pulled at his elbow and turned him around, Yash looked annoyed at Prateek but as soon as he saw Vidhi and Aarti he went blank

Prateek giggled and Vidhi understood what was going on.

Vidhi: Prateek bhaiya lets go, and leave these two alone to talk

Prateek (laughs): haha Bhabhi talk, and Yash bhaiya..not poss...

He speech was left incomplete as Vidhi pulled him away, leaving Yash and Aarti alone on he terrace to speak, whilst the others were downstairs talking away.

****

It's been ten minutes since they were left alone on the terrace and none of spoken a word, both of them were really nervous, Yash noticed Aarti plying with her hands, which clearly shows how nervous she was.

Baat labho pe hai rukhi

Tez dilo ki dhadkhan

Haayre kalke saajni saajan milkar kya bole

Kya bole kya bole re milkar kya bole

Aarti realises that she had brought up snacks and drinks for Yash, she passes the plate towards his side. Yash takes the plate and in the process their hand touch, both felt nervous yet liked the touch of each other. Aarti pulled her hand away slowly and Yash placed the plate back on to the table.

Yash takes a deep breath and makes his first attempt.

Yash: today, we're here to make a decision about our future lives, to be honest I was very nervous before I came and I still am, I dunno what to say, this is the first time I have to come to see a girl..

He took a break and started to talk again.

Yash:I think it's important that before we step into our future together, we get to know about each other's past..

Yash told Aarti about his educational life and his personal life, how he is very attached to his family, how they mean everything to him.

Yash: my family mean everything to me, and I have always wanted a life partner that will accept me and my family whole heartedly

He looked up towards Aarti who was impressed by his simple talks yet they had so much hidden meaning behind them and she seemed to have understood those unsaid words.

Now Aarti made her first attempt to speak out, she told him about her educational life, her personal life, how she's attached to her parents a lot, being the only child she had taken the responsibility of her parents, and how she is very scared of leaving them alone after marriage.

Yash respected her a lot after listening to her, he knew it was difficult for all girls to leave their families behind and accept a new family.

Aarti: I have always dreamt of a simply guy, who would love and respect my parents as I do..

Yash and Aarti had spoken out their heart, and they were happy that they did. Yash was back downstairs with his family and Aarti was upstairs in her room.

Mr S: Dubey Ji humar taraf se iss rishte ke liye haa hai, Yash ko Aarti pasand hai

Mr D: really, we are truly blessed.. that my daughter will be the bahu of your household.. thank you so much

Mrs S: bhaisaab, it's our good luck, that we are getting such a saanskaari daughter in law

Vidhi: Aunty ji, please go and ask Aarti for her decision please

Mrs D: ji

Mr and Mrs D made their way up, whilst the Scindiya brother hugged, they had been waiting eagerly for Yash to get married.

****

They had entered Aartis room, she was standing by the window looking outside, Mr D stood by the door and let Mrs D do the talking.

Mrs D: Aarti, they have said yes for the relationship, what is your decision?

Aarti kept quiet, she had tears in her eyes. Mrs D, notices and turns her around to face her.

Mrs D: beta why are you crying?

Mr D immediately made his way towards Aarti

Mr D: beta what happened?

Aarti (crying): I don't want to leave you behind, how will I live without you?

Mrs D: arre itni si baat pagal, every girl has to go away leaving their parents behind, this is the custom, and just think you're getting such a wonderful husband, and a wonderful family who will accept you as their daughter and love you a lot more than us

Mr D: beta of course we will miss you but we will be happy thinking that you are happy in your in laws, they are lovely people beta, and I am 100% sure they will always keep you smiling.

They had a family hug, Aarti was still sniffing a little, just the they heard a knock on the door and saw Yash standing there.

Yash: Uncle Aunty , can I talk to Aarti alone for 2 minutes please?

Mr D: sure beta

Mr and Mrs D left them alone, and Yash walked into the room. He saw how her room was decorated with pictures of her and her parents.

Yash: Aarti Ji, I have said yes to this proposal because after listening to you, I felt that you are the right person, the person who I have been waiting for. I said to you that my family mean everything to me, and I want a life partner who will accept my family whole heartedly, and my heart tell me that you will.

Yash: Aarti Ji, I am ready to love and respect your parents as much as you do, are you willing to accept my family whole heartedly?

Aarti looked up at Yash and saw the respect, innocence and love that she had always been looking for, she nodded yes and looked down smiling, Yash smiled at her.

They heard laughs and screams at the door and saw that Vidhi and Prateek were standing there smiling away.

Prateek (screamed): Aarti Bhabhi ne haa kardi

Vidhi came forward and hugged Aarti to which she reciprocated, Prateek gave Yash a tight hug, he was very happy for his brother.

****

They all sat in the hall again, Yash and Aarti sat next to each other and exchanged rings, everyone cheered and clapped away, they took the first step in their long ever lasting relationship.

Prateek took a picture of them, they looked truly made for each other.

The End

Please do like and comment. It's the first time I have written the lyrics of a song, so please excuse the spelling errors. Plus it's my first ever AarYa OS 😳

I hope you liked the OS, and I may right a epilogue, depends on the number of likes and comments.

Waheeda.

😊



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IsYaRoCHeR thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Waheeda!! 👏👏👏 It's too good and beautifully written re.. ⭐️

Haan ji.. I love Vivah movie re.. ❤️😳!! I'm totally in daydreaming after reading this!

The dialogues were too good.. 👍🏼!!

Thank you so much for writing it out! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really waheed love this vivah os version on aarya
they are trylu anjaane ajanbee yet they are bonded as soul mates😳😳😳
really loved it waheeda all i can say love your vivah version in punar vivah flavour👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Wow Waheeda!! 👏👏👏 It's too good and beautifully written re.. ⭐️


Haan ji.. I love Vivah movie re.. ❤️😳!! I'm totally in daydreaming after reading this!

The dialogues were too good.. 👍🏼!!

Thank you so much for writing it out! 😃


thank you so much Isya 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: RA17

really waheed love this vivah os version on aarya

they are trylu anjaane ajanbee yet they are bonded as soul mates😳😳😳
really loved it waheeda all i can say love your vivah version in punar vivah flavour👏


thanks a lot dear 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i like vivha, shahid n amrita rao cute couple
like your dialoge bagi gr8 1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: gafulu14

i like vivha, shahid n amrita rao cute couple

like your dialoge bagi gr8 1


thanks 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww Waheeda, it was really cute.
Totally reminded me of Vivah when Shahid comes to see Amrita, I mean Prem come to see Poonam 😆
The nervousness, awkwardness, they were all very much present.
I really liked to read this on AarYa, with your touch to it.
Thank you :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it! i just love the movie Vivah, its one of my all time favorite.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zahra15

Aww Waheeda, it was really cute.
Totally reminded me of Vivah when Shahid comes to see Amrita, I mean Prem come to see Poonam 😆
The nervousness, awkwardness, they were all very much present.
I really liked to read this on AarYa, with your touch to it.
Thank you :))


thank you Zahra

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