***'Tere Naal Pyaar Hogaya*(GeetMaanff)lastPart XV

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zafarahim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

thnk u 4 the link yaar ... will surely read it... tk care...😛

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: dreamy
superv ...

Glad u liked it

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
Bookmarking :)

Happy that u want to read this one

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Just read the whole story :D
Loooved it.
The punjabi dialogues cracked me up hehe.
Maan was totally irked by her. But loved the transition how he fall for her. Geet brought him out of his dark past.
I was nearly crying reading about avneet. But maan understood geet.
Aww he was scared about her labour pains. Shooo sweet.
Thank you for this lovely story :)

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: sonu4ever
Just read the whole story :D
Loooved it.
The punjabi dialogues cracked me up hehe.
Maan was totally irked by her. But loved the transition how he fall for her. Geet brought him out of his dark past.
I was nearly crying reading about avneet. But maan understood geet.
Aww he was scared about her labour pains. Shooo sweet.
Thank you for this lovely story :)

Hi thanks for reading the story and commenting...glad u liked those dialogues...my friend humanity has helped me for that..u enjoyed reading makes me feel very happy ..thanks for encouraging my writing...Tc

Bhoomi

Edited by bhoomikauttam - 12 years ago