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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here is a poem I have written to depict Kumud's feelings towards Saraswati Chandra...

I am in love ...
With your heart and soul...
For in your eyes...
I can read you as a whole...

You were in my imagination...
Little did I know...
There could be someone...
So pious and so pure...

If destiny had decided...
What I could foresee...
The man whom I would love...
And who would love me...

It doesn't matter whether...
You're far away from me...
We shall bridge this distance...
For the whole world to see...

You may decline the proposal...
But wait till you hear from me...
So that you do not regret later...
The lovely relationship which could be...

I am meant for you...
You are meant for me...
Together we shall weather the storms...
And sail through the sea...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks...
Posted: 12 years ago
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R u a poet?
Seriously tell me
Dis is FABULOUS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tishana

R u a poet?

Seriously tell me
Dis is FABULOUS...


Thank you dear...I love poetry...shayari...but not sure how many are well versed in Hindi so stuck to an English one...

Thanks a lot!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anu_4_U

Here is a poem I have written to depict Kumud's feelings towards Saraswati Chandra...


I am in love ...
With your heart and soul...
For in your eyes...
I can read you as a whole...

You were in my imagination...
Little did I know...
There could be someone...
So pious and so pure...

If destiny had decided...
What I could foresee...
The man whom I would love...
And who would love me...

It doesn't matter whether...
You're far away from me...
We shall bridge this distance...
For the whole world to see...

You may decline the proposal...
But wait till you hear from me...
So that you do not regret later...
The lovely relationship which could be...

I am meant for you...
You are meant for me...
Together we shall weather the storms...
And sail through the sea...





Awesome dear 👏

Do write more :=))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow !! This is so beautiful hun ! Do write more <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nicely written. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsum...loved it...u should seriously write more poems...keep it up!!😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I thank all of you for your appreciation...

Sure - will write more...

Thanks again
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's so beautifully written :)

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