Ransom my Heart

I am back with another story, well I am having a bit of a writer's block on "Arshi's Pregnancy" I am mixing this with a book I read a few years ago... It has been bugging me for a while, I just had to write it down... R&R
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Prologue
Khushi walked into her room that she shared with her sister. But as soon as she walked into the room, she wished she never came. It was her sister, Payal. As much as she loved her, she wasn't in the mood to put up with her drama Again! Khushi looked at her, she was beautiful, she envied her sisters looks. She had the looks, she mixed in with all the Indian girls, beautiful dark hair and those innocent dark chocolate brown eyes. MUCH better than my odd light brown hair and hazel eyes Khushi thought to her self. She always felt left out when she hanged out with her friends, she always felt like the odd one out.

"Khushi? Is that you?" Payal asked dramatically.
"Yes jiji it's me," she replied.
"Oh, thank god!! Khushi I need your help!!"
"Oh boy, here we go again," she said more to her self.
"No Khushi! This time it is a matter of life and death!" She pause, "Okk so there is a guy... And we have been seeing each other for awhile now- "
"Wow! Jiji? Who is he? How come I never knew?!"
"He is amazing, his name is Akash, his eyes- "
"Get to the point!" Khushi said cutting in impatiently.
"Well... I have been sick almost every morning, and well-"
"No way!" Khushi said not wanting to believe what she was hearing.
"Yes way!" Payal said bursting into tears again.
"Our brother is going to kill you then me!" Khushi said without thinking.
"Oh I am a horrible person!" Payal said crying even louder.
"Shh. Ahh. Um. Jiji. Okk what do I have to do to help you?"
At that exact moment Payal stopped crying and explained her idea.
"It's not going to work!" Khushi said straight away.
"Oh please! You have to try!" Payal whined.
"Okk. Fine. Only for you."

Just a little extra info: This story is historical romance-ish. Khushi is different looking to how normal Indians look- not that it isn't pretty :) she feels kinda left out... She was married... To whom, well u have to wait. For those of u who have read "ransom my heart" by meg Cabot... Well it is going to be similar, but changed so it fits with the Indian history kinda thing :)
Don't forget to review.
If there is any grammatical errors, please point it out :)
Ohh and make sure to let me know whether I should carry it on??
I will send pm's tomorrow, can't be bothered right now:P

😊👏 i loved it great start please do continue!

intrstg cont soon
thanx 4 the pm😊

very nice start
continue soon

wonderful start
update soon!!!
thanks for pm

good start, wonder what Payal has asked Khushi to do?
update soon and thanks for PM

I really like this concept. I haven't read ransom to my heart so I'm even more excited to see how the events plan out. One small request; could you maybe put a space in between the dialogues please? I really don't mean to be picky but my eyes and brain are a bit funny so it takes longer to read dialogues when it's all bunched together. Other then that I can't wait to read the next update.

Sounds interesting! 😊 Update soon :)

U should continue! Nice start