ff: Kismat/part 3 pg 14

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This fan-fic is going to continue from Thursday's episode.
Brief Recap: Dadi gives Gauri a pink sari and tells her to wear it for the dinner party that night for Shiv and Gauri. Ipshita gives Gauri a pic of Gauri and Shiv's marriage. Gauri thinks about the moments with Shiv since when he stood up for her. Gauri finds out the truth about Shiv's plan to get Gauri out of the house.

Now:
Gauri stares at Shiv with tears in her eyes not being able to digest the truth. Shiv smirks after a while and goes close to her and circles her.
S- Ye meri chal thi… Meine kaha tha na... Do chal (holds up two fingers)... ye meri dusri chal thi... kasi lagi?

When Gauri doesn't answer he continues.
S- Mujhe pata he ke pariwar walle tumhe kuch nahin kahenge... par tum khud uss gaar se nicklongi...
While Shiv is saying all this, Gauri is hearing the words of Shiv on the projecter over and over again. Gauri closes her eyes and holds her head. Shiv doesn't pay attention to her. Gauri finally faints. Shiv sees this and picks her up in his arms and places her in his car. When he reaches the hospital, he admits Gauri. After a while, the whole family is imformed and they come as well. No one is allowed to go into the I.C.U room until the doctor comes out.
N- Ye kasse hua?
S- Aganak Gauri behush hogi thi...

The doctor come out and everyone goes to him.
N- Doctor... Gauri kasi hai?
Dr.- I'm sorry... par vo..
D- Vo kya?
Dr.- Vo coma mein chaligye hai..... ugar usse koi emotion nahin hota hai ek mahin mein.... to vo is duniya mein nahin rahiygi... I'm sorry...

S- Kya mein usse mil shakta hon?
Dr.- Haan... par sirf uske pati usse mil shakte hain.... or koi nahin...

The doctor walks away. Dadi and Nikila break down. Shiv walks into the room staring at Gauri. She was on teh bed with her eyes closed and had her hands to her side. Shiv looked at her and couldn't believe that his little mistake put such a big risk to Gauri's life.

S- Mujhe nahin pata tha ke is saach se tumhare jaan ja shakti the....
Slowly Gauri's eyes open as she stares at the cieling.
S- Mujhe maaf kar do Gauri....

Gauri doesn't respond at all. Shiv is shocked.
S- Kuch to bolo...
Gauri keeps on staring. Shiv starts to get angry.
S (yelling)- Gauri kuch bolo.... damn it!

Everyone runs in to see why Shiv was screaming and they all see Gauri in this state and can't take it.
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How do you like it so far?

Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow itsreally good! 👏 do cont...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's wonderful!lookin forward 2 da next part!

X.o.X.o.---Jasmine---x.O.x.O
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good i like it.......plzzz keep continue 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome start cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice 👏

Love Leena 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is great, please contiunue soon!!! 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was great 👏 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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marvelous!now siv will fall in luv..........anywayz..awesome job ....great part....plsss continue soon! 👏

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