A KISS ON THE BEACH swaron OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am sry guys...as i wasnt able to give proper credits...i have deleted this OS...!
Edited by safi_kisha - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was a very sweet story...i liked it a lot...keeep writing...your posts make my day..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

that was a very sweet story...i liked it a lot...keeep writing...your posts make my day..


i am glad it does...:) thanks a lot!!😊
but sadly i have decided to quit writing...these 3 OSes will be my last OS!
but thanks for the compliments!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovd it..
Lovd it..
Lovd it..
Sach me morning good ho gayi..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was nice os
nishat too cute n scared to think he kill her
swaron n nishant bond was fab
sharon passind her day with them nd enjoy fullest
nishant feel sharon as his sis bt swayam nt
on his bday nishant lowered his head nd swayam kiss her was amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os & beautiful story👏
Swayam was very loving , caring & protective brother i totally loved his character
Nishant is so cute & naughty brother
Sharon fainted only after knowing that she is bleeding😆 that to a small wound.
Loved how Sharon's relationship with both the brothers gradually increased comfortably
Finally Swayam confessed his feeling through a kiss which pours all his love care for her.
Why are you quitting?😲 you are a fabulous writer please don't quit writing .

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's amazing OS . U have portrayed swayam and sharon beautifully. Loved The way how sharon was comfortable with swayam and his brother. I loved nishant too , he was do sweet and cute and swayam and nishant duo was really very sweet ... Swayam's confession through kiss. .. It was too good . I have read ur many works you are an awesome writer plz don't quit writing 😭 u have amazing talent of writing 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Safi u r amazing!!:D
Superb!!
Luvd it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Reserved.. (: Waiting for the other two eagerly! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Are you kidding me?!..like seriously Saf?!..This is one of the awesomest OS i have ever read. From writing style to flow everything is done perfectly. Well done mate :). Will make you write more OSs now *evil grin* :D

Exams started,thus a short comment :)

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