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Posted: 19 years ago
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Dreams of a future...
Harboured deep within...
Emotions,heartfelt...
To be voiced out...
In the unspoken language ,
Awaiting the moment..
Of confession...
Shall remain , buried ...
For the moment , has passed by...

The dawn of the dream...
Seems now...
Shall never see the day...
For dusk has set in...

Benighted life, she sees ahead...
As the ghosts of the dark..
Mock her ..

Benumbed , devoid of will..
She stands in darkness...
Seeking answers no more...
For lone she stands ...
In the land of nowhere...

-Sareeta

- An attempt to pen Gauri's predicament, after the truth was revealed..

(Copyright: Sarita Chitrapu. 2006-2010 .All Rights Protected) - For lines penned above..

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Posted: 19 years ago
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u are just too good sarita!....wow!...

i really like ur verses..(verses not poems 😆)...

wish i cud write like you do..but that's ok...

that's whats unique about you...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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di its as usual fantastic but why so negative????
lets all hope and pray for shiv gauri union.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow! that was good 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wwoooooooooooooowwwwwwwwww!ek din mein itni emotional baatein.too good 👏 ...........when r u publishing all ur works?????make me the cheif guest so tht i get a free copy 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushix

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u are just too good sarita!....wow!...

i really like ur verses..(verses not poems 😆)...

wish i cud write like you do..but that's ok...

that's whats unique about you...

Awww, thanks a lot Khushi!! Yeah verses they are!! 😆

Thank you so so so very much for the kind words! I am really floored, and totally speechless.. now!! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: himali_kokate

di its as usual fantastic but why so negative????
lets all hope and pray for shiv gauri union.....
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Thanks a lot Himu..!!! Ofcourse SHiv and Gauri will be together.. Ekta Mai unko juda karde, usse pehle, unhe milaana tho padega na? 😆

As for the negetivity, it not out and out negetive, par a moment in time, when she is directionless and she sees no hope...I have jus taken that instant , when she looks at Shiv and feels totally lost... for all that she ever sought, has betrayed her...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrystalBue345

Wow! that was good 👏 👏 👏

Thank you so much!! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeti_saarrthi

wwoooooooooooooowwwwwwwwww!ek din mein itni emotional baatein.too good 👏 ...........when r u publishing all ur works?????make me the cheif guest so tht i get a free copy 😆

Awww, preeti, thanks a lot dear!! Ab serial mein itna emotion tha kal... ki bas dil se emotions ka bhahaav teher hi nahin raha....

Hmm, publishing would happen some time early next year.. Jan- Feb...

Tu bhi na... free copy! ?!! 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow sareeta uz gt talent girl 👏 👏 👏
dats brilliant 😛

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