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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vgedin


Doesn't the Communist Manifesto state - "religion is the opium of the people" ? But what you are quoting makes a lot of sense, that Communism in itself is a kind of religion. And like any other religion, it has huge gaps and cracks - anyone with a selfish motive, which is almost everyone especially those in the position of power, will take advantage of those gaps. Power and money would together would make the headiest opiate of all.

Quit goofing around, woman! We want updates! :D



Precisely! Communism is quite misunderstood here and their functions are much different from what their original intentions are. Here they are not so different from other party only that their manifestos remain the same after years.

Somehow got myself into watching too many Simpsons episodes last night and updates completely escaped my mind :-)!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashi12

TO SAY I'M SHOCKED WOULD BE AN UNDERSTATEMENT! I'm literally stumped reading dis ff..
This high voltage politics is hard to digest.. Srsly it literally knocked me off my wits;)..

Srsly do tell me are you a lawyer? Or hav u been a political science student.. Or smethn closely related?.. Dis deep knowledge sureluy doesn't comes frm the search engine.. ;)

i can hardly belive all dis is a piece of pure fic.. I wud rather love to know what inspired you to write such a fiction?..

I am neither :-) I just started reading old articles and it re-invoked my interest in politics.

N rather a question wich is bugging me quite frm very start i.e. Why arnav n khushi as leads? I mean dey are not in love.. Not evn remotely havin any attrcton or smethn! Yet u hav the charecters payal, aakash n Smj.. Why?

Would you have opened this post had it not been for "ArHi" in its title? I have a story and one needs faces to imagine them. I am facilitating the process by giving them names you can recognize. Besides, why is it important for them to be in love to make a story work? May be I am missing something from your questions.

I get it both of dem are besties but nothn more abt wat dey feel for each other is expressed.. Except for few gestures! I know dis fic. Is above all the romance n all stuff but still what stands up out of ArHi relation?..

Its not above romance but it isn't about romance. I am not writing about relations here and have no intentions to write either, For that there is a different story written and posted :=) What they are here are friends and people fighting for a greater cause.


Moreovr whys arnav wid lav? His motive abt her is not revealed till yet.. Cuz as far as i can get he is not evn remotely interested in someone like lav!..

He likes Lavanya for what she is. He likes her and that's why he is with her. I don't think I have mentioned he is disinterested or dislikes her. It's just that, she is not his first priority..


I get it about Arnav n khushi's plan.. I do get wat aakash has been tryin to do.. But how cum in the last only part did the elders suddenly took arnav n khushi as threats? Did dey hav airs abt there motives? But few chps back dey weren't evn sure if both of dem were evn alive! N as far as i've read shukla or malvika didn't report to dem abt dis matter!..

Arnav is Shyam's son. Its the subtle implication in previous chapters which has led to this conclusion. Arnav is capable of destroying someone's political career and they all know that. They know that he has been in touch with Meera Nanda. They know that he has read the manifesto. They aren't assuming Arnav and Khushi are dead. There have been no statements or claims made so they are going ahead with a belief that they are alive. No, Shukla and Malvika haven't reported it yet.


N one more thng dat was bugging me was malvika's theory.. She thot at a point dat maybe threats were given by some other grp n they were abducted by the other grp.. If the second grp were to kidnap or kill so maybe dey are the ones following the second part of shyam's manifesto??..n maybe dose were who are involved in dhnanjay's case.. So maybe Bhanupratap is involved wid dem!..

That's something you will have to wait to find out :=).

N one more thngy does arnav knws wat eldere did to his father? ..

What have the men done? We don't know that yet :-)

N how cpme the news of rathore being shot? Wen it wasn't so evn!

He is a politician. Its his prerogative to play games. More on this in next chapter.

N dere is smnthn really cheesy abt imran! Dunno why..?8-)

wud love to read nxt chp since the avengers are back:D..



Thanks a lot for the comment :=) I hope I have answered all your questions satisfactorily.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love this story, but I swear to god it's the first story I've read here that makes me feel dumb 😆 I'm not ashamed to admit it!

So Arnav and Khushi are back playing this group with the help of some other individuals who are privy to many of their dirty secrets. Am I right?

So these people didn't even know who Shyam was...do they know he was Arnav's father? Is that common knowledge? Either Shyam was murdered or committed suicide - I'm tending towards the former...

As for Communism and religion...for communism to work it requires the same deep held faith that religion commands, otherwise it falls apart - my two cents. They are mutually exclusive at first glance but can inspire the same fervour...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moomin4455

I love this story, but I swear to god it's the first story I've read here that makes me feel dumb 😆 I'm not ashamed to admit it!


So Arnav and Khushi are back playing this group with the help of some other individuals who are privy to many of their dirty secrets. Am I right?

So these people didn't even know who Shyam was...do they know he was Arnav's father? Is that common knowledge? Either Shyam was murdered or committed suicide - I'm tending towards the former...

As for Communism and religion...for communism to work it requires the same deep held faith that religion commands, otherwise it falls apart - my two cents. They are mutually exclusive at first glance but can inspire the same fervour...



Thanks! Aw, come on, don't say that... :-)

Yes, Arnav and Khushi will have to work fully knowing that Sampat is aware of most if not all of their plans... they don't know how much he knows but they are going with the assumption that all the info they have is compromised.

They all know who Shyam is..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Boredom... Feel free to use!!


Edited by RockBarbie - 12 years ago
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Chapter 31:

"I heard you were shot," Arnav said the moment he entered the room and saw the healthy looking politician.

"Three shots were fired at me during my morning walk Arnav. Thankfully the shooter was lousy at his job," Rathore said nonchalantly. Arnav looked at Shukla with an unreadable expression and turned quickly before it could be interpreted.

Along with Arnav, Khushi, Shukla, Malvika and Payal had walked into Rathore's study. Rathore looked at the entire brigade and smiled wryly.

Noting Rathore's smile Arnav offered an explanation. "We all need to sit together and talk. And probably plan for coming weeks." Rathore couldn't read Arnav then.

"Where were you all these days?" Gupta exclaimed ignoring Rathore-Arnav exchange. "Where did you find them ACP Singh?"

"Arnav and I were being held by a radical group father. They, with their misplaced sense of judgments and notions of changing the world believed that Arnav and I shouldered the weight of the political world. Those people released us today." Khushi said glancing at all the lawyers. Sampat met her gaze without hesitation. Khushi added, "I guess we aren't needed for their cause anymore." She smiled inwardly when Sampat blinked.

"You are purposefully being obtuse," Gupta frowned. Khushi shrugged.

"What did the man want from you?" Arnav asked looking at Rathore. Rathore looked confused. "The man who called himself Shyam Manohar Jha," Arnav added helpfully.

"How could you possibly know that…?" Rathore trailed. By looking at Shukla, he knew immediately. Clearing his throat Rathore said, "He wants me to support his agenda by giving my support after elections. But when I asked him which party he represented, he didn't say anything."

"What was his bargaining chip?" It was Payal who asked that question. Payal had already had a run in with Rathore before and she had an idea what was going on. They weren't naive to believe that some guy could walk in to residence of a powerful politician and bully him.

"I am a politician Payal with a long standing history with various people in this business. He just dug up some unwanted skeletons from my closet and threatened an expose – something that should be left buried." Rathore kept his voice neutral.

"What is it?" Khushi asked leaning back on sofa and sipping on tea. There was challenge in her eyes which Rathore couldn't endure.

"They are skeletons Khushi – let's just leave it at that," Rathore said holding her stare. He didn't see the discreet glance exchanged by Khushi and Arnav as soon as he turned to look at Gupta.

"Do we know who these people are?" Arnav asked the room.

"I did some digging after I last spoke to Rathore sir. There have been many such meetings around the country where offers were made. Separate offers have been made for party workers, MPs and high ranking administrative officials of the parliament." Payal said pulling out photographs. "Samaj Kalyan Party isn't spared either." She handed the stack to Khushi who looked skimmed through the photos quickly. "And then there are disappearances," Payal said.

"What do you mean?" Arnav asked already knowing where this was going.

"Supreme court judges, lawyers known for their integrity, humanitarians, bureaucrats, diplomats, corporate lobbyists, scientists, advisors, police officers…anyone who is on top of their field or is known for bipartisanship is gone; they are either on a very long vacation or relocated to different country or retired completely. It's weird and scary at the same time," Payal added for good measure.

"Is it possible they were threatened to retire?" Arnav asked. Like us? The words were unsaid but it hung in air between them.

"It's possible. No one is ready to talk about their resignations. They are all seemingly happy and pursuing different jobs or just enjoying their retirement." Payal replied.

"On one hand we have shuffling of ministers, MPs and MLAs and on the other hand officials are threatened to resign." Arnav said. "Two groups with different agenda?" He asked turning to look at Khushi. They already know what Akash was doing so it wasn't too difficult to piece it together.

"How can you say that for sure?" Sampat asked quietly.

Arnav didn't respond immediately. Keeping his voice neutral he replied, "It's an intellectual guess sir by looking at the way they have operated." It was he who wanted to know everything and didn't care much about revealing to the lawyers and the politician. "Of course I could be completely wrong about it," he said in the same neutral tone.

"It is possible that you are being threatened by one of these groups and it isn't the one which abducted you," Shukla said to Arnav. "We looked at the website where threats were posted. Your abductions weren't made public for couple of days and in those days Khushi continued to receive threats. So the radical group which kidnapped you isn't the ones who are threatening you. Your theory of two groups holds good." Shukla finished. "And then there is Shyam Manohar Jha."

"Excuse me?" Arnav asked, genuinely surprised.

"I have found at least seventeen people by the name Shyam Manohar Jha between the ages of thirty and forty claiming to be journalists. The man who visited this property was also carrying same credentials." Shukla said.

"That's strange," Khushi frowned. "It almost sounds like a cult following for the man." She observed. "Did he have that kind of following when he was alive or right after his death?" Khushi asked her father. Gupta bristled at the direct question.

It was Saini who replied. "Khushi, Shyam had many followers and some of them were right extremists. With the dicey political arena, several extreme right supporters sincerely believed in Shyam's published works. I was a political consultant to the emerging Janata Party back then and I have seen people openly accepting some of Shyam's agendas without as much as a run of the mill opposition deposition. Shyam's political analogy was majorly anti-government, pro-religion and pro-labor. Indira Gandhi invested largely into industrialization and labor unions have traditionally had issues with overt usage of machinery. All this added up making several diverse political groups accept his ideology," Saini said.

"We believe that Krishna Kumar and Prasenjit Sarkar could be two people running the extremist group." Gupta said.

"That doesn't sound right. A communist and a religion extremist coming together to fight for a singular cause is never heard of," Arnav flatly refused.

"Don't be too sure of the definitions you have learned in textbooks about people embracing a specific ideology Arnav," Saini said lighting up a cigarette. "We are far from following definitions to a T. What everyone here wants here is – power. People have reinterpreted classical definitions of communism and socialism for their benefits Arnav and we are after all power-mongering mortals; we are no slaves to ideology. We believe what works for us," he said closing his eyes and allowed the smoke to travel through his lungs slowly.

"What makes you so sure that it's them?" Arnav asked.

"Intellectual guess work," Saini said mockingly. Arnav smiled humorlessly at that.

"What about the other group?" Rathore asked. "The ones who kidnapped you two," he said pointing to Arnav and Khushi.

Khushi shrugged. "They could be anyone sir. Their agenda could be as simple as resisting the government to, like the other group, a cult with specific following."

"What is it that you are not telling us?" Gupta asked staring at the two.

"I don't see why you are thinking that I am hiding something father. We were locked away in a property where we couldn't hear anything of the outside world. We were giving food and bed and were mostly left alone." She said raising her voice a little.

"It's possible that our abduction was a mistake." Arnav said cottoning on Khushi's thought process. She was keeping their abduction as generic as possible so as to keep it from the group but Sampat knew exactly what they were talking anyway. It didn't matter how much he knew anymore. He was part of all the conversations from past few weeks and stripping him off wouldn't help them in any way. It would only complicate things further.

Rathore interjected. "So we have two groups eying for political power in the country. Why now? Why are they playing it out in this election?"

No one responded for several minutes. Khushi chuckled mirthlessly. "It's because the people of this country are tired. They are tired of waiting for politicians to fix the country but in return they see the country going down the hell hole even more with every election. Political parties and media together have successfully eluded people of the rights that they have by spewing out garbage about Bollywood or Cricket or some scandal. The country gets scarred over and over again thanks to people like us. So a rebellion, if that's what it is, was inevitable. This is democracy Rathore," Khushi's voice was hard and she had dropped the politeness a mile away. "Democracy still exists in this country in a fragile form in men and women with integrity towards service. People have been systematically robbed of their intellectual capability, moral responsibility and sincere feeling of belonging. You should be thankful that these groups haven't come together to over throw current government or organize a military coup. Then the so called political power that all you politicians are after is going to be the noose around your neck; higher the power, vulnerable target you are," she added bemusedly seeing how color drained from Rathore's face.

The silence that followed in the room after Khushi's speech in the room was deafening.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Glad dat you replied!

Anywys yupp amybe i wudn't have read did if it weren't arhi present in here.. But somehow i feel ki ab it doesn't matters dat dey love each other or not cuz you are right this story is for the greater good!..

N you said that you read smethn old n ir re-envoked your interest in politics and you are writing dis masterpiece, believe me if you actully wud take up law or political science you can blow our heads off:D..

So finally comes the times wen thngs are gonna get a li'll clear..

N samapt got the hint pretty well! The SMj mystery is gettin interesting, i hardly think dat its smethn Aaksh cud do, he as taken up more of a legal way or else Arnav or khushi cud have sensed it .. It looks more like the other group is involved in it!

I wonder wid now Arnav n Khushi back in attack wat wud Rathore do? He can't tell them wats the bargain! N if sampat had a clue aabout wat is his son upto.. Why didn't he do smethn abt it? Or was he clueless?

N khushi ki speech! True so damn true..

Update soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey i jst started wid story... its sounds grt... ur writing is refreshing and its good to see the characters against a different backdrop... am looking frwrd to read it all soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
They've joined the dots now, more or less. And Khushi's diatribe was scathing - it was rousing but not emotional. It reminded me of Naseeruddin Shah's dialogues in A Wednesday :) True words.

Does this SMJ cult know about the secret of his death ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..really nice..😊

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