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I'm so sorry its late.. have been having writers block for soo long..
this update may sound horrible but bare with me.. they will get better


Chapter 25

Flashback

Geet smiled to herself, excitement shone all over her face as she was excited to go to school.'Finally' she thought'ill be in school with bhai and bhaiya.' Radhe had stood with Daadima and Maa and he smiled to geet. Seeing the happiness on her face was so good. he knew she was excited to go school but the fear was slowly spreading though his veins. How was he going to tell her that she wouldnt be with him whilst shes at school. Actually she wouldnt be with anyone of her brothers in school. The thought had scared him.

He looked at Daadima whose face was brimming with tear yet showing excitment for her one and only granddaughter. She was definately going to miss her laughter echoing through the house during the day. She look at Radhe who looked at her back, both feeling the same thing for geet. Fear!!!

Geet walked upto Radhe and held his hand. 'Challe Veerji' she said. Radhe just looked at her and wanted to tell her that she wouldnt be with him. That even though she is excited to go to school to be with her brothers she wouldnt see him at all. He looked down at her and smiled.

Radhe - Geetu you know na, that ur going to school to learn?? Radhe wanted to break it to her gently.

Geet - Haan Veerji Pata Hai. Aap ho no meri saath agar teacher ne shout kiya toh aap bhi shout kijiye acha veerji she said showing him her big smile.

Radhe was stood smiling at her. there was no way he could leave her in the classroom on her own. He had to go into the school with her and ease her gently.Hopefully she'd understand once she see's the other students parents leaving their child behind. She was so excited that she didnt see her brotheres worried expression.

With a smile she held her veerjis hand and walked out with him and sat in the car. Whilst in the car she kept talking about how excited she was to be going to school, how she couldnt wait to make new friends and be with her brother. whilst she was talking Radhe was sitting there with a sad expression. his little girl, his Angel was growing up, she was slowly doing things for herself. All of a suddent the car came to a stop getting Radhe out of his thoughts.

He got out slowly and waited for geet. he held her hand and walked to the door when he saw Rahul and Sameer waiting. Both radhe and geet stopped. Geet looked up at her brother and smiled.

Geet - veerji look bhai aur bhaiya bhi yahan hai.. chaliye na unke paas. ab babaji ne meri sunli mein meri theno bhaiyo ke saath school jauengi.. she said excitedly
. she ran to her brothers smiling and hugged them both..

Sameer - chal gudiya ab hum sab tumko tumhara class dikenga hmm..
geet and her brothers went to the class.. she looked around and saw the alphabets on the wall, cartoon characters numbers and faces.. also there was lots of toys to play with. she let got of their hands and hugged them
and said bhai aap log jao mein aapko baad mein milengi hmm. byee and ran off...

Flashback ended.


Radhe felt a hand on his shoulder breaking his thoughts. There stood the girl of his life .. his sister, Daughter and best friend.. she knelt down and cupped his face in her hands.
Geet- Veerji aap asey udaas kyun ho.. aap ko pata hai na ke aap ke gudiya ko acha nahi lagta...


Radhe -mein baas soch raha tha ki meri gudiya kesi bari ho gayi hai.. jab mein tumhe school leh kar gaya tha tab mujhe daar tha ki tum akeli kaise raho gi phir jab tumne saab toys dekhe phir hum sab ko kaisa kaha aap jao.. us din mujhe daar tha ke meri gudiya itne bari ho gayi hai ke vo mujse se door chali jai gi..


Geet had tearsforming and felt immense love for her brother she immediately hugged him and said main ab bhi aapki gudiya hoon aur mein aapse door nahi jaoengi x


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Hiii...welcome bck...its been long...Awesome update...Loved it...i've alwayz loved da brother sister bond...sooo sweet...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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awesome update i loved the brother and sister bond and the flash back was so sweet awesome update thanks for the pm

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