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123pritha

@123pritha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

sorry for late comment

it was amazing

i like the convoy of rathod and arjun at sameer's home and i like the sameer's concern for tanvi so much

and arjun teasing rathod and after that rathod told that "Tu rukh, jab Riya bhi..." and after read this line i am happy that they both friend's are now full on masti mood with serious mood

i like the way arjun made the full drama at riya's house and then they all laugh

i like the dialog of shree "Kya Shree?? Socha tha Arjun sir ko kaise bhi manaalonga, par Rathore sir? Maar denge yaar woh tho!!"

and then riya 's dilog is super cool vo tho phele sochna tha na

and they both shree ko cooking karva rahi he abhi se na jane bad me kya hoga shree ka bichara shree sabhi aur se fas gaya hai

i like the dialog of riya that "Apna nautanki bass kar aur khana bana!!"

i like the convey of rathod shree and arjun so much it's too good and you pen down it beautifully

i like the shree's mind voice you written it beautifully

"Kaha phas gaya mein?!! Bakra bana kar khel rahe hain mujhse!"

and then they both do not listen and gave a chance to speak shree something they both are playing with shree very happily

and then shree made his way and speak every thing in all in one go and then asked for permission to arjun and rathod

and after all this happens they both laugh and gave the permission to shree and anu

and ypii now shree is a family member

and the convoy of chotu and shree are too good

pls update soon and tnx for pm

this is for you

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#543

awesome update
omg i can't belive i missed chapter23 i confuessed after reading chap 24
part23
finaly shree nd anu both confesed they love each other
loved shree 's expression on knwing everyone knws about anu loves excep him
part24
sameer nd arjun convo was amazing
sam taanvi scenes was cute
loved how arjun nd sameer pulled shree's leg
loved the way how shree told arjun nd sam about him anu
choru nd shree convo was nice
aww chotu nd neelima
continue soon
can't wait for the next part

Edited by yas23 - 12 years ago

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shruti

@shrutisweety

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#544

finially i have read all the updates

loved the updates

well written

wounderful update and

continue soon

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#545

Hey Simar..

I've had a grin plastered on my face from the start to the very last word.. This one was a damn cute one.. The cuteness quotient is slowly increasing with every update..

Shree.. Shree.. My poor baby.. Itni Taang Khichayi? 😆 😆 Ab dono sarphire ACP's ki behen ke chakkar mein pad gaya toh kya kehna.. 😆😉 This was bound to happen..

I loved the way Rawte-Rathore both accepted him as a partner for Anu, while at the same time reminding him that his teeth would be knocked out if he made her cry.. 😉😆

Awwiie.. Picture perfect family! Loved them.. 😊

P.S.: Can we have a cute scene between Arjun-Riya in the upcoming Parts.. where Arjun pretends to be angry with Riya for not having told him.. And Riya trying to make it up to him.. 😉😆😛

Only if that's possible..

Also, please reveal more on the stalker.. That bit is still under wraps which sounds scary!

Thanks for the PM, dear.. 😊

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#546

sshhhrreee,,,,,,ooww..poor guy...bechare ko almost maar dala tha arjun n rathod ne...👏 sahi h...br👏other's love!!!⭐️

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Aukview

@Aukview

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: tani23
Sorry Simar...kaan pakad kar sorry ...i seriously didnt knew ki u will make 1 more res

mujhe first aana tha😆

😆 kaan pakad ne ki zaroorath nahi hain!! It's all good...no worries! 😉 I love the enthu with which you are commenting!! Thanks heaps for that!!! I always look forward to reading what you thought of the updates!!

Now coming to chapter

i seriously loved both d parts..

Rathore worried for tanvi n arjun smiling nteasing him...hehehe.

Seriously loved d way dey planned things
At home, these 3 were making dinner for him ..so that he can accept shree in d family...
Arjun also playing along n calling rathore over dinner
n den finally d second part

i was ROFLing while reading shree's reaction..
bechara shree...waat laga di in dono ne uski
n his reaction..."anu please cum here"

n finally Sameer n Arjun couldn't control dere laughter
even i was laughing dat tym
excellent part

loved it
Finally shree is a part of d family ...
maze aa gaye ...

I am glad you liked both parts!!! After all the expectations for the Arjun-Shree-Rathore confrontation I was a bit nervous for this part! 😛 Thank you again for the lovely comment...

Edited by Aukview - 12 years ago

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Aukview

@Aukview

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: haruhi26
very lovely😊
it was very funny, the way Arjun and Rathore pulled Shree's legs😆
and i loved the dialogue where Rathore asked Arjun whether cooking his favorite food can influence him😆
and also when Shree was so scared, and just blurted out everything😆
and finally you ended on a very happy note for this update😃
Please continue😊

Thank you!! 😃

I am posting the next one soon...

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Aukview

@Aukview

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: pihu_angad
awww..
they are really very bad😆
bechara Shree...
kinna pareshaan kiya dono ne use.
awesome update..⭐️
continue soon..

pareshaan karna toh bantha tha 😉

Next one coming soon ...

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Aukview

@Aukview

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Phew
simar dear
let me rofl pls...first!!
omg wat an update
laughing..
arjun sam teasing wow...
anu too gud...
claps
loved it
jitni taaref kru kam h..
awesum ff...
really enjoyable
thank u dear fr giving us d amazing ff..
u rock~!

Thank youuu!!! 😃

I am glad you are enjoying it!

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