Viraat Manvi OS .The unbreakable bond

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@thejazzgal

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

wow!!!!!!

love ur OS completely..

u hav written it soo lovely.. no words to appreciate dear loved it completely :)

hope to see more such lovely OS's/ FF's/ or SS's sooon!!

me waiting...

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Rafia

@artisticrafia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sarakhan98
thanx for liking 😳

thankss=)
yh ohh ok=)

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@virmanrox8542

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

such a sad story but it was awesome .

love the way how he confesses 😊 hate the way how she faints and dies 😡

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

woww realllyy lovelyy
touched my heart
and a beautiful msg at the end

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Simran

@mannat.urwish

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

wow...dat was really touching..made me sad...bt wat will happen nw if manvi is dead..:-( temme itzz a nightmare..pleaseee...

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Jaya

@screen22

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Seriously this a very sad story, you could feel the pain in the end, why did she have to die, what will become of virat now? What about her di?

My Hindi is not that good if you could put English translations in I would be grateful

Please continue and please pm me when you update love to read some more?

Edited by screen22 - 13 years ago

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Anchal Gulati

@Anchal_Kamli

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

OMG.. Manvi dies... dis made me sad..😒😭
felt all d pain n emotions... U hv written everythng sooo beautifully... 👍🏼ahhh m speechless... felt sooo bad for Virat n Jeevika man how dey will survive... 😔 n Manvi knowingly put her lyf in danger fr her sis...🥺 ahhh... AMAZING WORK GAL...👍🏼👏

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