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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi friends,

This is Bhoomi, posting for the 1st time. Many of my friends have told me to post message here. Thanks to Sneha, Chinti, Sim......I am in forumn becoz of u all.

So here the poem I had posted in my yahoo groups, posting for u all too..

First one:

Raho Chaukanna Somvar jab raat ke bajee ho Das,
Zee dekhenge jee bharke kahoge bas,

Mujhmey hai Bahut dum,
Kisise nahi hoon main kam,

Desh ki raksha karta hoon,
Mushkiloon ka samana daatt kar karta hoon,

Dil mey pyaar ki kami nahi hai,
Magar Desh se badkar koi nahi hai,

kya darayaga koi lagaker Time Bomb,
Shargird mera rah chuka hai James bond,

Osama ki nahi rahegi koi hasti,
Kyunki Mera naam hai Varun Awasti.

Second one:

Time Bomb Ka Dhamaka Hua Hai,
Performances ne Dil Ko chua Hai,

Anirudh ney Desh ko Savara hai,
Pradhan Mantri Ban Usey Sach hi Gawara Hai,

Uski beti Uska bacha ek Sahara hai,
Kay Kay ne Is Kirdaar Ko Bahut nikhara hai,

Varun Aur Roma Ke beech Pyaar hai,
Samay ne Daali ek daraar Bhi hai,

Payal ne Rishtey Ko Joda Ab tak,
Dekhey Rishtta tikta hai kab tak,

Roma samajh na paee Sejpal ke jhooth ko,
Chod na paee Apney guroor ko,

Canada se Aya kahata, yeh sajish ke Anusaar,
Aamir bashir ke kam ko miltli daat har baar,

Varun Awasthi Ek Majboot Saksh hai,
Desh ki Raksha hi Uska Laksh Hai,

Osama Ne Ab Jaal bunaya hai,
Pradhan Mantri ko Bhi Nishana banaya hai,

Usmaan sabse jyada khatarnaak hai,
Dhahshat falaata, yeh Khofnaak hai,

Aakash to ek Dum role mey Fit hai,
Rajeev ney banaya whole serial ko hit hai,

Bacchengey Kaise Osama aur Usmaan ke Junoon se,
Varun Awasti hai to rah saktey hain sukoon se,

Ketan ne Tarif ke KabilKam karke Dikhaya hai,
Television ki duniya mey Ek naya Itihaas banaya hai,

Dekho yeh Zee ka sansaar hai,
Humey to sirf somvaar ka Intezaar hai.

Special thanks to Dina. I heard u like my writeups. Sujalfan thanks for all the info u bring.

with luv

Bhoomi

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi Bhoomi welcome to the forum. Your written articles were always posted by your friends from yahoo groups and its wonderful.Poems on TB also wow!!!!!!!.Thanx for posting.👏

Please come regularly to this forum.😊.its request from your new friend (me) from this forum as I am also big fan of your written articles.😃

Trupti.

Edited by trups - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey bhoomi!you are doing a great great great job.👍🏼.Its fantastic poem on tb.Wahhhhh maza agaya poem per ker.
wel done bhoomi weldone.

👏


love,
rajeevthegreat. 👍🏼
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey bhoomi.....gr8 2 knw tht u've joined IF....drop in at the KTH forum as well....I knw u dont watch KTH, but at the KTH forum, we visit the past glorious days of KTH, n yes do a lot of dummy bashing!

The poem was awesome...u really r very talented

-sneha
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Posted: 20 years ago
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''Aakash to ek Dum role mey Fit hai,
Rajeev ney banaya whole serial ko hit hai,''

-My fav. line
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Dear Trupti, nice to hear from u, thanks for welcoming me.I will try to post few more which I had posted in yahoo groups. Friends we will always be. 😊 Glad u liked it.

Rajeevthegreat hmmmm nice cahlo me too khush

Dear Sneha 😊
''Aakash to ek Dum role mey Fit hai,
Rajeev ney banaya whole serial ko hit hai,''

that lines seem to be the most fav ones. Most of them point out it.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey bhoomi WELCOME dear
u dont know me but i know u as i alwayz read ur topicz in rk grp
u r rocking 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi Bhoomi

Welcome to the forum. You are really talented. I told Hardy to tell Rajeev about you & your poems when she met him on June 25th. Hope she did....

you have a very creative bent of mind....

you will get recognised in the right platform.....

keep it up...
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi Bhoomi
Fantastic work.... 👏 👏
You have done a really really brilliant job.
Welcome to the india forum.
love all the line written by you.
make my day with full of cheers.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wahhh bhoomi mazaa aa gaya 😉 👏 👏
well done u surely r very very talented i really wuld luvv to meet us sumday 😉 😳 hamari khoob jamegee 😉 😳 😆 milker gurpreet ko seedha karein gee 😳 😉

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