Taarey FF.. Is hatred stronger than Love?? (Note pg 80)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Woohooo..m hell lot eXcited..interestig dear..give us d first update soon..nd dont forget to give us Diary Milk fr d shubh aarambh!!

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TOOBA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awesoem concept..!

do continue n update next part soonn..!

n do pm me..!

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Ishani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Aweome dear. Continue soon...n..pm me! 😃

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Shanae

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: desigirl_taarey
its soo interesting!!
cnt wait for it to start
ooh taani is a diva in this!! soo excited to see how it all turns out
adn swayam and rey are not too fond of each other
quick question are taarey bro-sis in this?

Thnx for wonderful comment di ❤️ and no they are not bro and sis, they are best friends.

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Shanae

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Part 1

heyy guys... this chapter will be mainly about introducing rey's character... sorry if not to expectations...

here it goes-

Simmi: OMG look at him! He's so hot!

Aashi: paar maine isse yaha pheli baar dheka hai. New types hoga!
Simmi: ha!! chaal na, baat karte hai usse.

The boy was walking into St. Louis for the very first time. It was his first day and he needed to find the VP's office.

Simmi: hey! I'm simmi
Aashi: and i'm Aashi! App lost types lagte ho, hum appke madat kar sakte hai??

But he just walked past them as if they were never there! The girls just stared open mouthed, at his retreating back.

Simmi: kitna attitude hai!!
Aashi: haa yaar, haame to notice types bhi nahi kiya!!

He walked a few metres away, then turned back and said:
Boy: hey u! Simmi right? Where's VP's office??

Simmi in her head thinking: OMG OMG!! He's talking to me!! Ab chaal jaldi se answer karde, aise idiot ki taara maat kadre reh!
Simmi: ahh... ah.. ahh i'll take u there!
Boy: so wat r u waiting for Christmas?!
And he started walking away. Simmi followed him, until she finally caught up with him.
Simmi: hey! Ahh u look new, wats ur name??
But there was no answer. She tried a lot to start a conversation, but he just didn't look interested!

Simmi (with an irritated voice): here's VP sir's office. Bye!!
And she turned to go but...

Boy: it's rey!
Simmi turned around confused.
Boy: the names Rey. Reyaansh Shinghania.

With that he walked into VP's office.

In the canteen-
Sharon: i heard there's a new boy in the college.
Taani: ha log khaare hai ki bohot attitude wala hai!

In VP's office-
Rey: u called VP?
VP: excuse me?!
Rey: u r excused.
VP: WHAT did u say!
Rey: i wasn't told that the VP here is deaf!
VP: where are your manners!! U r new here so i'll excuse u! But next time, before entering my cabin knock on the door and enter only when i give permission, and call me VP SIR!! I am older than you and deserve at least that amount of respect is that clear??!
Rey: if u say so...
VP: (giving rey his time table) here's your time table, and if u need any help u can ask one of the students. You can leave now!!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sorry if its boring, but the first 2 chaps will be about showing rey and taani's characters and how they meet and then the story will start to get interesting!!
And tell me if there's anything wrong with rey's character, or it needs some improvements 😊
Or u expect something in they story then i'll try my best to add it in the story 😊
Sorry it was short i didn't actually think people would like it... 😔

Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago

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j_krish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

jst read d first part. it is nice. lykd Rey's character. waiting for ur nxt update. can u pl pm me when u update

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Bubblie1490

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

rey got a lot of attitude. but still interesting & fun to see how story unfolds between him & other team members especislly his equation with Taani & Swayam.
nice update.