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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
rd all prtz amazinggg updates👏👍🏼👏
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
wow dear
ur updates are fabulous
ab kriya kya karegi yeh dekhna he
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
chapter - 75
awesome update as always but
not fair...
so now diary is with Kria.. happy that atleast rey scene the picture of taarey gifted by rohan and read whatever written on it..
but why didnt he get an idea about rohan and taani are not couple..
hope kria will read the diary and tell the truth soon to all.. especially swaron and rey/
Swamay is hurt too..
and ignoring his friends...
Now pls pls. pls. reveal the truth yaar ... cant take it more..
atleast swayam , rey and sharon ke samne to lao.
really hoping ke tumhara promo wala part jaldi se aaye.
pls. do cont. really soon cant wait more for your update.

Edited by dh19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
luv the updates bt need more updates ... so plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

chapter 76
{all were preparing their selves.judges were honoured by the vp sir..now it was time to start the programme. simmi n nilesh were hosting the show..al sits n the programe starts}
nilesh-welcome guys n girls
simmi-to the international couple dance competetion.
nilesh-ye ek aisa competetion hai jo har koi jitna chahte hai bt aaj ye competetion jeetenge sirf 2 couples out of 8..
simmi-its gonna be very tough..bt ye tough kaam judges ko karna hain so lets give big hand of applauge to judges

nilesh-keep your hands together for talented international ceoreographer PAUL BECKER, most handsome n king of hiphop REMO D'SOUZA n most happening n grt dancer VIABHAVI MERCHANT...
simmi-now here we call upon the stage our participants..the first two couples are frm the most excellent MOUNT COLLEGE.
nil-they r gs-ags n cs-acs...
simmi-the next couples followed r frm BESTWOOD COLLEGE.
nilesh-the next 2 couples r frm one of the best college of mumbai called as WELHAMS COLLEGE...

simmi-now its time for last bt nt the least 2 couples frm our college tht is ST.LOUIS..
nilesh-k so now we r gonna start with our programe.
nil-so here we go with the first performance of the day by the cs-kabir n acs-misha of mount college {they perform on song beintaha}
simmi-awesome performance guys.next is gs-abhay n ags-piya of mount college{they perform on song dil ibadat}
nil-very adorable performance.next couple is gs-mac n ags-ela of bestwood college{they perform jab koi baat bigad jaye.

nil-next comes cs-prithvi n acs sanjana{they perform on anjaana,anjaani}
simmi-superb..next couple is gs-raghav n ags-siya of welhams college {they perform on falak pe chal}
nil-dhamakedaar performance..next performance is by cs-arjun n acs-aaliya of welhams college.{they perform on song uff teri ada}
vicky say in mike..swayam n sharon get ready next is ur dance..
simmi-very cute performance...now the next performance is by cs-sharon n acs-swayam of college st.louis..go guys..{bth of thm comes.n sound starts'}

EK LADKA THA DEEWANA SA'.EK LADKI PE WO MARTA THA'DIL HI DIL MAIN USE MOHABAT KIYA KARTA THA'..THA USKI ZINDAGI KA EK HI MAQZAT RAKHNA CHAHTA THA WO LADKI KO KHUSH'. {SWAYAM ENTERS WITH A CYCLE N BCK SIDE SHARON'S BIG PHOTOT APPEARS'}

Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu
jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu
mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam
yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu{He bends to the photo'.then enters Sharon'}
yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu

JAB BHI ATI WO LADKI SAAMNE USKE THAM JATI THI DHADKANE USKI'.THA USS LADKE KA PYAAR ITNA GEHRA KI BANGAYA WO SECRET ADMIRE USS LADKI KAA'.AUR DENE LAGA PYAAR KE NAZRAANE'.
jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu
jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu{Sharon gets all gifts bt at last sees swayam n throws everything}

PAR PATA NAHI KISMAT KO THA KYA MANZUR'LADKI NE SAMAJH LIYA GALAT USS LADKE KO'.USSE LAGA LADKA KHARIDNA CHAHTA HAIN USKE SAPNO KO'.AUR HOGAYI WO KAFA'.DIL TUT GAYA LADKE KA PHIR BHI USNE AAS NA CHODI'.REHNE LAGA WO LADKI SE DUR'PAGLE KO PATA NAHI THA KI LADKI BHI KARTI HAIN USKO PASANDH BAS THI THODI RUTHISI'.AUR MANANA NAHI CHAHTI THI KI USSE BHI HO SAKTA HAIN PYAAR''
mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam{Sharon performs alone'}
yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu
jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu
mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam
yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
haan Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu{then enters swayam n bth look at each othr n come closer..}

PAR KEHTE HAINA JINHE MILNA HOTA HAIN WO MILKAR HI REHTE HAIN'. DUR HONE LAGI GALAT FAMIYA'AUR BADNE LAGI NADZIKIYAAN'
raahein Chale Na Chale Chalte Hai Yeh Raaste{bth do couple salsa on these lines'}
aao Chalo Rut Goon Raaste Mein Kis Waaste
mein To Khadi Hoon Yahin Yaar Mila Jab Se Hai Tu
jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu{bck side all swarons photot were on changing..}
jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu
mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam{bth smiles n hugs each other'.}
yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
haan Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu{Sharon moves n swayam was alone'..}

PHIR EK DIN LAGNE LAGA LADKE KO KI KYA WO SAHI HAIN LADKI KE LIYE'.KYA WO RAKH PAYEGA USS LADKI KO KHUSH'.AUR WO HONE LAGA LADKI SE DUR'..{then enters Sharon n bth of them do solo bt same steps n moves away frm each othr'..}

Achcha Hai Haste Huve Ho Jaaye Hum Tum Juda
Yeh Koi Na Poochle Woh Humsafar Kaun Tha
Ab To Mujhe Yaad Nahin Saath Mere Kab Se Hai Tu
Saath Mere Kab Se Hai Tu{then swayam moves n only Sharon performs'..}

Is Dil Pe Lagte Hai Jo Woh Zakhm Dikhte Nahin
Apnose Milte Hai Jo Woh Dard Mite Nahin{bck side flashes big photo of swayam}
Maine Paas Apne Nahin Bas Door Jabse Hai Tu
Bas Door Jabse Hai Tu{n Sharon sits on floor n swayam comes frm the top looking at Sharon'.}


Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu
Jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu
Mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam
Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu{bth were away frm each other'.}

PYAAR EK ANOKHI CHEEZ HAIN'.HAR KISIKO NAHI MILTA HAIN PYAAR'.KABHI MILTA HAIN TO KABHI KHO JATA HAIN'..ISS KAHANI MAIN BHI DO PYAAR KARNE WALE HOGAYE JUDA KYUNKI CHAHTE THE WO EK DUSRE KI KHUSHIYA,''.{N THE PERFORMANCE ENDS'.ALL EYES WERE WET N THEY GET STANDING OMASION'..thn they say thank u n swayam moves down'.sharon goes to rey who was confused'}
Edited by lovelypriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
OMFG I CANT WAIT FOR CHAP 1 <3
CONGO FOR THE 2ND TREAD <3
DO PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Priya like always u did a fab job, omg now Kriya get Taani dairy hope she realize that Rey don't love her but his Taani and what Taani is doing for her happiness. Aww love that Rey see his corner. Swayam is acting a little weird. Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
OMG this time every chapter was ACTUALL/HONESTLY a BIGGG SHOCK & SURPRIZE for me.
GOD why r these SWAYAM & KRIYA being VILLANS in this Taarey LOVE STORY. Bechaari Taani, yaar abb Rey & uska bhai dono usse galat samajtein hai. She's going through LOT OF PAIN & she's so LONELY too. Aur upar se kisi ko pata bhi nahi hai ke woh Jodhpur wapas chali gayi.
& PLZ kuch bhi karke at least Rohan ko to uske paas bhejo, jo usse thoda to comfort de sake. & I really want now that REY gets the diary before Kriya reads it.
Aur yeh kya Rey-Taani ka seperation kam tha ke abb Swayam-Sharon bhi door ho rahe hai.
JUST MY Thoughts.

BUT I'm really sad now, bcz of what is happening to Rey-Taani love story, but it's still INTERESTING.
AWESOME UPDATES YAAR. I'm STILL LOVING EVERY BIT OF IT, no matter what.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Loved it... Awsum waiting for the next chap!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
awesome priya... waiting 4 ur update. pls pls pls pls update soon.

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