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Posted: 12 years ago
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Priya omg its so emotional 😭 😭 Taani save her Rey and his locket. Omg Swayam found out about Taarey, poor Taani she sacrificing her love. Rey constantly asking for Taani I hope he remembers what she said before she left. Taayam Goodbye at the train station was emotional Taani leaving. Priya all the parts were beautifully written, u doing a mind blowing job plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
i once rd d strtng epi & misd updates.bt,u knw wt dr?i tk 1 entire singl day to rd al d updates,hw crazy na?bt literaly i wsn't abl to cncntrt on otr tngs tl cmpltng rdng ur cmplt stry.i'm realy lackng wrds to expres hw bea stry it is?lvd it to d core.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jst lvd ech & evry update.i bow to d hrdwrk u r ptng up to entertain us wit such a bang on stry.i so cnctd to it.i wish d epi cntinues to infinity.frm nw,i'l be wtng fr ur updates dreadfuly.i misd such a gd stry til nw,hel curse.finaly i fund it,my gd luck
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar it is amazing...
but swayam y he is taking taani away frm rey...
taani did a brave job for her love but all credit goes to that kriya uff...
update soon n plz plz make taarey together...
i know it will take time but waiting eagarly waiting 4 that moment..
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i had tears in my eyes yr
jaldi se sab theek kar do plzzz
i m so much in love with ur ff yr u r an amazing writer
continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Part 74b was amazing yeah Rey remembering that Taani is the one am soo happy and he can't dance with Kriya I am double happy. Plz continue soon Priya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
omg priya its great...loved it...rey saw taani's rey corner and taarey photo ...hope he come to know soon that rohan and taani are not in relationship...and why swayam is behaving like this???plz update next soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER:-75a
rey:iski koi zarurat nahi hai main tumhe ghar drop kardeta hua chalo..n yaad rakho kriya jo kam tumhe nai aata use mat kiya karu...{bth were abt to leave whn nil cal rey n ask smethng n rey get busy in tht..n kriya see tht he was busy so she goes to taani room n open the cupboard n was shock to see rey pic there n thn she 2 see the big photo frame on which to lovely taarey 4m rohan was written thn see the TAANIS PERSONAL DAIRY n get shock n thn she think smethng n take the dairy with her...n go out n keep in her bag sametime rey finishes his call n turn n say}
rey:chale.
kriya:yaa{thn they leave rey drop kriya to her house n go to his house n go to his room n lay down thn he cal swayam n say..}
rey:dude wo main ghar pouch gaya hu..tujhe late hoga sochke main agaya..
swayam:k
rey:n ha wo kriya kuch cook kari thi bt wo jalgaya yar
swayam:its k..k mujhe kam hai to chal gudnt.bye
rey:k k bye kal colege mein milte hai bye
swayam:hmmm{ncut the call n swayam was goes home sit in his room n think...}
swayam:sab kuch khatam hogaya hai..kya hogaya yar..kya socha tha sab kitna perfect tha...perfect yahi galti hogai mujhe main kaise bhul gaya ki main ek weekling hu...n sharon n rey dazzler maine kaid unse dosti pyaar kar bheta..taani bhi meri bhen hai n wo bhi ek weekling hai to rey taani se kaise pyaar kar sakta hai..wo kriya perfect hai bt main aus sharon nahi oh taani ke krishnaji plz meri help kijiye plz..{he thn go to washroom to get freshup n here rey in sleep remember taani dairy n he get up..}
rey:are main wo dairy lena bhul gaya bt mujhe kya wo dairy lena chaiye...ha wo taanh se related hai n mujhe wo dairy leni chaiye {n he start 4 taayam house n he reaches taani house n go throuh window n he go n open the cupboard n again get lost lukling everythng n thn he search 4 dairy bt he cnt find he get tensed n again search bt cnt find it...meanwhile swayam here smesouod n he cme to taani room n hearing swayam cming rey hide behind the curtain leaving the cuboard open...n swayam open the door n see that cupboard door open n go to close it n rey get tensed as he wil nw see his pics... n swayam go n see n say }
swayam:ye kapda kisne hata rey ke pic se lagta hai hawe se hat gaya hoga...{rey get shock to hear this n he close window n cupboard n leaves n thn rey cme out n thnk}
rey:ye swayam ne koi reaction q naidiya ho kya gaya ise kahi ye meqe n taani ke bare mein janta to nahi hai...n dairy kaha gai kahi swayam..nn no nn agar wo leta to wo mujhese bat karta bt nah phir abhi bat karu nai use bura lagta to prob hoga main kal clg mein bat karta hu...ha yahi thik hoga.,..{thn he get down of the room n say}
rey:maine taani ka pyaar khodiya abh teri dosti nai khosakta swayam main kal hi tujhe sab bata dunga...{thn he start walking home..thinking taani n her movements...}
Rey start walking towards home lost think about taani...music starts..hmhmhmm...,...{rey is wearing dilko tumse pyaar hua yellow jaket n white pant...it was a dark lonely night...with no one except himself.the wind was blowing with rey hair n rey was walking al alone hands in his pocket n lost in taughts... }Soniye hiriye teri yaad aandi ye
seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi
ye...[2]
{***boyfrnds glfrnd ko thanku sorry nai bolte***}
tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar ni..{stil walking thinking how they went to there 1stdate n how nil n simmi cme there n they try to hide here n there 4m running}
tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar...
tu aaja tenu rabda wasta..[2]
{how he promissed taani tht he wil nt kiss her until she dnt cme n kiss him...}
udekta main tera rasta...{how rey missed her when she went for tn meet her frnd 4 2day...n how he waited her.. }
kinna tenu chaava ey na samjhi tu..{how taani brk rey locket n brk with him...}
tere naam kitti zindagii,{how rey manofid taani whn she get angry on him with dil ko tum se pyaar sng..}
jab tu milengi tenu dassange
tere naal meri har khusi...{how rey confesed his love to taani n she too how said yes to rey...}
tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar ni..
tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar...{how they taught to make a they drmhouse in goa jungle whn they get lost}
tu aaja tenu rabda wasta..[2]
{whn rey cme to taani house to find out the truth aftr he was nt well n they cme very close to each other...}
udekta main tera rasta...{aftr shivam ft kriya dres her n he say no n get out 4m there...n see taani crying...}
soniye hiriye teri yaad aandi ye
seene vich tadpta dil jana jandiye...{the movement whn rey saw rey coner n taarey photo frame...he smiles on this n go on walking n walking the nt was also tired to walk with him he reaches hme n the moon lt give him sme relief n he go to sleep thinking abt taani...}
NEXT DAY:-DANCE COMPOTITION DAY
All reaches college n were busy in arranging thngs n team was welcming the guest nil n simmi were busy in hosting n al 4college constants cme n go to rooms n the international guest cme n al get busy making thn confy n swayam was also busy bt rey was searching 4 swayam bt swayam was adoving him telling he has work n whn ever team,rey n sharon cme to him he say he has wrk n go there he was again arrenging the things which were already arranged n studnt talk within thmselfs
st1:ye swayam ko kya hogaya jo cheeze thik hai use phir se nikal ke thik q kar raha hai.
st2:jandena yar aacha use busx rehna ka man kar shayad isliye to ye sab kara...{team hear this n unstnd tht he is ignoring thm he 1go to v.p sir or help othrs or go n host the guest bt nt talking to team,rey n sharon rey was frtated as he wantd to talk bt he was adoving him sharn too was cofusd with swayam behavoiour...}

Edited by lovelypriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by lovelypriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear.
hope now Rey will find the truth..
pls. do cont. soon and i want ke rey diary me truth padh le..
pls. pls. dont drag this juth more...
cant see taarey like this..

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