*Teenage Love*- UPDATED part 4 pg 43

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Rami92
am sorry am soo late😭😭
bt hav to giv u a big huggie 🤗fr such a cute teenage stry..
nyc stry n nyc start😃😃

awww huggy u back rami di 🤗
am really happy u liked it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Wow dear I totlly luvd the begning... Skol romance is always a treat to read 😉
Awesome, do cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

congrats for new SS...

very interesting start...

Maan playing tabla is rare concept and Geet is Kathak dancer...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: OsheenDGr8
Wow dear I totlly luvd the begning... Skol romance is always a treat to read 😉
Awesome, do cont soon

Oww thank u shoo shoo much osheen di for liking my work, few words of appreciation from an awsmn writer like you is jst too honourable and special to me 😊
thank youuu 🤗

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aditi sengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

love the start
enjoying reading it
continue

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nehakapoor7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

beautiful update

teenage love.. i like the concept.. add me in ur pm list

waiting for next update

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anyaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

UPDATING

koi waiting?????? 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7
beautiful update

teenage love.. i like the concept.. add me in ur pm list

waiting for next update

Thanx 😃
Added u in PM list 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

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A Showieee for yet again being late . But as my xams coming near me held up with studies studies and studies 🤢 After this one too cant say when me would get time to update but surely will be witing the updates in free time available 😃. And me enjoying writing this teenage love eshtoly of our Maneet ❤️.

And for Love Story, wo bhi jaldi aa jayega but na me kinda stuck at a point Will try completing that one too ASAP. Abhi k liye iss se kaam chala lo 😳

PART-2

After several more practices in the presence of mr saxena, the coordination was set perfectly by the duo. They were all ready to rock the next day's function stage. Mr saxena finally dismissed all students after the final instructions. Maneet too collected their stuffs from the class room and left together towards the exit.

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Both were not alone to be exact, accompanied by their respected buddies ; Geet with Pari and Pinky chatting whereas maan with his buddies yash and armaan. Maan introduced geet to his buddies "Umm yash, ammy yeh geet hai, the main dancer of tomorrow's performance" but all he got from these good for nothing friends of his were teasing smiles. Geet was confused with their reaction whereas Pari and Pinky looked wierdly at Maan's so called buddies but then shrugged and ignored them. Geet looked up at maan, to which he just gave a nervous smile.Their constant nudges were only frustrating Maan more. Gosh! thank god finally they were at the exit by that time. Maan didnt want to get more emabarressed in front of Geet.

They reached the exit gate of the building and with one last smile both maneet went opposite sides, the 3 girls towards the main gate where a car was waiting for them outside, and boys towards right where their bikes were parked. "Ahem ahem, soo chakkar kya hai bhai??" Armaan nudged him with a naughty smile as they walked towards the parking. "What chakkar? There's nothing like that, so you both stop stressing your pea sized brains" Maan feigned ingorance. "Ohh, so no chakkar ha? Then what was all that staring sessions at the class since yesterday and that sweet sweet smiles now?" Oh crap!! they caught him. "What are you talking about Yash? why would I stare at her? Aur koi kaam nahi mujhe?" "Ohh, so hume pagal samjh rakha hai?" armaan said with a frustrated tone "ussme samajhne jaisa kya hai" maan mumbled under his breath "Kyaaa? Abb tujhe hum pagal bhi lagne lage? Dekh li teri dosti ajj. Bhabhi aayi toh apne bachpan k yaaro ko bhul gaya ek din mei" Yash said with a hurt expression at which Maan only rolled his eyes "oyee shut up both, koi bhabhi wabhi nahi hai ohkk" "Rehne de bhai, ajj tera asli roop dekh liya humne... Dost dost na rahaaa (both started singing together in besura tone)..." Both went on with their nautanki till Maan climbed his bike clearly indicating that he's not interested. Yash and Armaan too hurridly climbed Aramaan's bike seiing him driving off. "Arree Maan, ruk toh..." but it was already late, he was already out of thier site. Both shooked their heads at Maan "Kabhi na kabhi toh accept karega hi" "hmm, so lets wait for the time" and they too drove towards their homes.

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The next day was their annual function day, hustle bustle all around the school. Maan was running here and there doing all the arrangements, helping out all the teachers and assissting them. The 11th and 12th'ies envied seeing almost all the teachers counting on him, but maan cared a damn about all, he just dedicated himself in his duties.

He was rushing towards the I.T. lab to check over the CD's and other technical stuffs when he collided with a flowerpot kept near the coridoor resulting it to collapse. He panicked and tried stabilizing it but it was too late now. But what yet again shocked him was a yelp by someone. He then realized that the flowerpot he collided with apparently didnt fall on the tiled floor but someone's foot. Looking at person who was bent thus hampering him to look at the face."Hey, I'm really very sorry. Are you ohk?" with a panick filled face he bent his face for a better access. "Ahh, its ohk I'm fine" came a meek reply clearly surface with discomfort and pain. Ohh that voice, it sounds so similar. And then it striked him 'Geet' his eyes widened "Geet?? Its you? are you fine?" Geet too looked up now to meet Maan's concerned eyes while her own eyes reflecting her pain. Maan bent and removed the pot from her right foot which was throbbing with pain now since she havent wore shoes but comfy slippers. "Ah, maan its you. Am..am fine it's nothing" she stumbled onto her feet trying to stand straight but Maan held her before she could lose her balance. "What fine? Your leg is evidently bleeding and you can't even stand straight. Oh God! What have i done!" She looked at his face which showed clear lines of worry, concern and something like pain?? While maan could'nt stop from cursing himself to have been so careless, metally cursing him. "Ruko, dont stress your foot more, just hold onto me. I'll take you to the sick room" "Nahi Maan, it's fine, dont worry" "Nothing is fine ohk, am taking you to sick room and that's final" the finalty in his voice was enough to shut her mouth. Maan held her hand and helped her till the sick room, supporting her while she limped due to pain.

Their school nurse checked her foot and cleaned it up. Their was nothing serious but the external injury caused by the heavy flower pot resulted in extreme pain in Geet's foot. Considering about Geet's performance which was'nt possible without her, the nurse gave her a strong pain killer to subside her pain but also instructed that she should'nt stress it much else the injury may worsen. Geet was highly upset and tensed by this information as this performance matterd her a lot and she could'nt let down her friends who worked on this one performance since long, skipping their important classes and studies. This thought brought tears in her eyes and her friends tried consoling her, Pari who have been informed by some student about the incident was too present with her along with Pinky. "Hey Geet, sshhh kuch nahi hoga am sure thodi der me sab thik ho jayega" she said rubbing her back taking her in a soothing hug.

Geet straightened immediately as Mr saxena entered. Rubbing off those tears she looked at Mr saxena who had concern and panic written all over his face. Glancing at her plastered foot he asked geet "yeh sab kaise hua?" Maan who till now was standing silently in one corner heard Mr saxena's voice, and his question yet again resurfaced the guilt he was feeling. It was all his fault and in no way he would sit quietly. But before he could speak geet spoke quickly "Sir wo bas meri carelessness k karan yeh..." but maan cut her in mid "Nahi sir its all because of me. Mei hi bina samne dekhe chal raha tha, and i collided with the pot jo isske foot pe gir gaya... resulting all this. Issme geet ki koi galti nahi" "No sir, it was just an accident, no one could be blamed over it" "But geet..." he tried make her understand, why the hell was she trying to defend him when he knew he was at fault "Bass... will u both stop it? fighting like some nursery kids" Mr sharna interrupted their so called 'Blame Game' with a glare. Maan frowned whereas Geet felt embarrassed with Mr saxena's taunt.

Mr saxena's hard eyes softened immediately as he sat on his knees in front of geet leveling with her "Geet, now whatever happened, happened but will u be able to perform? You see I can still cancel the performance." his eyes held that concern while speaking which even swell geet's heart with respect and tenderness, she always knew he admired her just like his own daughter, surely she was one who could easily win anyone's heart with her sincere persona. Before she could reply Mr saxena asked the nurse about geet's health status

"Sir she has severe pain in her foot due to the incident for which i've already injected her the pain killer due to which her pain may subside but i advice her to rest for atleast today" "Sir i guess we should inform Sharma ma'am (coordinator of the function) about the change of plan " Maan suggested him "But sir, no need to do that, i can perform, i'm sure thodi der me dard kam ho jayega" "No geet we dont wanna take any chance, u need to rest" "Sir trust me i can, i really wanna do it sir, not for me but for my school and my friends. I just cant let them down, Please sir" she requested with hopefull eyes. Mr saxena sighed knowing she wont listen, and the desperation yet determination in her eyes showed how important was it for her "ohk, as u say, im trusting you on this but remember no stressing unnecessary. Promise" saying he forwarded his hand "promise" geet too smiled after long placing her hand on his.

One person was evidently displeased by the 'not so good' decision, who was none other Maan, he did'nt want Geet to bear all those discomforts, he knew it might be hell painful for her seeing her foot's condition and then performing would only worsen it. He certainly was frustrated over Geet. And he voiced it out to Saxena Sir "Sir, this is insane. She cant just perform in this condition, and nurse too isnt allowing it" "But I'm saying na I can and I will" Geet replied with a frown. "Maan I too understand ur point but I'm just saying that lets just wait for sometime, agar Geet ka pain injection se kam ho jata hai by the time of performance then it will be great na" Maan sighed knowing he cant win but still he was really scared for her, he just hoped she would'nt stress much.

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Phew! Finally done with PART 2, really nervous , do tell howzz it.

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