ArHi FF:5:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 51

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi!!!
not yet??/


okay...
so, im gonna use this space to say that...
souls your comment was awesome...loved it..
but, then , again i had a little tinsy wincy problem with the language!!..
u already know why!!😉

now??...is it fine lin dear?
Edited by sansu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi!!!

this is gonna happen like once in a light year n it is written in destiny that you are here to witness this!!!!...

thinking what this is all about??--------simple..it is

ME!!!...FIRST TO COMMENT !!!...
purely coz i was jobless...so, wanna join me for a happy feet dance!!!


atlast we get to see khushi!!!...
poor dear...seeing her cry as such!!!...:-( :-(

"he moonlight tried to touch her features in sympathy but the girl had let her long open hair fall"

that line was beautifully described...it enhanced the scene she was in!!!...beautiful yet lonely!!

there were no stars in the sky...no one to give her company...no one she had to look forward to when in need?...that was heart-breaking plight..

"the rose bush"...intriguing!
back to where it started??...but, it is not an end...it is just a bend...i mean this is just a turn from where they were heading... a turn towards what is gonna really happen...

"she stood up and embraced the other, "I do not know what is happening to me. I do not know why I did it."

she doent understand herself yet...she has not given thought to these feelings before...n therefore, she really doesnt know!!!
but, all are puppets to be pulled by heart-strings n you she cannot make any exception to it, can she??..
but, i also thought that she wanted to console lavanya a bit with what she was trying to say!!

"Nothing you do is wrong, Kushi. You are too pure to make mistakes."

such a true friend she is...i love lavanya's trust here...
you have thr courage girl to say that khushi will not do mistakes n more to that even what she does can never be a mistake?...i love you for this!!!


"Nothing in this world happens the way you want it to. But whatever happens, happens for the good.
"I believe there can be moments in one's life when one forgets oneself in the pain one is drowned. One turns blind and numbed to reason."

true...sometimes we forget ourselves when we are depressed!!!...we cant control what our mind tells us at that weak moment!!...luckily khushi has a soul with her n not as lonely as it started...

"one turns blind n numbed to reason---can this be reasoned for the general n lordy too??

"that a good thing is taken from our life so that a better thing can replace it"
"A good thing is indeed taken from us so that we can be gifted what is best fit for us."

the differences in their statements...i loved it!!!...
khushi is speaking about her past here...but, lavanya may be thinking about aman n also that it was good that her relation with arnav ended?

"good" to be replaced by "best fit"👍🏼

"I suppose the nothingness from him would hurt more than his cruelty''.?"
that is certainly true!!!...i feel so much for her...she has not shown her sadness to anyone!!!...poor lavanya...

this is the first time im catching up with lavanya's pain!

khushi really thinks all others are under his whims??/...really??...the girl is so naive!!!😆
he is so out of control here n she is saying that he thinks others are fools...
dont worry khushi dear...you are making him reach madness in love!!!

"One day, he will find that he is not the man he thinks he is...
That he can also be a slave to his emotions and desires'''.."

we did see a glimpse of it, dint we??...im waiting for that d-day eagerly...for his own realisation..

Kushi stared blankly as the last words reverberated in her mind. Slave to his emotions and desires''..Was that why he was hateful of her? Was that why he accused her? Because he was afraid? Afraid that he might''.'.change?

you gave her a brain to think!!!!...love you for this!!!🤗🤗🤗

"sourced by the one and same man who remained in his dark room, fraught with his own rippled resolve."...

he still remains in the dark!!!...
plz tell me what his confused resolve is??...
to avoid her...😆

loved it!!!..
waiting for more!!




Edited by sansu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was so involved with my fear about Master Gupta that I completely forgot about Khushi.. ! Sorry writer! 😒

Poor soul.. she's truely hurt by the heartless.. but then I find strength in Lady Lavanya's words.. "One day, he will find that he is not the man he thinks he is. That he cannot be strong and unaffected always. That he can also be a slave to his emotions and desires……"

One day.. this will happen.. its actually happening already! He is affected.. he feels the connection b/w him and Khushi..he shares some foriegn feelings for her! 😳
.. His world is not only his sister b
ut also Kushi ❤️

I always liked Lavanya but I respect her from today! she's not the same selfish, self-centred girl now! she's so much changed for good! 😃 I love her.. she's a true friend to Kushi.. she has not played games.. she has not back-stabbed anyone! She's just been more than a well-wisher.. 🤗

PS- this is the very 1st time im 2nd in the Inn! 😉 😊
Edited by ShrutiPandey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...when you started it with the little girl i thought it was the vision shyam gets and then realised it is khushi...oh dear i can understand her plight...poor thing...and lady lavanya comes to her and her consoling words,i love you lady la...really im extremly happy that she got Aman and lordy when r u gonna change...
anyways i love this friendship they share...its beautiful and pure and last part where they were holding hands trying to console each other and gain strength was the loveliest out of all... and your pics are amazing..
long live the the friendship...
and waiting for master shashi...what exactly happened...
loved this update a lot...
p.s: the rose bush has something isnt it...the first day khushi visited the castle her eyes were glued and she was drawn to the rose bush and met lordy near that as welll...and now when she is sad she sits near that...hmm...what is the symbolism of that...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update actually I was expecting something abt Shashi but u gave me what I wanted to know the most and didn't realize.how can I forget to know abt kushis feelings after such an incident

Thanks for this update
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is my first ever comment in a.rshia..i started reading this ff last week and it is just amazing..i wuld stalk every now and then for d updates..

Todays update showed the strength of kushi and lady lavanyas bond..hope to see them like dat forever..i am really worried for our father shashi cant wait for tomorrow..
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was seriously a very beautiful part..I loved it..Lavanya is so understanding..
hope Arnav realizes that even he has a heart that beats😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
its sheer good luck and blessing to have a friend in your life who can look beyond her own heartache to sooth yours! The only thing I found a bit hard to believe was that Khushi couldn't sense the concern he had for her. Probably she simply ignored all the signs ..he coming back for her in forest ,he saving her from dungeon, his regard for her well being..hmm too many things to ignore Khushi. I hope she doesn't lose her step-father to General.
Beautiful update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rabba ve dear Aquiline...
Beautiful update... Loved reading Lady La's wise words...
"Nothing in this world happens the way you want it to. But whatever happens, happens for the good."
"I believe there can be moments in one's life when one forgets oneself in the pain one is drowned. One turns blind and numbed to reason."
Brilliant lines... i just loved it...

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