SS: Colours & Promises (Part 8 Pg 39) 23/07

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Sia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: fan123GUNJ
Read it in a go
Amazing story
Interesting concept
Beautifully written
Please pm me when you update :)

Thank you so much hun. I will PM you if you're in my list.

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Sia

@SiasCreations

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: SaRunLicious

Great update!

Oh no! My guess was wrong, as usual! 😆

I thought he was going to say I love you, but then the last sentence reminded me that Arnav doesn't believe in love 🤔

That aside, Khushi has realized that she loves him. How very awesome! 😃
I wonder how she'll go through with this separation. And I really can't wait to read how Arnav will cope..whether he'll understand what he feels for Khushi is love..

Lots and lots of stuff in store, I guess! 😉

Loved it ! 😊

Thank you!

Haha I did think some people would think that he would say that, and I don't blame you for expecting it for a second. There was no indication that he was going to say anything other than that!

Khushi realised that Arnav needed some time away from her, but it doesn't mean it'll be any easier for her to be away from him. The pain we feel when we miss a loved one doesn't really go away until they return; even if you don't think about it there still is an ache inside you when you think of them. Khushi will be hurt, as is natural.

Indeed there is!

Thank you!

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Sia

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Sophia21
Great concept.. love it.. Awww little Arnav n khushi is so cute.. Continue soon :)

Thank you 😳

I hope you continue to stay with me as they grow up 😉

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Sia

@SiasCreations

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

"Loverless nights, they seem so long; I know that I'll hold you someday.
But till you come back where you belong, it's just another lonely Sunday." (Sunday by Hurts)

Chose these lyrics because they were very apt for Khushi's situation. How long will she be separated from Arnav for, and how many lonely nights will she have to go through waiting for him?

Next update coming in a little while.

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Sia

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Removed, will be adapted and uploaded elsewhere.

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Edited by .Sia. - 6 years ago

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

waiting

mostly i commented on blog...

now i see u here also

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Sia

@SiasCreations

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Author's Note: I didn't want to make you guys wait too long & this was lying around so I decided to post it today. What a coincidence, I hadn't realised that I was posting a birthday chapter this time! Thank you to everyone for the birthday wishes yesterday & I hope you enjoy the chapter!

It can also be found on my blog so be sure to leave comments there if you wish!

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incarnadine

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Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Ghausia 🤗

How was your Birthday?? Hope you had tons of funnn!! 😊

Now going to the update:

It was awesome..

Loved every single bit of it..

Arnav's part - on his feelings, how he tried to shut Khushi out of his life and his realization that their relationship (or rather the feelings he had for her) was no longer platonic - was written beautifully 👏

I absolutely loved it!

Loved how Arnav still remembered that Khushi always wanted to go to a Mela, and took her to one as a Birthday treat..

Loved how Khushi readily agreed to ride on the rollercoaster just because Arnav wanted to do so..

But as usual a phone call breaks their trance 😆

Nevertheless, it was a lovely update, as usual! 😊

Wonder when they'll decide to confess what they feel for each other.. 😉

P.S: Loved Khushi's suit..nice choice 😃

P.S.S: Eagerly awaiting the next chapter 😊

Edited by SaRunLicious - 12 years ago

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ArHiLover-x

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Very nice update, I really liked it!!

Please do continue soon and thanks for the PM :)

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

What a wonderful chapter. I felt as if I was there watching this special moment with them.

Arnav can try and erase her from his mind and heart but that will never happen. Even after pushing her out of his life, the first thing he did when he got back to Delhi is go see her. That too on her birthday.

Just loved it!

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