Mere Papa Maan-2 Th#7/Last part 57 pge 87 n 89/epilogue pge 89 /17 Aug - Page 8

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

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Its already 6 in the morning. First rays from the rising sun had already suppressed the darkness present all around on the earth.Birds are coming out of their nests in hop to get food.But what about the darkness destiny brought for Khuraanas and Handas. Especially in Maan's life.Geet she was unconscious...both kids were unconscious so they don't know any thing.

Then who was suffering most Maan ? Ya it was true every person related to Maan and Geet were all going through same pain. But Maan his pain was unbearable . He had assumed himself responsible for every thing happened wrong. He had lost his instinct to take right decision...to think right.

Even he was not able to accept if Rehaan had any problem that was in his destiny not his own fault...But it was Mannat's critical condition which was not letting him to come out of his own assumed guilt.

In such a mental state of mind he left with his car in fraction of seconds.Without wasting time Lucky and Dev also left chasing him

Leaving urban side behind..he neither turned toward KC nor toward KM Even it was not the way to Handa House.So what he was upto ?.. Driving crazily within 15 minutes he was out of city.Lucky and Dev left far behind

''Dev Bhai...yeh Maan Jija Ji kahan chale gaye..We are not able to locate him.How can we search him now ?'' Much disturbed Lucky said driving car on the road Maan had taken.

''Lucky I know where he can be.this road is directly reaches Hill top..hilly area outside city. Jab bro disturb hote hai ...He always search for such a deserted place. But today he is out of his mind. Don know he is upto what ? Drive fast '' worried Dev said

''Ji Dev bhayia'even me worried aur sabko pata he hai Maan Jija Ji kitne sar firre hai'kush karne se pehle sochte nahi'' he second Dev.

Dev's estimated right.Driving crazily Maan puts break suddenly at the verge of hilltop.He removed his vest...unbuttoned his shirt.Like wanna put whole frustration out.

''Who m I?...who am I?'' he screamed spreading his arms in the air ''I am ...ya...I am Maan Singh Khuraana..the great Maan Singh Khuraana.A fighter.. Undefeated Emperor. Who never showed his back..''

''Per aaj mere apne kehte hai main haar gaya hu...I m showing my back...They are rite...I have lost...I have lost the fight'' he dropped himself down on his knees ''Per yeh haar Maan Singh Khuraana ki nahi...Its defeat of a father. Who can't save his dying child.''

''Meri Mannat marr rahi hai ...aur uske sath meri Geet bhi...sab kehte hai bhagwaan hai.Kaha ho aap ?Mujhko '' Mere Papa Maan '' kehne ka haq maine cheena Mannat se...punish me.I m guilty not my wife not my kids.'' he hides his face in his hands.

Maan remained in same position for some time.After thinking something he runs toward car and sits on driver's seat.

'If u almighty want some sacrifice for the sake of my dear ones lives.I m ready to give myself to u ''. He starts car and and was about to drop himself from hilltop when Lucky puts break at front of his car.

Note: Like Aashu said I turned whole track.How can I show Maan on his knees.But this is not dramatic this is reality of life but in a fiction.Just look around I need not to give any example. This suicidal tendency is not a strange thing.There are lots of people who committed suicide.Most of them the successful ones. When a successful person suddenly got a jerkjolt in life.Where there is no hope of recovery whether in professional or personal life .It turns to be depression and person moves toward suicide bit by bit.Okey let reality apart think about Fashion.When a supermodel looses the name and fame she had ..and suddenly...the only option for her was suicide.

But a person can recover if he/she has some one to give support and love just like Priyanka gets in film from her parents.She regained her lost self.Same is with Maan at last this is reality besides a successful businessman he is a human.He will recover let him give a chance...and to me with him...without bashing becoz...tried to show the real face of life...😃

Dev comes out in hurry and dragged Maan out of his car slapped him twice.But no effect on Maan he had turn out to be a statue.

''Yeh kya karne jaa rahe thay aap bro.Agar hum time per nahi aate to '' he gulped remaining words not able to speak .He hugged Maan tightly with a fear to loose his brother.Who was every thing for him.

''Ha Jija Ji yeh kya karne ja rahe thay aap'' Lucky said

But not a single word from Maan

''Bro come to senses.Think about those who r due to you.How can you leave Geet when she is fighting alone...How can you make your kids ...your brother orphan...Kaise aap Daddi Maa ko marne k liye chod sakte hai...We all are due to you...Bro...'' he jerked Maan many times.

Maan looks in Dev's eyes blankly and suddenly burst in tears putting his heart out

''How can I see all this..Ho sakta hai mere aisa karne se Geet aur mere bacho k saare dukh durr ho jaaye'' he put his arms around Maan's waist...

''U r saying this bro.You r really out of your mind.Apke aisa karne se kya sabh theek ho jaaega.Bro think sensibly.Things are changing...dukh aata hai to ... uske baad khushiya bhi laata hai hai.When we were coming behind you.Nandini ka phone aaya tha mujhe.Mannat is responding Bro.Agar Mannat theek ho gayi to Geet bhi theek ho jaaegi.Per jo aap karne jaa rahe thay usse to Geet marr he jaati to kya hota apke bacho ka...uska jo abhi is duniya main aaya bhi nahi.'' Dev tried to put reality in front of him

''Mannat is responding...what you are saying ..Mujhe uske pass le challo ?''

'Ji Jijaji this is true.Nandu ne kissi ko kush nahi bataya.Aab aap jaldi chaliye.'' Lucky stamped this fact.

'Chaliye bro.' Dev grabbed his wrist and made him sit on front seat next to driver's seat in Maan's car and himself decided to drive.Lucky takes other car.

What happened Nandini tried to hide but atleast not from Daddi Maa.Daddi Maa had reached hospital after getting news of Geet's bad health and Mannat's bit improved condition.When she found neither Dev nor Maan their.She smelled what was fishy there.At last Nandini explained whole condition to her.

Before they could reach ICU.Three of them found Daddi standing outside guest room waiting for them as Guest room was on the way to ICU..How she was looking angrily it was clear that she knew every thing .

''So you come back .Plan kyo cancel kar diya ?'' she said tauntingly and slapped him twice.

'' Daddi Maa I m sorry plz forgive me '' he folded both hands in front of her with over flooded eyes.

''Apki aur Dev ki wajah se he aaj takk hum jinda hai...aur apki zindgi sirf apki nahi usper hamari Geet ka ..hamare bacho ka haq hai..U have no rite on you. '' she cupped his face.

''Waise hows Geet Daddi Maa ? Aur Mannat apne dekha un dono ko ? Rehaan uth gaya ?'' he questioned in one breath

''Aap apne apno ko kitna pyar karte hai.Beta even you don't now.Then why you took this foolish step ?'' She brushed his hair

''Apno ka dard bardaashat k bahar (became unbearable) ho gaya tha Daddi Maa''

''Geet and Rehaan are sleeping aur Mannat umne improvement hai beta but very slow.I think you should meet Dr Khanna first.''she placed hand on Maan's shoulder consoling him

Maan left to meet Dr Khanna to know the development in both kids's condition. Rehaan was out of danger and now there was little ray of hope in Mannat's condition.She had started to move her hands and once she tried to open her eyes.

''Mannat opened her eyes. Is it true ?'' overwhelmed Maan asked in high spirits

'Mr. Khuraana I don't want to hide any thing.If there is improvement in her it doesn't mean it gives guarantee of her fast recovery.Ho sakta hai wo jaldi theek ho jaaye ho sakta hai k itna time nikaal jaaye jisko hum gin(count) bhi na sakke'' Remembering what Maan did to him Dr Khanna said hesitatingly

''Dr. she is a fighter.She will fight back.Hamari Mannat wapis aayegi...Usko jaagna he hoga...Wo hai to hum hai...If she is stubborn I m her father...Ziddi Mannat Maan Singh Khuraana ka ziddi ''Mere Papa Maan'' he said with determination wiping his eyes

''Mannat k Papa Maan to theek hai but what this Mannat k 'Mere Papa Maan' amazed Dr said hesitatingly

''Dr no one can understand what these words mean to her...Her whole dreams whole desires are in these three words.Jo sapne jo sirf uske hai...Jinko main bhi nahi samajh paya...Let her come back to senses.I will give chance to you to question her'' unexpectedly Maan said smilingly.Instead of being hyper on Doc.

Dr was still thinking about the whole story of Maan and Geet. About which he was aware now.But what's reason of these three words this was still a mystery for him. Maan moved toward ICU first checked Rehaan he was still sleeping kissed him.Then after checking Mannat kissing her.After having lil talk with her even she was in coma.He came to Geet's room.Where Nandini took breath of relief after finding Maan in front of her.Geet was awake now.Had asked for Maan and kids many times.Inder and Rano were also present there.But after Maan cae to room they all left leaving them alone.

'Aap Mandir ho aaye.Nandini told me you was out for Mandir to pray for us ?' Geet said .It was not surprising for Maan .He estimated that Nandini made excuse to Geet to calm her down.

''Ha ho aaya Geet..U know Geet.Rehaan he is perfectly all rite and our Mannat she is in better health now.So now its your turn to leave this bed okey.Kids need you at home when they will get discharge..And I don't want my baby inside you a cry baby.Just like his-her mommy who always make a sad face...''Maan teased her

''Maan will they recover. Bollo...meri Mannat theek ho jaaegi na''

''Ha Geet she will..She is a fighter...''

''She is a fighter but upto which limit a five year old can fight with her destiny. Her mother's destiny is responsible for every thing wrong happened to her.'' Geet was about to cry when Maan hugged her tightly

''Mannat her destiny her future is bright.This is my promise.A father's promise and don't make my unborn child's future dark giving him-her a sad face.'' Maan tried to chear her up

'By the way why u r saying his-her (his dash her) while talking about our baby''

''Becoz we don know we gonna have boy or girl.So no partiality I m addressing both'' Maan grinned saying this.This also brought smile to Geet's lips.

Nurse opened door 'Mr Khuraana ur daughter is regaining consciousness ''

'What' both said in surprising tone

''Maan take me to Mannat...jaldi kijiye..'' she jumped from bed

''Geet calm down.Hum chalte hai.U r also not well.Let sister bring wheel chair.'' he held Geet from shoulders requesting nurse for wheel chair

Within in minutes whole family gathered outside ICU but only one person was allowed to go inside at a time.Geet was on wheel chair so doctor permitted both Maan and Geet to go inside.

Maan brought wheel chair near to Mannat's bed.Her eyes were still close.But she was in her senses it was clear from little moment in her hand...Maan felt it much better to move out .Beocz how Mannat gonna react seeing him that was not sure

''Mannat mera bacha..Dekho beta Mommi is here''...Geet slowly got up from chair and placed herself next to Mannat on bed.'' Aap to bilkul theek ho and healthy baby never stays in hospital.Open your eyes baby.Mommi wanna talk to you'' tears rolled down to her cheeks .She kissed Mannat on both sides.On forehead.

Little girl tried to open her eyes.She was able to feel her mother's touch.Tried to respond .Tried to raise her hand but no effect. Geet noticed all this.'Mannat baby try to speak beta.what you want to say.Momi se baat karo '

Geet tried so many times but no effect.She was looking at her mother blankly.

'Mannat kya hua meri bachi ko..kya hua...Maan ..Maan..' she screamed

Without caring restrictions in ICU whole family moved in hearing Geet.

'Maan Mannat is not responding to me.What wrong with her.' Geet hugged Maan tightly 'call the doctor...Doctor Doctor..."

''Geet beta calm down doctor is coming.Lucky is out to call him'' Daddi consoled her but they all were worried looking at Mannat's condition

Dr Khanna sent all out and examined Mannat. Expression of worries were there on his face too.

''Dr what happened to my daughter .Why she is not responding ?'' Maan exploded

''Mr Khuraana u know Mannat's situation .There is some problem in her nerves system.I think due to that her body is not responding properly. Abhi to usko hosh aaya hai.We have to wait ho sakta hai wo jaldi recover kar le...Other wise I m afraid she may have paralysis...Let me perform more tests to clear whole situation '' afraid doctor disclosed fact

'Paralysis...Doctor have you gone mad...kya keh rahe hai aap.Meri beti ko agar kush bhi hua then keep one thing in mind I will not let you go such.Na he aap chalne k kabil rahegay aur na he yeh hospital chlaane k' Maan grabbed doctor from collars .

'Mannat ko paralysis..mer Mannat ko kush nahi ho sakta' Geet rooted to spot suddeny fell down unconscious on floor.

'Geet' screamed all collectively

Maan lifts her up

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