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Originally posted by: narangi314

Couldn't agree more!

Yesterday's episode was one big ol' bowl of crapola:

1. Okay I know that 17 years ago people didn't have CSI...but really Rashid? You're setting the factory on fire and you want to bury the body?!

Let me see, Prof. Razia Siddiqui's popular course Criminal Code 101: Destruction of Evidence.

Multiple Choice Test

Q: If you've got a body and a handy fire, what do you do?

A. Run like Hell!!!

B. Put the body in the boot of your car and drive around till you can figure something out.

C. Bury the body!!!

D. None of the above.

Rashid's answer: C! C! I choose C! After all, I'm a decent person, I don't want the fire to harm the poor corpse or anything...

WRONG!!!! WRONG!!!! WRONG!!!! FAIL!!!! FAIL!!!! FAIL!!!!

Right answer D.

DO NOT protect the body from the fire! DO let the body burn.

Anyway, when Rashid was rolling the body like a football, did he not notice that the woman had been stabbed????? Maybe I can even buy that he didn't...he was too scared, panicked whatever...But burying the body when the whole place os on fire????? Seriously Rashid????

BTW, Rashid is not a very good arsonist either - the factory seems to have survived the fire pretty well, did you notice all the cardboard boxes that seem totally unscathed?! 😆 why would anyone sell it?

2. As for Razia's villainous monologue...that was tooo funny! Is there another doll with a magic microchip that survived the fire and recorded this latest confession also???? A microchip that turns itself on only to record villains' confessions! What a technological breakthrough! Wah! 👏

Bottom Line: shoddy shoddy shoddy

The microchip in the doll has to be the icing on the cake!!! How the heck was that created 17 years ago. Somebody needs to take me back to the tech and happening 90s apparently.

I just cannot understand why he didn't?! Did his brain burn in that factory as well?

I completely agree with you ...

Originally posted by: shaz2009

Hey Del,apologies for the late reply!I agree with you all the way on this.Razia didn't have to stand theer in the room and start telling herself or us what attrosities or crimes she has committed..very shoddy story telling!They could have had this revealed in more alluring,enthralling way where the stimulus for us is just brought on by narration of the story itself along with the suspense quotient that is being presented to us ,where we either get it or we dnt kinda thing.Razia having to narrate the story just had me feeling like I was back in Kindergarten,sitting on the carpet with my legs croosed and listening to the teacher read out a nursery Rhyme.🤪.That was really amateur on their part to do that and it only made Razia's larger than life character look really silly...alomst in the direction of tainting the grounds of this legendry vamp.Very badly excecuted...to say the least!I am not buying thsi Rashid story either!This guy's actions cannot be justifiable to me yet, for all the points you've mentioned.Infedility seems up there as of now///question mark there!This raaz reveal has to have a hell of a climax for anyone to have any sympathy with this guy. and this is what it all rests on!He's just coming across as an even bigger coward now and I'm also not liking Dilshad running to his defense like that just yet.This guy has caused this woman heartbreak,left her stranded with two kids without explanation...you dnt just get all defensive without getting to the crux of the story.

So far I cannot relate to Rashid at all.If anything I cannot stand him even more!He was scared to do time so he bailed out of his duties as a father and husband?...what are we supposed to think?

Originally posted by: shaz2009

<font color="#990099">Hey Del,apologies for the late reply!

</div>I agree with you all the way on this.Razia didn't have to stand theer in the room and start telling herself or us what attrosities or crimes she has committed..very shoddy story telling!They couldhave had this revealed in more alluring,enthralling way where the stimulus for us is just brought on by narration of the story itself along with the suspense quotientthat is being presented to us ,where we either get it or we dnt kinda thing.Razia having to narrate the story justhad me feeling like I was back in Kindergarten,sitting on the carpet with my legs croosed and listening to the teacher read out a nursery Rhyme.🤪.That was really amateur on their part to do that and it only made Razia's larger than life character look really silly...alomst in the direction of tainting the grounds of this legendry vamp.Very badly excecuted...to say the least!I am not buying thsi Rashid story either!This guy's actions cannot be justifiable to me yet, for all the points you've mentioned.Infedility seems up there as of now///question mark there!This raaz reveal has to have a hell of a climax for anyone tohave any sympathywith this guy. and this is what it all rests on!He's just coming across as an even bigger coward now and I'm also not liking Dilshad running to his defense like that just yet.This guy has caused this woman heartbreak,left her stranded with two kids without explanation...you dnt just get all defensive without getting to the crux of the story.<div>So far I cannot relate to Rashid at all.If anything I cannot stand him even more!He was scared to do time so he bailed out of his duties as a father and husband?...what are we supposed to think?

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Hy shaz, you know I agree with everything you have said. I just can't understand the writers need to make the reveal so cartoonish...in that scene I wasn't riveted by her...I just really wanted to laugh. Who the heck was she trying to intimidate in an old burnt factory...ghosts??? Air??? It was just really silly!!

Rashid to me is a highly unsympathetic character. While I understand sometimes there could be reasons for infidelity (read as forced marriages/arranged marriages/unhappy marriages) he doesn't seem to have anything solid. I am pretty sure Razia wasn't in the room holding a gun to his head when he slept with shireen. So all his true love speeches are just a load of bull.

I just hate that the writers took a seemingly smart and strong woman like Dilshaad and made her pine after a man who is responsible for causing her and her children a lot of heartache.

Originally posted by: narangi314

Couldn't agree more!

Yesterday's episode was one big ol' bowl of crapola:

1. Okay I know that 17 years ago people didn't have CSI...but really Rashid? You're setting the factory on fire and you want to bury the body?!

Let me see, Prof. Razia Siddiqui's popular course Criminal Code 101: Destruction of Evidence.

Multiple Choice Test

Q: If you've got a body and a handy fire, what do you do?

A. Run like Hell!!!

B. Put the body in the boot of your car and drive around till you can figure something out.

C. Bury the body!!!

D. None of the above.

Rashid's answer: C! C! I choose C! After all, I'm a decent person, I don't want the fire to harm the poor corpse or anything...

WRONG!!!! WRONG!!!! WRONG!!!! FAIL!!!! FAIL!!!! FAIL!!!!

Right answer D.

DO NOT protect the body from the fire! DO let the body burn.

Anyway, when Rashid was rolling the body like a football, did he not notice that the woman had been stabbed????? Maybe I can even buy that he didn't...he was too scared, panicked whatever...But burying the body when the whole place os on fire????? Seriously Rashid????

BTW, Rashid is not a very good arsonist either - the factory seems to have survived the fire pretty well, did you notice all the cardboard boxes that seem totally unscathed?! 😆 why would anyone sell it?

2. As for Razia's villainous monologue...that was tooo funny! Is there another doll with a magic microchip that survived the fire and recorded this latest confession also???? A microchip that turns itself on only to record villains' confessions! What a technological breakthrough! Wah! 👏

Bottom Line: shoddy shoddy shoddy

Originally posted by: Laila2009

Truly one of the best and wittiest posts I have read on this forum. 👏

This post should be a stand alone - and opening to a discussion and not buried here on this thread. It is so intelligent and brilliant...simply love it.

Thank you for it...it refreshes my brain.