Lazy Writing on Ydays Ep

Let me start of by saying the ME was a damn good episode but what the heck happened yesterday? There are some serious writing gaffes in this story and that's disappointing when you have such a stellar cast. Man Alka (Razia) is a fantastic actress!

Why the hell did the writers have to tell the story of the "raaz" by having Razia talk to herself alone at the Doll factory??? Was she having a psychotic break down or something? There are so many other ways her pov could have been expressed. On the top of my head...she could have been having a discussion with her husband...you know the accomplice...about what happened 17 years ago and why it is of utmost importance that the mystery is never solved. It's just bad story telling when you have a character stand in an empty room talking to themselves. I understand that it was plot point for her to find out that Asad and Zoya are one step closer to the truth but really...

The other thing that was baffling is the fact that the remains of the woman who was murdered is still at the factory. So, this widely reported fire (which the papers have reported as deliberate) didn't warrant a thorough search by the police?? Are we to believe that the police didn't turn every stone and search this place?? That's just unbelievable!! Ok, lets for the sake of the story say that the police were incompetent or paid off it still doesn't make sense that Rashid didn't try to hide and get rid of the evidence almost immediately after. What sort of "murderer" leaves the body lying around for someone to find?

Also Razia believes she manipulated Rashid into marrying Shireen but that doesn't make sense because clearly he was with Shireen and even had a kid with her before this factory mess...so what was that all about...??

Also why are the writers trying to sell us the fact that Rashid was innocent? He isn't! Yes he didn't murder someone but last time I checked being an arsonist is a CRIME and no one forced him to set fire to anything. He could have just said NO or better yet gone to the police if he was being blackmailed.

I am willing to believe that there's more to the Razia and Rashid story but the rest of it is just lack of attention to detail by the writer. :/

Today there were some little disconnected piece after brilliant stage yesterday, I am giving benefit of dobts to writers though for creating another excellent stage for tomorrow though, cant wait for Asad and Rashid's faceoff. he will be caught red handed.

Originally posted by: _vineeta_

Today there were some little disconnected piece after brilliant stage yesterday, I am giving benefit of dobts to writers though for creating another excellent stage for tomorrow though, cant wait for Asad and Rashid's faceoff. he will be caught red handed.

I thought Razia was screaming that this factory raaz shouldnot come front, but is she the one brining it in open, does she think Rashid will still keep mum, is she literally crazy. Hopefully this is ending of Razia's conspiracy as if they try to rise her beyond it, more bloopers will be added only..

I think it wasnt body but skeleton, wrapped maybe so appeared like a body..

I am willing to give the benefit of the doubt as well but that was such a let after such a good episode.

I know it's a skeleton but what is it still doing there???!! Surely Rashid has the brains to get rid of that??? Or is he completely stupid along with being spineless?

And why didn't the police find anything?

WORD to everything you said!!

Originally posted by: mits002

WORD to everything you said!!

Thanks I am glad there are at least a few who do agree 😊😊

And Rashid is still a murderer in his own eyes or atleast an accidental killer. Didnt he want to enquire about the woman he supposedly killed? take care of her family etc? cheating is a very small crime in front of murdering. if he did absolutely nothing to try to right the wrong he did by supposedly accidentally killing a women how does anybody expect him to be guilty of abandoning his family. I dont like how Rashid's written. If he's a flawed man who can cheat, hide the secret that he killed somebody for 17 years even from his close family then his reactions(pining for dilshaad, assuring her he's a good man who wants her in his life again) are not natural.

Originally posted by: nikolai_gogol

And Rashid is still a murderer in his own eyes or atleast an accidental killer. Didnt he want to enquire about the woman he supposedly killed? take care of her family etc? cheating is a very small crime in front of murdering. if he did absolutely nothing to try to right the wrong he did by supposedly accidentally killing a women how does anybody expect him to be guilty of abandoning his family. I dont like how Rashid's written. If he's a flawed man who can cheat, hide the secret that he killed somebody for 17 years even from his close family then his reactions(pining for dilshaad, assuring her he's a good man who wants her in his life again) are not natural.

I'm still waiting to see the whole mystery unfurl and then decide because as it's been mentioned umpteen number of times that this mystery is the crux of the story and future tracks(characters actions) will revolve around this mystery. And if this mystery is lackluster or not convincing then rest of the story is not going to hold much water.

*just my opinion*

Exactly! Why on earth would anyone feel sympathy for Rashid?

You don't have to put the jmo...ALL opinions are welcome 😊😊

Originally posted by: _vineeta_

Today there were some little disconnected piece after brilliant stage yesterday, I am giving benefit of dobts to writers though for creating another excellent stage for tomorrow though, cant wait for Asad and Rashid's faceoff. he will be caught red handed.

I thought Razia was screaming that this factory raaz shouldnot come front, but is she the one brining it in open, does she think Rashid will still keep mum, is she literally crazy. Hopefully this is ending of Razia's conspiracy as if they try to rise her beyond it, more bloopers will be added only..

I think it wasnt body but skeleton, wrapped maybe so appeared like a body..

Originally posted by: nikolai_gogol

Yeah, another flaw. If Razia is okay with the murder coming out in the open then Rashid is proved guilty in the eyes of Asad (and hence Dilshaad). Isnt Razia worried that once they know Rashid might not care about anybody else and might even be prepared to go to police. After all its Razia who killed, doesnt she want it to be hidden at all costs. But i guess that can be explained as she's cornered and just wants Asad and Zoya off her back and might think of more plots while Asad and Zoya are distracted by Rashid.

That's the other problem. If Razia is supposed to be this evil genius then she's grossly underestimating Asad and Zoya. She doesn't know her new adversaries very well so her manipulation is going to be her downfall at some point. So, why would she do it? Surely for a woman who has been one step ahead of the game she wouldn't have make such a rookie mistake. She may not know Zoya but what little she knows of Asad, she knows that he has had enough strength to make something of himself with no help. So, why underestimate him?

There are so many questions whose answer I want. And I'm sure many QH viewers are at the edge of their seats eagerly waiting for the big climax to happen and all secrets to come out in the open but if it's shoddy writing and not all questions are answered it's going to be a big let down after such a build up. Especially if everything revolves around this mystery. We are not going to be convinced of the future plots.