St. Louis ki GS!!#i'll b all r8#KR updt pg 100 pt8 - Page 51

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Posted: 12 years ago
ahh tired of replying...going to type update...please dnt spam!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

@di did i tel u tat i luv tat kr n pc vala sigie in ur daba
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@deethu wese tu kansi cls me padhti hai??😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx sp
Acha sweet ki hot hoga ?
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Originally posted by: deetha

ahh tired of replying...going to type update...please dnt spam!!!!!!


ohk bye tkcr ta ta🤗

@sop tu scrap me aa abhi
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Posted: 12 years ago

@kams same reason
n yup i'm free fr smetime


@di mai aayi aur aap ja rahe ho😔
99 pg complete kar dete hai
100 mai aapka update
dne?
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Posted: 12 years ago
so here goes ur update ppl!!!! no talking now!!


PS: abhi got to know abt something !!!!!!! GOSH!!!!!!! never thought i m that damn lucky!!! love u SHAKS!! tum nahi padogi fir bhi this update only only for u :* :* :* ur such a sweet heart!!!!!

aaj ArSha ne bohut khush kiya mujhe...pehle bhai was asking us on what form we wanna see him dancing and next shakku bai ki ye kaam :* :* :*

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"wo kya hai???"swayam asked shocked at the no of guitars she is having !!!

"1. 2 .. 3 .. ...8?? itne saare kyun???"😲

" arey ek kharab hogaya toh doosra honi chahiye na!!!nyc collection na??"she said excitedly

swayam grinned wide "tumhe guitar bajana aata hai??? "

"haan clg chodne ke baad start kiya!!sunoge??"she asked excited lyk a kid...

"ye bhi koi poochne wali baat hai??? pakka!!"swayam said grinning

* kabhi kisiko mauth ko invite karte hue dekha hai?? nahi toh imagine swayam baba🤢*

hall mei chalte hai chalo"kriya grabbed one guitar and ran inot living room!!! and started playing or better to say doing something on the guitar...swayam closed his eyes and ears

"KRIYA!!!!!"he called finally making her stop...

she raised her eyebrows when  he said

"kriya tum guitar bohut..."he was cut

*ting tong*

kriya gave him a look and went to open!!

as she opened a girl stood blowing her nails seriously!!

"excuse me??"kriya called her when she dramatically lifted her face pushing all her hairs and face full of attitude...

"hey u!!!! tumhe mujhe diturb kyun kar rahi ho?? u know i have my precious party going on and u and ur stupid noise.!!!!! eww u suck at playing it ...khach ra khachra!!!!! "she said in her foriegn hindi!!!!! she landed just yesterday!!!!!! poor girl never knew the rules...

"oh soo sorry!!!! btw who are u i never saw u !!"kriya ased smiling...


"i m from newyork ...kal hi aayi thi!!!!! u see sharma ji beti hun mai "she said  proudly!!


"ohh!!!!! thats great...come inside please.. first tym aayi ho atleast paani toh banta hai "kriya insited and she entered...next was like a horror movie...


kriya locked the door pulled THE chair suddenly pulled the girl onto it and before the girl could realise what is happening she tied her hands back of the chair and tied a cloth to her mouth


swayam was totally confused or shocked on what is going on!!!

"saali tujhe achi nahi lagi toh kaan band karo ... you suck at playing*imitating the girl* kahogi mujhe?? how dare u ??  tu aur tera  ye over make up chup chap apni party nahi mana sakti?? aayi badi mujhe dhaantne wali!! haa?? i suck at playing??? ab jab tak tu khud nahi bolegi ki i play well and the fact that u can't speak... dekho ab teri kya haal karti hun" she said and grabbed the guitar and started playing to the worst making swayam gulp frequently feared and the poor girl was shaken to roots!!!!!

*bam!!!!!* should say the girl is lucky the guitar strings broke away!!!!!

" today is ur day " kriya said sarcastically and opened the ties...

the poor girl for secs looked feared at her and then burst out crying

" daddy!!!!!" she ran out crying...

after few mins kriya turned to swayam!!

" swayam tum kuch bol rahe the ki mai bohut" she was cut/...

" bo...bo...bohut acha bajati ho...i mean out of the world... mai ...mai...mai bhi sikhunga na ...aur aur." he was shaken to core bechara

kriya fell on the ground laughing hard

" swayam!!!! tu..tu mera bestie hai  u have the ri8 yaar!" she said in between laugh...

he sighed loudly

" u scared hell out of me...kya tha wo??" he finally asked sitting beside her stretching his legs and balancing himself with hands on the back...kriya swiftly crawled to him and slept on his lap...

" it a lot of fun u see" she said laughing and looking up...

" tu pagal hai" he shouted...

" tujhe bhi banati hun chal" she pulled him to her room and handed him a guitar...both looked at each other grinned and started playing madly!!!! after 20 mins suddenly kriya fell on bed not able to control herself more... swayam immediately came for her support...

" swaym!!!!! i miss my mom...i miss everyone...everyone swayam" she said as a tear rolled down

" shh... i m there for u always...itna cute handsome ladka hai ...khaafi nahi hai kya???" he winked making her giggle through tears...

" swayam...actually uss din footloose eliminations ke pehle din...pata nahi kaise mom clg aayi aur..." she sat on the bed still hugging him and he too sat listening to her finally knowing the truth...

" what?? tumne ye sab hamare liye" he was cut

" plzz swayam...dnt blame urself...jo hona tha so hogaya" she said smiling

" par wapas aane ke baad ...kya hua??" he asked her..

" swayam tumhe bura lag sakta hai ye sunke but i have to let myself out for my sake... sorry but maine ye expect nahi kiya ki taani tumhari behan aisi hogi... actually jab mai aayi thi then.." he frowned listening to her

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" sorry sorry sorry guys!!!" swayam came running into the RH

" bhai aap kal raat ko kaha the ghar nahi aaye??" taani asked him all looked at him frowning..

" dude tu ghar nahi gaya??" rey asked ...

" ahh nothing rey...bas i was roaming aur ek purana dost milgaya i went for nighout...

" kounsi friend bhai??" taani asked again

" tumhe pata nahi taani...leave it" swayam said with a smile and turned around...

" guys lets start??" he asked looking at sharon ...still she needs a lot of support to be normal...

she gave a small awkward smile and thus everyone started and the dazzlers were busy doing their HW...

swayam stopped in between dancing and remembered everything
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" swayam...kabhi kabhi apna ye khali dabba jo hai use use bhi kiya karo" kriya said knocking his skull

" what??? ye koi khali dabba nahi okay??" swayam protested...

" acha?? toh wo routine kya hai?? footloose finals mei wo karoge?? seriously swayam??? those steps suck for the competition...tum koi stage show nahi de rahe ho" she said irritated...


" routine ko dhyaan bhi diya tune??? we are very much pissed off especially me ki i dont know how it came out and the main reason is U" he blamed her totally!!

" hawww...huh!!!!  mauka mila nahi sab mujhpe daal diya... theek hai toh kal routine change karoge ri8??" she said chirpily

ji agar captain chahti hai toh karega yeh vice captain...aakhir aapki aagya ki palan toh karni hi padegi na " he said dramatically...

" captain??" kriya said sadly

" haa...mereliye hamesha!!!! now tell me the steps..." he asked

"  nah... eliminations mei poora choreography maine ki...tu kya karega?? iss baar finals poori teri zimmedari...i m not gonna help a bit.but i want the trophy...samjhe warna yaad rakhna weekends mei tum mai aur chair ...sab khali rehti hai" she warned making him gulp

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" dude kaha kho gaya??" vishaka shaked him hard...

" ha.huh!!!!!! what??" swayam asked coming to reality

" kya thinking swayam...practise doing theekse" neha said irritated

vishaka started the song again whenswayam said

"stop guys" all frowned at him///...

sharon looked confused

" routine change" everyone along the dazzlers looked at him with wide eyes...

" WHAT??" all asked...

" haa/../... routine change ... iss baar tum dazzlers bhi choreograph karenge...divide karlenge song ko and mujhe dazzlers ki essence chahiye issme...especially tera!!!!" swayam said pointing rey

" tumhari dance use bohut pasand hai " swayam said smiling

" kise??" rey frowed

" sh...sharon...haa sharon ko... she is used for that style...achanak poora change karna difficult hoga...and anyways i want this to be louins performance not any weakling dazzling

swayam said smiling
Edited by deetha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaj keliye itna hi guys do hit like and comment !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update..
Loved it
chair wala part 🤣
Love kriyan bonding...
Thank so much k itani jaldi update kiya 😆
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon
Edited by NishaP_Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
funny update
kriyam bonding ws amazing
bechari neighbour
loved it esp. tht chair wala part.it was superb...
in the end bit got confused why swayan told rey to choreographer
the route for final of foootloose...😲
secret jaldi se reveal karo
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago

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