MG OS#14: Nazar Se Nazar Miley...(Completed) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
awesum story...loved the maneet bond frm their first meet then frnds and then lovers...beautifully written...loved the way u xpressed their bond forming...simply fab is all i can say...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Hi ana!
First of all...thank u very much..for writing this beautiful OS & sharing with us!😊
when they met and maan said that he is in love...i thought that the girl he love is geet herself!
But then felt disappointed knowing ke wo koi aur hai! And i consoled my heart saying ,"chalo koi baat nahi...atleast they become friends.."
and then maan's firt call to geet...his hessitation...but geets warm reaction made him feel comfertable. Then meeting for that assignments..maan helping her...their bond getting strong.
Lovd how geet rushed at maans one call and was there with him when he faced his first heart break. There conversation that time was..funny, cute, adorable, mature & practical.
Her cheering for him at his match...then running into his arms!
And then maan making her wear his winning t-shirt...! Awesome!
There goa trip & somewhere realising their own feelings & eachothers importance in their life.
Prom night and dance!
I luvd the way geet confessed..that she wanted to go with him thats why didnt got any partner. Maan ki murad puri hui.
Maans indirect confession was so beautiful & was showing the depth of feelings & his veluenrable heart!
And geets answer.."till the last breath"
and the kiss!
..
So.. now there love story has become like those "miles & boons"
..
As now geet turns red with his single glance!
Beautiful!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
OMG!!! dat was awesome!!!! a sweet adorable OS!!loved it dea!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
it is so sweet , cute n understanding os ..loved it
what a lovely song you selected prefect for every emotions from stranger-friends-lovers
completely amazing ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Wow!

It ws an amazing n completely adorable story.

Too gud.

Maaneet journey ws so very well portrayd widout leaving anything incomplete.

Bt guessd it had one more part,showing their growing lov n ofcourse marriage. Parents ko "shock" bhi toh dena tha.



Thr were many things i liked in dis os bt best ws lines by maan to geet in disc.
Dat part ws superb...


Keep writng such adorable n romantic stories on maaneet.


Thank u again

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
wow...dis is true love...jahan dono ekdoosre se effortlessly pyar karte hai...jahan dil ki baat zuban pe ane se pehle dil samajh lete hai...m sooo happy fr dem...

superb n beautiful os...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely os n fr d pm also...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm bt read n commented already!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story...loved the way u narrated it...would love to read more of ur works...have u written anything else on maaneet other than this os n ur ff...if yes pls provide the link pls...eagerly waiting to read more stories of yours
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the journey from their marriage proposal to their friendship and their now confession is beautiful...

issi liye kehte hain parents know exactly what is good for their children...

thanx for pm...

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