OS- I Love You Shiv

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Everyone, Its me again, Raz. With another OS! I should really be working on a literature review, but i couldn't resist. Seeing today's episode and precap, and seeing the lack of Ansh scenes, the extremely bad writer had to kick in.. I needed to write my thoughts.

Tell me how it is...

OS-I Love You - Shiv

Anandi quickly had her heart-to-heart conversation with Dadisa. Ending it off by telling Dadisa she has to go and won't stay for dinner as she will eat with Shiv and her Saare(in-laws). She quickly ran down the stairs and went to the table and quickly bid everyone 'Bye". Sumitra was extremely happy. She could read it and sense it from Anandi's face and voice and smile that she was definitely in love and that too with Shiv. Jagya could read it too, though he was happy for her, he still felt extremely bad and foolish for leaving such a precious gem.

Anandi was on her way. She was smiling and mumbling all the mad thoughts in her head. All was going through her head was "I love you, Shiv" , "I love you , Shiv" and "i love you Shiv". Her mumbling continued. "hmmf Shiv, the workaholic didn't even remember me, since i called him, he didn't bother to even see if everything was okay". Just then, Shiv called and she end the call. "Im not going to talk to him right now, im only going to talk to him, when i get home, and now Anandi Shivraj Shekhar, use your sharp brain and tell him your feelings!

Shiv on the other hand, came home to inform the family that he found out about Ratan Singh and he will meet the police on the way. They are in Jaipur and he must go. But when he came home CM informed him that Anandi was still at the BadiHaveli. He had called her for she to end the call. Which he found very strange, but having tough responsibilities, he had to go. Just then Anandi returned and saw him going away. She even shouted him 'Shiv" Shiv rukiye(stop/wait), but he didn't hear her.


When Anandi went in CM told her, and Anandi felt bad. Sanchi taunted her about being at the BadiHaveli for too long and not answering her Shiv Bhaiyya's phone. Anandi just went inside gloomily.


Inside her room, she was talking to herself. They she was feeling so guilty and bad. She picked up the frame with their wedding pic and looked at Shiv. She silently apologised for him and for being so stupid(this is how she is feeling). She hugged the picture and cried and went to sleep.


Early in the morning around 4am, Shiv returned. The police had Ratan and his family in custody and Shiv had the baby and a lawyer along with him. He had gotten permanent custody for Ganga's baby. He completed all the formalities and Ganga got her child.


As he returned home, seeing the time and knowing his family and now Anandi too, he knew no one would be up so early. So he unlocked the front door and went into the room. There, tired-as-hell, he say Anandi clutching the picture frame to her heart, sprawled out on the bed. He took the picture and saw it was their wedding's one, and he was pretty shocked. Too tired to even bother, he lay on the inch of the bed, even though he had little of space. Anandi mumbled, 'Shiv, your back? I missed you sooo much' cuddling onto his warmth. Shiv was too shocked, Forget his tiredness, he wanted to know what the hell was wrong with his wife. He immediately checked her forehead and sensing no hot temperature, he went to smell her mouth. Was she sick or drunk? No!


Shiv, what are you doing? First, you come home so late, don't even inform me and now you don't even want me to sleep!. Lie down right now! She continues mumbling in the most sweetest, fresh-ish voice Shiv have ever heard her in. Anandi moved now, moving her small, petite body and fitting it perfectly on Shiv, wrapping her arms, one on his waist and the other on the chest and his her face there. Shiv, my-friend-in-love,i-am that-girl. I love you Shiv and i cant live without you. Shiv completed the embrance and replied sweetly to her too" Anandi i love you too!"

Guys tell me if i was too hasty at the ending part..I think i was..!

Comments are all welcome. Hope You Enjoyed.😳

Edited by _naksh_raz - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very sweet. I hope it happens the way u narrated. Very simple and no melodrama. Just I guess cv r in far some melodrama and anandi waiting to confess her love for some more time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its lovely!! This is what all AnShians hope would happen... I hope nothing goes wrong between AnSh and esp. that Shiv doesn't get hurt :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So sweet and simple! 😳 I know it probably won't happen this way, but it's still a lovely way for it to happen.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one but as they say if wishes were horses men would ride 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very cute, hope we can get something sweet like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
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His os is perfectly suited for BV and anandi's confession.. Pure and simple :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayee!
The sweetest confession ever!
LOved it!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simply sweeett Raz!
You should write more often! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wish we anshians could get to see something like this on TV...but alas...we need to remove our frustrations, our wishes, our hopes through fictions written on IF...
goood going Raz...

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