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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum start ... Luved it...
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Hey... I just read your story.. i really liked it.. armaan and ridhima were best friends... suddenly he had stopped his contact with her.. what happend to him? now she got a call... does it from armaan ? iam very curious to find out... and you write very well dear... continue soon... thnx for the.pm
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Hiii...Awesome ff...Loved it...interesting concept...ridzy sooo different...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Aparna :)
First of all Congrats on ur first ff 🤗
Thanks for the PM. i just read the parts & i LOVE it .The Prologue was WOW! And the parts were Awesome. i am loving ur writing. I dont feel this is ur first fiction reading the parts. Very well written. What happened in AR's life? why ridz is saying she cannot trust after everything that happened in the past? Why did armaan move to Newyork & y did he stopped contacting riddhima? Is it armaan on the phone?
Eager to read ahead. Cont soon. and add me in ur PM list.
Take Care

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Posted: 12 years ago
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update coming in a day or two :D thankieee people for all ur support :)mwah...aparna ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I don't like number 13 :( I would update once this thread is completed :P
Part 3 is almost completed :P
I would update as soon as this page is completed :P
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Originally posted by: rockstar_kajen

I don't like number 13 :( I would update once this thread is completed :P
Part 3 is almost completed :P
I would update as soon as this page is completed :P

ur wish is our command😉
completing 1 page is verrryyy easy
b ready to update in 5 mins 😆
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5 mins? :O isn't that too early? 😆
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wowww superb ff dear:-):-):-)
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Can u please pm me when u update dear???

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PART 3


'Hello' I muttered shutting my eyes tightly only to be hailed by a silence on the other side. Keeping mum for about few seconds, I enunciated "Hello...is someone there" and this time hoisting my inflection a bit. Now, I could hear obscure and a breached voice. For a split second I had a percipience that it was Armaan's voice. Trying to discern the voice I uttered once again "Hello, I cannot hear anything, your voice is cracking too much...hello..." and the call disconnected. I tried calling the number again
but in vain. Huh the network. Cursing the company millionth time in the last five minutes, I sighed in sheer disenchantment. But when I think empirically why would he call me after four long years. If he would have cared even an iota, he would have called me long back or atleast would have mailed me. He knew how lonely I was then, I didnot even make many friends after messy break up with moron Akash sehgal. When I look back I am glad that I managed to break up with him, though I lost many friends because of that. Not that they were less mean anyways. Now, my readers please donot think that it mattered to me in any manner today as I had routed it long back. I was not amongst girls who bawl over their breakups all their lives. Though I had snivelled the whole night after the breakup like every other girl, he didnot deserve even a blob of my tear, but rcould I help it? Being just 16, it was really difficult for me to endure all of it at once. All my 'So called friends' had alienated me who once alleged themselves as my best buddies. Atleast that's whatI felt before I realized my bolster Armaan was still there with me. How foolish I was to acctually think that even Armaan had marooned me like everyone else. As the days passed, I realized that people feigned friends with me only to be called as buddies of Akash sehgal's girl friend, in short they wanted to be connected with business tycoon Mohit sehgal's son somehow. I chuckled at the memory. Even I was of the same age as them, but I wasn't so childish. Just because they not capable of being his girlfriends, they used me as their media, to try to hit on him. Not that he was any less, he just needed a chance to toy with affections of girls. How callow I was to fall for a philanderer like him. Almost every day I used to haggle with Armaan about Akash. He had been telling me since the day I started dating Akash, that he was not a good person. But I being so obstinate, didnot pay any heed to him. I still remember every detail of that episode of my life.

Flashback, 8 years ago, St. Xaviers Jr. College Mumbai.

'ugrhhh, what does he think of himself. Is he the only person alive on the earth who is mature enough to recognize a person? "pookie, he is an atrocious guy. I have told u thousand times to maintain distance with him. If you're hurt don't come to me. I won't warn u after this"' I imitated him adding further ' warn my foot' I stomped my foot in enragement. Just then I felt someone's hand creeping around my waist and I flinched in fright at the sudden touch. "s, it's me" I heard his husky voice. It was Akash. Feeling him nuzzling his nose in the crook of my nape, I turned myself in his hold to look at him. Looking directly into his eyes, I gasped. It scared the hell out of me. His eyes were blood shot red and there was an unusual smirk plastered on his lips. "umm, I-I ha-have a lecture, I will s-see u while leaving." I felt myself fumble and tried bolting from his hold while wincing. But instead he tightened his grip around me, menacing me even more. "who are you fooling baby? Since when did you start attending classes in the break." his mouth smelt of alcohol. This made me realize that he was inebriated. "Akash, leave me, You're drunk." I winced, struggling in his deathly grip to disentangle myself from him. Somehow I managed to push him with as much strength as I could and when I was about to step out of the room he clasped my hand from the elbow pinning me against the adjacent wall. "where are u running sweetheart?" he whispered getting dangerously close to me which scared me to the core.

Flashback ends

Shrill ring of my phone brought me out of the chain of thoughts. It was mum.
"hey mom..."
"Riddhima, how many times have I told you to change your sim. If u don't wanna change your sim, get your number ported." there she goes again.
"yes mum, I would get it done in a day or two." I chuckled.
"Now what made you laugh? It's so difficult for others to contact you. I had to call atleast fifteen times for your call to connect." she exasperated.
"I am sorry mom. I promise to get it done tomorrow after office. You love me no" I tried manipulating her.
"okay, now stop trying being extra sweet. Listen Armaan called an hour back."
"What? Who called?" I asked baffled, not believing my ears.
"he had been calling you since last two hours. He asked me to tell you to check your mail and..." before she could continue I cut the call and hastily went to grab my laptop from the study, feeling squirt of mixed emotions emerging in my guts. Switching on the laptop, I impatiently waited for it to buffer, tapping my fingers on the table and capering up and down on the chair. Inserting the dongal, I logged in my gmail account and clicked on the last email which was by ARMAAN MALIK with my lips curled into a faint smile and a smear of tears covering the sclera of my eyes.


Xoxox

finally completed...please please please do comment
Please don't kill me 😛
Lots a love
Aparna ❤️
Edited by rockstar_kajen - 12 years ago

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