*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER pt 11 pg 118 28/2/2013 - Page 62

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
read all the parts loving it
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART - 10

GEET was in state of depression. She wont talk to anyone and wants to spend time alone. Daima nd Ridz leave her alone in her room. Whearas Maan was busy in sort out their grievance with Sam. After talking with her he returnd to KM in mid-night. He reached to his room and scanned the place throughly. She was not there. Although her accessiories were present as it before but not she. Maan nvr expect that she leave his home also. He search for her in whole mansion. Maan asked from the servant who was struggling with Parth.

"Parth baba pls so jaiye sir aayenge to hum dono ko dant padegi.",their servant try his level best to make Parth sleep as Gauri and Pratham not in a mansion.

"deepak where is bhaiya and bhabhi?",he started with casual talk.

"sir wo 1 business party me gaye hai,derse lautenge.",he ans coldly and again indulge with Parth who is very much busy in jumping on his bed.

"or Geet?",he was hesitated first coz he not aware whather she told or not about them to anyone.

But before servant tell him anything Parth burst on him."GF do dinn se ghar nai aai apki wajhse. Coz u scold her badly. Aap bahut bure ho. I hate u chachu.",he glared Maan and ran from there. Deepak also folow him without ans his que.

Maan doest ask much coz deep inside he is afraid what if his bhaiya and bhabhi asked from him about her. Whole night he is only preparing him self for the questionare of Gauri & Pratham.

Next day Daima told Ridzi to get ready for a collage,as her mother sent her clothes and books. Ridz fresh n up and asked for Geet. Daim told her that she is still sleeping so dont woke her.

"nai Daima. Geet aise muh chupa k ghar nai baithegi.usne kya galti ki hai jo wo aise chhupe? Use sbka samna karna hi hoga. Daima aap b.fast lagwaiye main use uthati hu.",Ridzi dont want that she locked herself in home.

She reached to her room and found her sleeping. She sot near her to wake her but as she touched her body,she found it exceptionaly more warm. She touched her forehead and realize she have fever. Ridzi calld Daima and immediately calld the doc too. Doc came and checkd her. Daim and Ridz get worrieds for her,but doc assures them that she will b fine soon.its a very normal temp.so need to worry much about this. He leave.

"Daima firr main aaj yahi rukti hu iske paas",she dont want to leave her side in such a pathetic sit.

"nai beta tu apna collage miss mat kar or firr main to hu hi iske paas.",Ridzi dont want to go but Daima insist her and feed her so she go for a collage.

It was too late when Sun dawn but as he is not bother about time sleep calmly. When whole mansion is lived with many sounds of daily works of servants then his sleep broked and he awaked with a jerk. Glancing at the time piece he realize its alredy 10 am and he is still in his bed. Already missed his first lect.and still need 1 mor hr which means missd sec lect.tooo. He quickly came down. Parth is alrady left for his school and Pratham is all set to leave. Evrything is seems so normal. No 1 asked any que from him. Their silence tourched him but he was in hurry so dont bother much and quiclky took his bike to reached to collage. When he entred in the premisies,one of his team mate told him that their coach is summond him right now. He alredy missed his 2 lects.now 3rd 1 is also in a row. He reachd to his coach who glared him furiously. He knows now he is gonna take is class.

"what the hell are u think of ur self. Team me achhe players ki kami nai hai.if u wont take it seriously,u will loose ur opportunity,and u better mark my words.",without asking any que,he shower his anger on Maan.

"sir pls just listen to me once",he try a useless effort tofooled him but he was strick man who doesnt believe in exciuses.

"Listen Maan i wont believe in excuses. Life baar baar mauka nahi deti. Aaj tume 6 baje collage pahuchna tha practise k liye but u missed it. Ab 1 hafte baad selction hoga final team ka us dinn b agar tum late hue to samjh lena tumhari team me shamil hone ka dream wahi end ho jayega. Jo log apni life manage nahi kar skte wo kuch nai kar skte. Now get out of here i dont wanna see ur face.",he shout loud and poured his all anger on him in one go without hear his any excuse.

He get frustrated more and when he reached into his 3rd lect.his prof.scold him for coming late and disturb the class,which make him hell irritated. In one single day he humilate as mush he cant even imagined. The hearthrob and star student of a collage is scolded by his profs one by one. He held back his frustration and scold Geet in his mind for all this.

"it was all her fault. Kya bigad jata uska agar mujhe remind krwa deti sab to lekin nai. Aaj uski wajhse sab gadbad ho gaya.",he moved and sit on his seat which is empty completley. He scanned whole class for her but she is not present. He cursed her more.

CONTINUE IN NEXT COMMENT
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CONTINUE..

After class get over,1 grl came to him to handover Geet's notebook to him.

"Maan ye Geet ki notebook hai use de dena. Waise wo aaj aai kyu nai?",she asked him casualy.

"dont ask me.i m not her servant.",he burst his frustratio on that grl. But before she said more Ridzi came and took her notebook from her. That grl leave from there.

"sai kaha Maan u r nt her servant. Servant to wo thi thumhari jo bina kisi garz k tumhare har chhote se chhote kaam ka itna dhyan rakhti thi. Kyu hai na? Aaj 1 dinn nai hua usse tumse durr hue or tumari puri zindagi dagmagane lagi hai",she taunts him harshly,making him show him the place where he stands wihtout her.

"so now these day she made u her well wisher. Just bcoz of her aaj mujhe sare prof.se dant padi.mera pura shedule use pata hai firr b usne mujhe...",he doesnt effected by her taunts and conti.cribbing and allegated her more. But this was enough for Ridz and she too snap bak.

"Maan she is not ur servant understood. If u forgotten then i reminds u that she broked all relations from u. Divorcee papers k sath sath usne tumse dosti ka b har rishta khtam kar dia hai.so now stop interfearing in her life. Jiske liye tumne use itna torture kiya,usse virginity test krwaya,ab usi ko bolo tumhara dhyan rakhne k liye.",she glared him furiously and also made him shocked by her words. Maan was astonished completely. Reading his face expressions she conti,before he asked anything more."dont stare me like this. I know evrything coz is pure time main uske sath thi. Even kal b jab Armaan use ek friend ki trah console kr raha tha,lekin tumhari ghatia soch k kya kehne.or waise ek bat batao mujhe jab tume usse koi lena dena hi nahi hai to apni life me kisi se b mile ya kuch b kare tume koi haq nai hai usse swal puchhne ka. So from now stay away from her.",she was so much angry on him and show his face to him. Meanwhile Armaan also came and both vanished from there.

After their exit Sam came to him. She hugged him and both leave too. Sam trying to lighten his mood but he was not in him right now. Her words echoed in his ears and violate his mind. Now he realizing that she actualy left him,for never coming back. Sam is talking non stop but he hardly hear anything.

"kya baat hai Maan? I dont think so that u hear any single word of mine.",she too realize that he dont pay nay heed on her.

"no actualy i m thinking about Geet.",he spoked without thinking and then realize that it doesnt like by Sam."nai wo abi humne ghar me kuch bataya nai hai na isliye"

"oh,i was thinking you missed her.",she said rudly.

Maan hold her hands to change her mood and topic both."leave it,tell me howz ur dance practise going on?"

"fab.(she paused and then agin conti.)Maan i was thinking hume date pe jana chahiye just like before. It is very much needed to go far from all this stuff. What you say? A dream date jaise tum pehle organize karte the. I love you all surprizes.",Sam wants to spend more time with Maan so he wont remember her again&again.

"sure.i'll come in evng to pick up u.",he smiled and assured that he fulfilled her demand.

Sam leave from there. Maan was hell confuse now what he do to pleasue her. Coz in past time his all dates and arrangments is done by Geet only.even from his clothes to his colonge is decided by her,coz he dont know about Sam's likes and dislikes. This was the first time he have to manage all these things alone and also made it perfect in all sences. His head start spinning. Some how he select one place and booked table for them. Then he opnd his wardrobe and glance her cloths which r still here,rosed his frustration. He realize how it is difficult to manage everything when she is not around him. He stroked his fingers on her dress hanging on a side. He opnd his mouth to speak but then his mind realize him its all over. He threw all clothes out 1 by 1 but yet not make his mind what to wear. In selection of cloths he took 2 much time and reached late on place. Sam was hell irritated on him for making her wait for almost 1:30hr:min. Maan apolozise and gave nonsence excuses. Her face is turn red,coz first he was late sec the smell of clonge he wore is also irritating her nostrils. But she dont wont to spoil her mood so she entred inside with him. It was a complete crowdy place. Noise and noise all around,coz 1 family came here 2 celebrate their kids birthday and many kids were playing in whole hall. She glared him 1 more time. Finally both sat on their table. Maan odred food coz they cant able to talk much as kids noise raising evrytime he/se opnd their mouth. Sam sw he ordrd sea food which is allergic to her.

"Maan what is this? Sea food,u know mujhe allergy hai isse? How can u forgot this?",she shout on him.

Maan who is alredy in much confusion now fumbles more. He clenced his eyes nd reminds what Geet told hm,nd realize,she told him that Sam dosnt like sea food and he thought she told that she like it...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE


HI FRINDS ME AGAIN WITH ANOTHER NOTE. BUT THIS TIME WANNA SAY THANX TO ALL WHO GAVE THEIR LIKE AND COMMENTS 🤗 THANK YOU SO MUCH. PLS IS BAAR LIKE JALDI COMPLETE KARNA. MUUUHHH ❤️ YOU

OK GUYS NOW COMES TO A PRECAP.


PRECAP:-

GUYS I DESINGED THE NEXT UPDATE ACCORDING TO YOUR WISH SO DO TELL ME WHAT YOU WANNA READ

1.MAKE THIS DATE MORE MESSIER


2.GEET'S REACTION

OR

3.OR I WILL DECIDED MYSELF SOMETHING 😉
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan you deserve this , you missed your personal Secretary , event manager but not friend .still you busy on manofying your stupid Gf without reason >Not once thought why geet absent from class n her friendship ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part...
maan k saath jo ho raha hai accha hai...
good he deserves this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
even for all this he is blaming him chi does he deserve to be call a human i dont think so he was behgaving as if geet is her PS an blaming everything on her jerk nahi to

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for update

do cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Maan deserves this punishment

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