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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know it won't happen this way...but the story came into my head

Coming from where the episode left off of...just a short

Virman see in shock that Virika are talking to a guy with a file in his hands. Virman are sad to see that their siblings have gotten their divorce papers ready. Virman look at each other and begin worrying on what they should do. Manvi is so hurt and tired of this nonsense that she leaves the hall very fast. Virat goes after her but she is too fast for him. He looses sight of her, then he suddenly notices her far away walking unaware of her surroundings. He calls her name, but no answer because she is lost in her own thoughts about how she keeps messing things up. How everything she tries to do for the betterment of someone it backfires on her. Manvi walks straight onto the street with cars coming...Virat sees her and sees an oncoming car almost about to hit her. He runs as fast as he can and removes her, but he gets hurt. Manvi gets back into her senses and sees Virat on the ground. She cries for help and runs out the whole family.

Hospital scene:

Jeevika and Viren are upset and angry at themselves for taking the prank too far. Jeevika sees a broken Manvi and goes to comfort her and Manvi is shown crying in Jeevika's arms unaware whose arms she was crying in. When she does realize it, she backs off from Jeevika and starts screaming at Jeevika. Manvi begins to blame Virika for Virat's condition. And she says that if anything happens to Virat then she will never ever forgive her di and jiju. {Manvi says this in hurt and pain}.

Virat's treatment and whatever is being done while Virika are not being allowed near Virat. Few days go by and one day the Doctor lets everyone know that Virat is now stable and one person in the family can go see him. In default Manvi goes. She sits by his side, feeds him, helps him walk, gives him sponge baths, etc. Virat notices that Virika have not come to see him, so he asks Manvi and Manvi says why should they come after them being the reason you are in this condition. Virat asks Manvi how she can think like that. Virat explains to Manvi and Manvi realizes that she made huge mistake. She leaves the room and sees Virika outside the room. Viren asks Manvi about how Virat is doing. Manvi then tells Virika that they should go see him for themselves. Virika are happy to hear Manvi allow them to see Virat. The magical four are in one room, Virika apologize to Virman, but as usual Virman tells them not to ask for forgiveness. Manvi in return asks for forgiveness for reacting way that she did and that she should not have reacted that way.


Not sure how this sounds, or if it sounds good. I'm not good at writing that much. If something like this happens of course our Virman and Virika would make it look better.


You can give your opinions, but please make sure it is not attacking anyone...

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PyaasiChudail69 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will be over the moon if maanvi reacts this way
I wish this happens i toh loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It would be a first time for her to react against Jeevika, Jeevika has always thrown anger on manvi even if Manvi was never at fault. I think it is high time for Manvi to get angry on her di. Show some serious emotion.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Churri

It would be a first time for her to react against Jeevika, Jeevika has always thrown anger on manvi even if Manvi was never at fault. I think it is high time for Manvi to get angry on her di. Show some serious emotion.


Ya its high time maanvi should react but agar di mannu ki gardan(neck) 360 degree ghuma de toh bhi di right hoti hai maanvi always justify the title toh she won't but i want her to react this time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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o m g... please god let this happen... I just loveddd what you wrote!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for the support yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Iv been wishing for a Virat accident track for months!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really want such track in d show. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I would love this track.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: copypaste



Ya its high time maanvi should react but agar di mannu ki gardan(neck) 360 degree ghuma de toh bhi di right hoti hai maanvi always justify the title toh she won't but i want her to react this time

i agree manvi being angry at jeevs its impossible..

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