A GIRLS CID TEAM 4 (HAUNTED FORT ASHA INVESTIGATES

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THE HAUNTED FORT


HI FRIENDS😊
THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR LIKEING MY PREVIOUS STORY AS WELL
HERE I AM WITH ANOTHER STORY. NOT AN ORDAINARY CASE BUT SOMETHING A LITTLE SCARY, SO BETTER WEAR SOME GLOVES SO THAT U CAN'T BITE UR NAILS DON'T TELL ME LATER THAT OUR NAILS HAVE GONE BECAUSE OF YOUšŸ˜”šŸ˜†

ANYWAYS SIT BACK AND RELAX I AM SURE YOU GONNA LOVE THIS STORY

STARRING-

POORVI




SHREYA




TASHA





MUSKAAN

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AND KAJAL

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TOGETHER THEY ARE GONNA SOLVE THIS CASE AS A TEAM







OF COURSE LED BY THEIR ACP
YOU KNOW WHO SHE IS IF U READ MY PREVIOUS STORY IF NOT U BETTER THAT BEFORE READING THIS



SO SIT BACK AND ENJOY WE ARE ABOUT TO BEGIN...



scene 1-

inspector kajal started her day like most of the common people, with her newspaper. She did the same that day. But unlike every morning when she would just sit back relax, read just the headlines, today was different
she read the first page as usual all right but just when she opened the second page her eyes widened, and she literally jumped up. A curious and shocked expression on her face. She immediatly picked up her phone with impatience scanned through the contact list till she finally reached the name 'tasha' she pressed the call button and waited impatiently for tasha to pick up the phone.
Tasha on the other hand, after the previous night was very sleepy. She was very glad that their new acp, asha mam. was kind enough to give the team off. The phone irritated her and she did not want to answer it, but when she saw it was from kajal she answered it in a sleepy tone
"good morning tasha, am i disturbing you?" kajal asked
"no not really yaar kya hua, koi case to nahi aaya naa?"
"nahi nahi yaar vo hua yun ki.."
"aire by the way poorvi ne tujhe new acp ke baare mein bataya?"
"haan asha mam na, poorvi ne mujhe pura bataya ki kal kya hua aur mene muskaan aur shreya ko bata diya ki aaj chutti hai."
"good girl, to chutti ke din subah subah kya kam aa gaya kajal."
"subah subah, tasha time nahi dekha kya 11 baj gaye hai, tujhe 11 subah subah lagta hai?"
"agar tu kal raat , ya aaj 4 baje mere aur poorvi ke saath aai hoti naa to tujhe bhi subah subah hi lagta."
"theekh hai theekh hai tu soo jaa baad mein batati hun."
"nahi yaar abhi tune phone kar hi daya hi to bata do kya bolna tha."
"pakka na?"
tasha yawned "haan yaar, aise bhi mein abhi uthne hi waali thi."
"okay, aaj ka a2znewspaper ka second page khool?"
"kya chapa hai?"
"khol to sahi."
"bata na yaar, mene vo paper issue nahi kiya hai."
"arre usme silghi fort ke baare mein diya hai."

tasha sits up with an as shocked expression as kajal had had.

"what silghi fort, tumhaara matlab vo haunted for?"
"haan tasha. Vahan par ek aur dissapearence."
"wow yaar 1960 se uss fort mein jo bhi insaan suraj dhalne ke baad gaya, kabhi vapis nahin aaya. Aur to aur kuch gaon waalo ne vahan paar ek bhoot dekha aisa wo kehte hai, of course ye bhoot ki baat mein nahi maanti magar ye case vaakai mein strange hai"
"haan, aur din mein jab log unhe dhoondne gaye tab bhi un gayab logon ke koi traces nahi mile."
"yup aur to aur government tak ne uss fort mein raat ke baad jana manaa kar diya hai."
"to aab kaun gayab hua?"
"ek journalist kritika, aur unki teen saheliyaan uss fort mein raat ko gaye the teen din pehele aur abhi taak gayab hai."
" kajal aaj ki chutti cancel"
"kya!!! par kyun yaar ek hi din to chutti mili hai aur vo bhi..."
"theekh hi yaar chill, din bhaar araam kar le, aaj shaam 4 baje cafe kapadia mein milte hai."
"vohi cafe naa jo beareau ke paas hai."
"haan, tu shreya aur muskaan ko bata de, mein thodi der baad poorvi ko call karti hun, kaj raat bhaar bechaari nahi soo payi."
"thekh hai or sorry tujhe disturb kiya."
"kya yaar tu bhi, bhul gayi shreya ne kya kaha tha, friendship mein no sorry, no thank you."
"tasha hum friends thodi naa."
"to kya hai??"
"yaar hum beheno ki tareh hi to hai, aur behena mein sorry thank you to chalta rehta haišŸ˜‰"
"wah kajal maan gaye tujhe aab phone rakhu."
"haan baba, bye aaj milte hai, aur poo ko yaad se phone kar deena."
"okay yaar."


scene 2-

"winnie the poo kahan reh gaayi?" shreya asked as she, tasha, kajal and muskaan were sitting in the cafe waiting for her
"wah kaafi aacha naam rakha humaari poorvi ka." muskaan said
"uski personality ko suit karta hai winnie the poo." tasha said
"kaise?" kajal asked
"humaari sabse cchoti saathi hai na isliye."
"aacha mujhe laga ki to bolegi kyunki vo bahut cute hai?" muskaan said with a smile
"cute to shreya, kajal tu aur mein bhi hun muskaan."
"thank you tasha." shreya said with a smile
"vo to hai tasha." kajal said
"vo dekho aa gayi." muskaan said indicating towards poorvi who was crossing the road and comming towards them
"hey guys, sorry mein late hun."
"lol winnie the poo aa gayi." tasha said
"winnie the poo?? kaun mein???"
"haan shreyu ne tujhe naya pet name diya hai- winnie the poo" kajal said
"aww thank u yaar shreya, paar iski kya jarurat thi i know i am cute."poorvi joked
"ok guys anyways joking wagarah baad mein pehele case ke bare mein baat kare." kajal said
"ek minute, acp mam nahi aayi?" muskaan asked
"nahi mene unhe jaan bujhkar nahi bulaya, ho sakta hai ki vo busy ho isliye aaj chutti de di ho, plus hume jo baat karni hai uske liye acp mam ke hone ki jaarurat nahi." tasha said
"ok to hume yahan uss silghi fort ke baare mein kuch baat cheet karni hai." kajal said "vo case itne dino se police handle kar rahi hai magar aaj taak vo gayab log ya unke baare mein koi saabut nahi mila." kajal continued
"to kyun na yeh case aab cid solve kaare." tasha added
"tumhaara matlab hum uss fort mein jaakar chaan been kare?" shreya asked
"haan magar din mein nahi raat ko." poorvi added
"okay magar kya vo safe ho gaya." muskaan asked
"risk to lena hi padegaa muskaaan, after all aam janta ka saavaaal hai, government ne uss fort mein raat ke bad entry baand kar di phir bhi log wahan ghuss jate hai aur phir gayab." shreya said
"to kaab jaye" Kajal asked
"how about aaj raat." tasha said
"itni jaaldi are you sure." poorvi asked
"poorvi 32 log vahan se gayab ho chuke hai, isse pehele ki aur bhi log gayab ho jaaye hume vahan jaana hi hoga, aur kajal mujhe lagta hai aaj traat perfect ho gaya." tasha said
"pehele thodi planning to kar lo." a woman said, all the cops turned behind and whom did they see there, none other than their acp Asha. And all of them immediatly stood up
"mam aap yahan?" poorvi asked
"haan poorvi, apni ek dost se milne aayi to aachaanak yum loon ko dekha, do cops se mil chuki hun, soocha bakiyoon se bhi mil lun." Asha said
"mam yeh hai kajal, ye muskaan aur ye shreya." tasha said
"aur guys yahi hai humaari nai acp Asha mam." poorvi added
"m.. Mam, hello mam." kajal said shaking hands with her
"ahh kajal, tumse milkar bahut khushi hui, acp sir ne tumhaare bare mein bhi bahut batay."
"thank you mam."
"good evenng mam." shreya said
"shreya, tum new ho magar tumhaare bhi kai kisse sune mene, tumse milkar aacha laga."
"mam, aapse milkar bahut khushi hui, hum lucky hai ki aap hume lead karengi."
"tum logon jaisi fabulous group ke saath kaam karne ke liye mein lucky hun" Asha said
"arre, thank you soo much mam." Poorvi said
"Tum logon ki dosti kaafi aachi hai, bhale hi mein tumhaari acp hun, mujse ek dost jsise baat kar sakte hai, vaise tum log aaj raat ko silghi fort jaa rahe ho aur mujhe nahi bulaya."
"mam vo hume laga ki aap shayad busy hoongi isliye, sorry vo."
"Koi baat nahi, magar ab mein tumhaari acp hun, akele kuch bhi karne se pehele mujse puch lo, mein jaanti hun tum logon ko aadat nahi, magar sorry tum logon ke paa aur koi rasta nahi."
the cops smiled
"to hum log jaaye mam?" shreya asked
"haan magar mein bhi chalungi, tum logon ko ye risky case akele sambaalne nahi dungi, tum logo ke paas guts hai vaise."
"thank you mam." poorvi said 'aap abhi kuch planning ke baare mein keh raahi thi na."
"haan haan, mein ye keh rahi thi ki bina kisi planning ke tum log ye case kaise solve nahi kar sakte, vo fort bahut bada. Ek kaam karo, uss fort ka mam le kaar aayo."
"mam mere car mein ek laptop hai, usme hum uss fort ka map dhund sakte hai."
"haan bilkul, apna laptop lao kajal, fast, aaj raat ko hi jaayene."
Kajal brings her laptop, puts in on the table n searches in google maps for the silgha fort
"there it is." she says
'kaafi bada hai." shreya says
"okay, hum log teen do-do ke groups mein bat jaate hai"tasha said
"haan tasha, tum aur kajal, poorvi tum aur shreya aur muskaan tum mere saath chalo."
"yes mam." she says
"tasha aur kajal, tum dono ho group a, poorvi auir shreya, tum dono ho group b aur mukaaan, hum dono group c, theekh hai."
"yes mam"
"good" Asha, in the map, points outdifferent routes in the forts and assignes each group a particular rourte and area.
"walkie talkie paas rakhna, aur saath rehena, yeh case thooda risky hai."
"ok mam"

scene 3-

The dark night is back, but unlike the quite and peaceful previous night, the dogs are howling that night, The white cid qualis stops right in front of the fort. The cops, all wearing full sleved jackets, and bearing torches guns and walkie talkies slowly walk towards the entrance.
"sab log sambhal kaar." Asha said

After they entered the fort, they all wished each other luck and seperated into groups, all of them unaware of what was going to happen. Taha and kajal were neither frightened nor nervous, until they saw on the floor a handkerchief. Kjala picked it up and smelled it, it had a strange smell
"bada hi ajeeb smell hai." kajal said and handed it t tasha. Tasha too smelled it, but just when she did she saw kajal looking dizzy, held her head and looked like she was going to faint. Tasha was just about to ask her what heppened, but then she too srtarted to feel dizzy.
"oh no" she thought to herself and lifted the handkerchief, just then kajal fell on the floor n fainted.
"kajal.: tasha bent down to her friend, she too felt that she was about to faint. She was feeling weak, but yet she pulled out the walkie talkie.
"she was just about to say something, but the she longer had the strength to hold the walkie talkie and it fell down, Tasha eyes shut immediatly after that and she too fainted.

Meanwhie..

Poorvi and shreya were also trying to find some clues but just then they felt a presence behind them. Both of them turned, there was no one
"i am sure, pev\chge koi to tha." Shreya said
"haan mujhe bhi yaahi laga." poorvi added
They boyth continued to walk but then they had the feeling again, they turned and saw a figure running away. They ran in the same direction as the figure, shoutng to him to stop. They reached a point where they both had to seperate, Asha had told them not to seperate at any cost, yet they had too, as they were determined that the manhad gone in either of two directions, shreya ran a little further, but then stopped. Loked about and then when she suddenly turned back, someone knocked her out with a steel rod.
On the other hand. When poorvi stopped running someone grasped her from behind, covering jher nose and mout. She stuggled hard, but could not move the hand away, and from suffocation eventually fainted.

on the other side of the fort..

Asha andmuskaan walked alertly
"sambhaal kar muskaan, kuch bhi ho sakta hai." Asha said
muskaan who was busy with the walkie talkies, gave asha a worried look and said
"mam poorvi aur tasha, dono answer nahi kaar rahe."
"kya!!"
"haaan aur mene chaaro ko cal karne ka bhi try kiya, unka phone bhi band aa raha hai."
"Oh no." Asha said just then she looked up, a ROPE, Asha followed it with her gaze, it came from a nearby point in the fort. sha then looked down, muskaan was slowly walking forward.
"muskaan ruk jao." asha said and dived forward puhing muskaan to the side
"mam kya hua???" Muskaan asked
"tum theekh ho na?"
"haan mam magar hua kya?"
"ye dekho" Tasha said and pointed on the floor, just a few inches in front of muskaan lay a net made from ropes. Asha tossed a small stone into it, And the net came to life grasping it and lifting it up in midddle of the air and dragging it towards it's origin
"humare saathi wahin honge come on."

On the point of origin...

A don wearing a brown leather jacket and hat laughed aloud looking towards the sky.
"tum nahi baachoge." Shreya's feeble voice said from behind him, he turned. Just beside his table covere with drugs, the four copos lay tied.
"hahaha tumhe wakayi aisa lagta hai bachaa?"
"haan humaari asha mam aur muskaan tumhe nahi chodenge." Poorvi said
"to sun lo baache, jis tarah tum charon mere jaal mein faase vo dono bhi faas gaye hai, vo dono abh aate hi honge, aur jis tarah un 32 logon ka gala katkar unka shaarir yahin gaad diya vaise tum bache log aur tumhaari uss mam ka bh gaad duna."
"deenge maar chood samjha." Tasha said
"mein denge nahi mar raha hun ye saach hai samjhi, ek baar un logon ko aane do fir cid ka the end. He laughs loudlyšŸ˜†
"ek baat yaad rakh badmash, jis kisi ne bhi aaj tak cid ko marnme ki koshihs ki hai, vo khud maut ka shikar ho gaya hai." Kajal said
"aacha ohh mein to iss ladki ki baton se daar gaya.: Helaughs again even louder just then his man comes in.
"boss v o dono ladkiyaan humaare jaal se baach gayi."
"kya!!!!!"
"ab haso." poorvi said
"tumhaara khel khatam." Shreya said
"in chaaron ko khatam kar do fir un dno se ladunga." the don said
"yes boss" the man said and pulled out a gun and pointed it straight towards tasha. Just as he was about to pull the trigger he was shot in the hand. He screamed
"itni kya jaldi hai??" sha said as she and muskaan emerged from the dark in front of the don.
"the dons othe two men were about to shoot at them but before they could muskaan and asha shot them.
"ohh to tum ho jo ki 32 khoon aur drug ki smuggling karke yahan chupkar bethe ho. Tumhara khel khatam." Asha was about to shoot him but just then he pulled poorvi up and removed a pocket knife and placed it on her throat. All the cops were stunned
"gun neeche warna isse upaar pahuncha dunga."
"usse chood do varna anjaam bahut bura hoga." Muskaan said
"aacha to ye dekho."
Saying so the man made a small cut on poorvi cheek and she screamed for a second but then looked up, blood flowing from her cheek
"ab to sirf gaal kata hai agli baar gala hoga."
"chood do use." tasha said
"pehele guns neeche."
"ye ek maniacc lagta hai, guns neeche rakh dete hai, ye poorvi ko wakai maar sakta hai." Asha said
"ye ek maniac hai, isne unn 323 logon ko maar dala." shreya said
"kya"
"haan mam, ye bahut khatarnaak hai aur poorvi ko nuksaan pahuncha sakta hai."
'aab aayi akal theekane, guns neeche."
poori's hand were tied behind her back, just then, she felt on the mans belt something sharp. She slowly began rubbing her rope against it."
"dekh usse chup chap chod samjha hum apne guns neeche rakh rahe hai." Muskaan said
"haan haan ." The doin said
"nahi ye bahut time lagega kuch aur kar poorvi." Poorvi thought to herself "mere paer khule hain magar ye bahut risky hai, Nahi mujhe ye risk lena hi hoga." Poorvi thought
The cops slowly lowered their guns just then poorv kicked the man on his knee, he bent luckily his knoife did not hurt poorvi, just then in a fraction f second poorvi moved aside and asha shot him between his eyes just as he looked up. The don was dead.

in the beareau...

"very well done all of you." Dcp chitrole said to the cops
"asha tumne kamaal kar diya, aur tum sab bhi bahut aache." the cops exchanged smiles and just then dcp's phone rang and he went aside
"good job." Asha said
"thank you mam aapne hum sab ki jaan bachaiyee." Muskaan said and all the other cops smiled
"arre ye to kuch nahi tha. Tum log bhi the kaafi bahadur."

All the cops exchanged smiles. "Abhi dcp definatly ek aur case saupenge." Muskaan said
"don't worry." asha said "case to definatly solve karte rahenge magar aaj raat ko meri taraf se treat."
"wow mam really." poorvi said
"haan y not." Asha said with a smile

Allt the cops had only one thought in their minds that time
'We are going to enjoy solving cases with an acp like asha mam."šŸ˜‰

the end
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really really gud keep up the good work u r improving day by dayšŸ‘
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I am just enjoying this girls-only team. I feel so good imagining ACP Asha leading. 😊

Only issue about this story,..it ended fast...and motive of the kidnapper was not clear. What did he do to the vanished people???
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Originally posted by: neerkhan88

really really gud keep up the good work u r improving day by dayšŸ‘


thank u so much di😳
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Originally posted by: visrom

I am just enjoying this girls-only team. I feel so good imagining ACP Asha leading. 😊

Only issue about this story,..it ended fast...and motive of the kidnapper was not clear. What did he do to the vanished people???



actually i agree that it ended it fast true actually i am very lazy soo got tired of typingšŸ˜›

arre i mentioned na that the kidnapper is a maniac
and he also said that he killed those 32 people😊

if it's not clear wait i will edit that part😊

thanks btw😊
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Originally posted by: poorvisinghcd



actually i agree that it ended it fast true actually i am very lazy soo got tired of typingšŸ˜›

arre i mentioned na that the kidnapper is a maniac
and he also said that he killed those 32 people😊

if it's not clear wait i will edit that part😊

thanks btw😊



edited now read
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btw what is asha's real name
i mean the actress who plays her
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vry nice poorvi,i realy loved the dialoguesšŸ‘
nail biting jitna horror nhi thašŸ˜‰ bt u realy gave it ur bst,thoda fast paced tha,nxt time plz increase d suspnce,bt i realy luv ur idea of the grls team..
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plz put all ur stories in one thread jst my sugstns😊..better luck for the next time..Gud jobšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Welldone poo šŸ‘ keep it up šŸ‘šŸ¼
Ladies cops are best. I like it.😊
Increase the suspnce in your next story. šŸ‘šŸ¼

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