MY POEM ...FROM GAURI TO SHIV

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi sweeties

beaer my poem plz 😳

i am standing in the sun when my shelter is here,

i am standing alone when my shelter is not covering

my head which in the sun ....bare!

i have tears in my eyes my soul die every moment

i just need him to hold me once

when he stare and he is here

i dont ask him to love me but once

keep your hate aside just hold me once

i am here and you are here

just let the world go any where

just me and you every where !

i wrote this last night ...i dont whether u like or not but seriously i guess it is conveying gauri's feelings 😳

with love

amna😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice poem amna.. 😊

yeah it reflects wat gauri is going through and wat she wants to tell shiv...

well written.. šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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you have got a real talent yaar keep it up šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwww sooo sweeeeeeeeeeeet..
ur really talented!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow...dat was sooo nice.. šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

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