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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late update, but here's part B😳

Chapter 5 B

He went to pick up the mobile, and read what was written. His face also changed colours slightly at the message, and he looked at Aisha's face.

"God, i'd kill that guy when i get him!" he said to himself.

Riya looked apprehensively at the murderous look in Arjun's eyes, she guessed that it must contain something very cruel or disgusting. However her top priority was helping Aisha out. So she stayed next to Aisha, and tried talking about a few things to get her to respond, while Arjun took Aisha's mobile and went in the conference. After almost an hour, Riya came to join him in the conference room.

She saw Arjun standing and staring at all the notes and clues. She went to stand close to him and said, "Sir, aisa kya tha ouss mobile mein?" She waited but Arjun was completely ignoring her. She put her hand on his shoulder to get his attention, but Arjun jerkily removed it and turned to face Riya.

"Kya hein Riya? Tumhari himmat kaise hoowi itna kareeb anne ki?" he said angrily. Arjun was still feeling anger at that mms, and Riya had disturbed him at the wrong time, hence he had exploded at her. But since it was not in his style to say sorry, he ignored his outburst and replied as if nothing had happened, "Ousse mms mein Reema thi!"

"Kya?" Riya was so shocked. Arjun passed Aisha's mobile to Riya and let her watch the mms.

The mms was a very short one, barely one minute duration.

There was a huge crowd in a disco, and the camera captured a very beautiful girl dancing her way with other people. Next the girl was leaving with her friends in the car, and the person filming it was following them. Finally the girl got down from the car, and walked into the park. The camera followed the girl, and even followed her when she was running like crazy. And finally there was one last scene where that girl was already dead. An evil laugh could be heard in the background.

"Disgusting person! He actually filmed everything and sent it to Aisha!" Riya said with tears in her eyes. No wonder Aisha was so paralysed with shock after watching it.

She turned to look at Arjun, "Sir, how can someone be so cruel?"

Arjun looked at the tears in Riya's eyes and said gently, "This world is no longer lived by humans Riya, you have to get used to this. People have become animals, actually even worse than animals. But we have to catch this person at any cost!"

"and it seems we have been searching in the wrong direction! This does not appear to be a mishap, or a simple crime. This appears to be a planned murder, the mms and finally sending this to Aisha. This appears to be specially targeted at Aisha!" Arjun said after linking all clues they had till now.

He had already called the others to return to the office to share the video. They both waited for Rathore and the others to come.

"What's going on? Why did you call us back?" Rathore said furiously when he stormed in the conference room.

"Rathore, we are following the wrong lead!" Arjun started but Rathore never let him finished his words.

"Kya bakwas hein yeh? Ab tum humein sikhaoge ki investigation kaisi karni hein?" Rathore said sarcastically.

"No Sir," Arjun replied stressing a lot on the SIR, "it's just that Aisha has just received an mms about Reema!" He passed the mobile to Rathore for him to see the mms.

Rathore was shocked when seeing the mms.

"Ab samjhe Rathore. This is not a normal crime! This case is even more complex than what we are thinking! This seems to be linked to Aisha personally!" Arjun finally said.

He gave Shree the mobile, and asked Shree to trace the number who sent this mms.

"This number has been bought in Delhi Sir, by a certain person named Ashok Shawat!" Shree said after a few minutes.

"Ashok Shawat?" Arjun said, turned towards Riya and asked her to bring Aisha in the conference room.

Edited by haruhi26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yipeee me first!!!!!
waise i m late ...actually i just realized dat i have not read dis story since chapter 3
sorry i was busy wid exams n den probably forgot dis work

just read chapter 3 ..OMG so d girl Reena is Aisha;s sis

Ria supporting her was excellent

Arjun could relate to her d most ...


Chapter4:
i really liked Arjun supporting Aisha...
although dey fought again but liked d way he supported her

Ria brought food her

n who was d guy in strating ..y s he deliberate to ruin Aisha

he killed reema but Y

Chapter 5 A

...julie n arshad were so scared
Rathore shouted at both of dem for dere carelessness

Wat was d message did aisha received

Chapter 5B
Arjun in angry tone
he scolded ria as well

den d brutal MMS...dat was actually scary

hope now dey start d investigation in a different way

n who is " Ashok "

Continue very soon tina
waiting for more

n sorry 1ce again for late comment
Edited by tani23 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW..!!
Ayesha at target...!!!
Nice... continue soon..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update... dat bloody🤬 he captured everythn nd send it to Aisha... hw dare he???? why s he behind Aisha??? Ashok Shawat who s he??? update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di..
superb wrk..
loved it..
totally becum fan of dis wrk of urs..
truly di..
fab!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyccc!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!!

whoss dat ashok😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡!!!

poor ayesha!! 😭 😭 😭 😭!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
feeling bad 4 aisha
how can someone be so cruel
wish etf finds him soon nd punish him worse dan hell
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part ...
Hope they solve the case soon ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update :) loved it
awww poor riya got scolded :(
that idiot he captured everything and sent it to aisha 😡 disgusting
why is that killer behind Aisha?
who is Ashok?
eagerly waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well seriously how ppl can be so ctuel!!! 😡 I was feeling so disguting. & that julie & arshad are too disgusting. Irresponsible ppl. 😡

love the case & the suspence is breath holding. Now who is this Ashok Sawat??😡

Update soon dear,I am impatient about the case.

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