Sapne Sajan Ke -Pg-150 NOTE-04-07-08 - Page 45

KLUE YAAR...I LUV THE WAY U DESCRIBE THINGS..ITS SOOO IMAGINABLE....KEEP IT UP...UPDATE SOON YAAR I WANNA SEE HOW JAI REACTS WHEN HE SEE'S HIS WIFE 😉 IT WAS AWESOME...LIKE ALWAYS...KEEP IT UP 👏

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i just read it...well lemme go back read again and come back with my review... 😉
u see ...my friend says sabr ka phal meetha hota hai... 😆

Poo

Thank you Klue🤗

You saved me from going insane with all my work😆.........absaloutely awesome part............loved the description and can't wait for the Diwali party!😉

very nice
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wooww Klue hun ! tht was a fab part !!
ggrr8 description of the diwali party ! it was just suprebb !! .. 😛
will be waiting of rthe next part eagerlyy !! will want somee jai and bani communication though !! 😳 😉
gr8 part overall hun ! will be waiting .....plzz cont sooon !!!
fanksx !
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that was so good.really cute and sweet.loved it.cant wait to see jai reaction after he sees bani. 😊

OMG hun that waz sooooo FABULOUS...just loved this part...plz plz plz continue soon!!! 👏

Originally posted by: klueless

Part 25 on Pg 65




26

"Arre Bani itni der kahan reh gayee ? "..maasi asked as Bani stormed into the mansion peeved after the heated argument with Jai . haan massi zara pucho to sahi kahan thi madam ab tak…diye khareed rahi thi…lift mai behosh padi thi… 😡
Before she could answer to Maasi's queryHe walked in handing over the car keys to Tony .. Bani walked out of the drawing room taking the stairs to her bedroom leaving Jai and Maasi downstairs
" Munna .sab theek to hai na ..?" sensing Banis withdrawn attitude
Jai gave maasi a wandered look …
"Munnaaaaaa ..tum aur Bani phir se jhagad rahe the? nahi maasi he wasn't fighting…aap aise kaise bechaare ko blame kar sakti ho😳…. Apni bahu se to pucho hua kya…😡" He expelled a heavy breath, raking his fingers through his hair disconcerted
"Kya Hua Munna ..? mujhe nahi Batayega ..?" maasi asked affectionately
Apni ladli bahu se hi pooch lijiye na .>? irritated strode over to the drinks bar, poured a generous measure of scotch .from the decanter.
"Ab kya Hua ..Munna ..? " maasi tensed
"Maasi aap to har waqt mujhe hi samjhati hai , zara apni Bahu ko bhi kuch samjahiye " he exploded .lifting the exquisite crystal glass( Waterford ) to his lips gulped the entire contents in a shot
Maasi Immediately summons Tony to tell Bani ,Maasi wants to see her. downstairs
" Ji Maasi ", Kuch Kaam Tha ..? Bani averting her eyes from hubby
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"Aaj Dhan Teras hai .. aur main chahti hoon ke tum dono .jewelers ke paas jakar Raashi , Rano aur Anu ke liye ache se necklace pasand karo aur Laxmi pooja ke liye kuch Sikke (coins)"
she could sense him staring at her knowing damn well she would not go anywhere with him achchaa ji….u wouldn't😉….are u sure…. Koi na…tu mat ja…JW sweetheart I'm ready…hum chalet hain…😳😳😳ek main aur ek tu hai...aur hawa mai jadoo hai...😳😆
"Main nahi jaanti tum dono mien kya behes , kaha suni hui hai , jo bhi hua hai usse bhool jao " . "Bani yeh tumhari pehli Diwali hai Shaadi ke Baad walia khaandan mien .es shubh din par mien tum dono ko haste muskrate hue dekhna chahti hoon "
"Ji Maasi ". jai was the first to speak .
Bani …? Maasi looks at Bani for agreement
" Ji Maasi " hesitant , reluctant
" Munna maine tumhe who challa (keychain) laane ko kaha tha …".
"Haan Maasi mujhe yaad hai.." dekha…dekha …he remembers it…he's soo caring😳… aur ek bani hai
Maasi heaved a sigh of relief ..watching Jai and Bani leave together a while later.
Daadi joined in ..
"Yeh tumne accha kiya Billo ..dono ko saath saath bhej diya .jewelry khareed ne ke bahane ."daadi beamed wickedly
"Arre Biji Hum Bhi kissi se kum nahi .".maasi winked grinning
"Par mujh se kuch kum hi hogi ..Billo ..Daadi remarked confidently Ho jaaye ek ek ..? 😆😆😆
Aap Bhi na Biji .. maasi shook her head


She woke up to the loud Explosion … then a series of explosions .. Oh No Firecrackers …! So Early ..In the Morn ? she yawned generously..covering her mouth with her hand .got up, swinging her legs on to the ground .she was alone .in the room .had slept by herself in the huge four poster bed for the past 2 nights tossing and turning, missing his warm body to curl up against .so somebody IS missing him😳😳😳... Maan ja ladki u can't do without him…. 😉At two am she had tiptoed downstairs, peeping quietly through the opening of the Study door standing ajar,found him buried over his laptop . my poor baby…. Sleeping so uncomfortably😭…bani…main tujhe maaf nahi karoongi…😡
She checked the time in the digital clock on the night table . six am .she had a long day ahead better get going ..
She took a shower skimmed through the closet, selected a double shaded lime green saree ..slipped dozens of bangles on to her wrist , peeled a bindiya from its packaging pressed it to a spot in the center between her brows ,.slipped her feet into low heeled beige sandals .checked her reflection in the mirror ..adjusted her mangalsutra in place .frowned on the sight of her empty parting ,wondering when Jai would fullfil his promise to get her a new one .he would…he would… 😳😳😳kabhi kabhi u should also do something for him… get him something… aah well….don't he doesn't need a gift…well there is one thing u can do…stop troubling him…😡Coated her lips with a touch of color before going downstairs .
"Arre bani tu itni jaldi tayyar ho gayee ..? " maasi enquired curiously pouring tea into a delicate Ivory colored cup edged with a band of glossy Gold around
"Haan maasi "..Bani was on her way to the study to see if jai was still awake or sleeping on the couch, 😭😭😭instead walked across the drawing room to take aashirwad from maasi and Daadi lowering herself to touch maasi's feet
"Ab rehne de Bani,maasi remarked sharply
" kitni Baar tumse kaha hai aisi halat mien mere aur Biji se jhuk kar aashirwad lena kuch din ke liye bhool ja." Maasi nodded in agreement Sipping her morning tea

Ji ..? Bani perplexed at maasi's statement.. her mind occupied with thoughts of the individual who absence had been keeping her awake through the nite ,
Door to the study was shut ..she paused for a moment contemplating to open the door or …opened it softly inspite of much hesitation her tummy tied in knots,hands on verge of freezing ..she peeped in not stepping in
"Looking for Me ..hmmmm..? " a deep voice from behind wow…I loved this sudden entry😳…. I can see the expression on their faces at this very moment…. 😳 startled her ..she turned around to look at him, standing , arms folded in front, eyes heavy from lack of sleep a mild stubble darkening his jaw ,still wearing the shirt from yesterday ,her breath trapped in her chest .
" No , I am looking for Aditya Uncle .jhooti kahin ki😉".she moved past him chiding her self for lying .returning to the drawing room where maasi andDaadi were discussing what to send Anu and the chopra's for Diwali ..
"Maasi mein anaath ashram(orphanage ) ja rahi hoon .bacchon ko mithai or patake dene ..saath mein kapde bhi ,Aur Vidhwa ashram mien sariyan, aur mithai "
very noble thought👏….this is the reason I like her…and he loves her…
" Yeh tu ne bahut accha socha Bani kaash mien bhi tere saath chal sakti par yeh ghutno ka dard aaj zyada hi ho gaya hai ". maasi winced as she straightened her knee …
"Maasi mien aap ko Balm laga doon ? " Bani offered affectionately
"Nahi beta tu ja . mein Raashi ya Rano se keh kar lagwa loongi "..she gave out another loud groan …
" Theek hai maasi .".
"Zara jaldi aana .. aaj raat ko Munna ne Diwali Party rakhi hai saara intezaam tumne, Sahil aur Aditya ne kiya Hai , "
Ji Maasi mien jaldi aa jaoongi she assured maasi on her way out


At The orphanage Bani was flocked by kids .. squealing , fighting .screaming. Toddlers grabbing her sari pallu or holding on to her saree clad legs trying to walk with her . so Adorable !.She chuckled
"We have a new member .. she is only months old " the Warden In charge informed casually ,cradling the baby in her arms .." her mother left her at the Haaji Ali dargah ..with a Note saying she couldn't take care of another Baby Girl "
Bani took the lil quivering bundle in her arms rocking it gently, .stared at Bani with her big dark baby eyes

" Awww she is so tiny and cute .how can a Mother be so heartless to abandon her baby remarked Bani
The in charge shrugged shaking her head ,Bani handed the Baby over
"I am afraid I have to go bani said .bidding farewell to the kids have to visit another institution ".. very touching scene…aptly put into the story…👏👏👏
"Please convey our Gratitude to Mr Walia on our behalf , its very very Generous and thoughtful of him to bring happiness in the lives of these orphans especially on Diwali" .warden was all praises for Jai

"I will .do that" ..she smiled walking upto the car .continued to the Vidhwa ashram left the sweets and Sarees for the destitute women. Mere 20 minutes and she was on her way to Facets phir aa gayi😡…. Isko koi nahi samjhaa sakta….,graded colored stones with jigar who was annoying the hell out of her complining of a backache resuting from lifting her up not once but Twice yesterday 😆😆😆
Bani from now onwards you better come later than me and leave later than me .so I don't have to suffer ..he cringed ..wincing in pian turning sidways .
She shot him a fiery glance lifting a brow 😆👏this guy is too good…👏
"Nobody asked u to pick me up Jigar " she looked intensely into a Red Gemstone .. through the Dichroscope ( an instrument to check color refraction in a gemstone) check its Refraction ..
"You could have easily called out for HELP ! called My hubby from my mobile if u wanted " putting the red stone back in the tray , picked up a transparent pale green Cabachon .securing it between her left thumb and Index finger grabbed the 10X lens with her right hand placing the stone under it while looking up into the bright colored light to illuminate the inclusions in the stone …
"Thank god I didn't call him or else I would have had to do a lot more Explaining".he stated recollecting his meeting with the Dynamic Jai Walia .
Jigar be careful when u talk abot THE DYNAMIC JW😳…. Bani kuch kahe na kahe,….i'll kill u if u utter a single wrong word for him….😡
""Mmmm "she peered into the cabochon .. " ( pronounced cabashon = a 'd' shaped gem , not transparent )Feathers" .. "feathers and more feathers" … she drew the 10x and cabochon away from her sight placing it on its velvet lined tray …
".Now what gem could this be ..?" she mumbled to herself

"Did you say something Jigar …? "
"Never mind Bani " he got up .. to wander around the institute ,she got a call from Sahil
"Mami , you will Have to come and explain ..how u want the Microphones and karaoke system to be set for Tonite's bash "
'"Ok I ll be there' as soon as I possibly can " .grabbed her bag rushed out informing Jayshree of her hasty departure

Jai stood in the bedroom soaking wet ..only a towel wrapped around his waist, damp hair clinging to his skin , 😳
Where were his clothes ..? usually Bani kept his stuff ready he rummaged through his closet looking for his blue shirt aur ladai karo…. Now who will do stuff like this for you…. Bani ne kuch zyada hi pamper kar rakha hai…aww well he deserves it…😉😳
Baniiiii! Baniiii..!   ; ; ; ; ; ;skimmed in the closet again ,pulled out something that resembled his blue shirt ..turned out to be One of Bani's Salwar khameez kurta's , he held it up for Inspection, " it didn't look like her size , or was it ..? No way she was going to fit into this 😆😆😆JW and his comments…😆, not with her bulging bump and Full Breasts "a.sardonic smile twisted his lips recalling their argument two nights ago
"Munna ..Kya Chahiye ..?" Maasi appeared in the doorway😲 alarming an embarrassed Jai .. 😳
"Maasi aap ? " he blinked nervously not expecting maasi to turn up . 😆
"Kya Hua ..Munna .. ?" Baniii anaath ashram aur Vidhwa sanstha Gayee Hai ..
Kyon ..? asked casually quickly pulled out the first shirt visible to him from a tumbled pile
"Bacchon ko Diwali ki mithai aur patake dene .. tumhe bataya Nahi Bani ne ? "..? masi queried , curiously ?
He thought for a moment fearing maasi may suspect the distance between Him and Bani .
"….ha.,. haaan ab Yaad aya Bani ne kal raat mujhe bataya tha ki woh Ashram ja rahi hai "..he lied .silently begging for forgiveness from the Gods .anyways he better get going to the office he was running short of time he decided as maasi walked out sensing his embarrassment dekha kitna achcha hai…he lied to save her😳…well himself too😉…but he lied coz of her… bata kar nahi jaa sakti thi…😡
Now he couldn't find his hairbrush or his wallet .. Bani's bangles and earrings filled up the dresser ..where had she gone in such a rush leaving her stuff all around .she had taken over all his drawer space, filled it with her lipsticks , bindi's, bangles he fished for his wallet amidst the clutter .. ..on the dresser …ah Finally he found it …. Its true what Mohan and aditya always said .. After marriage a man's life isn't his anymore he slowly has to give up everything for his patni . soon he may have to give her his entire closet space too .after what he had experienced today … . . 😆
fantastic scene👏👏👏…. Very well put….very realistic…. The reality factor of any story makes it believable and relatable…and u know u are good at it…👏



At Walia Mansion .the decorators were busy around the Majestic Hall opening up to the Huge lawn and garden, stringing lights inside and outside the mansion .perched on ladders leaning against the concrete building Assembling seating and dinner arrangements for guests .
after all it's the WALIA mansion…nothing but the best for it😳…what say Klue…😉
"Sahil are u sure we will be able to ..
"Of course Maami , Relax we have been practicing for 5 nights .. practicing….what????😕😕😕...i hope bani isn't upto something this time...
"Yes I know , but we cant be as good as .."
" Mamiiiii.. sahil cut in , trying to put her fears to rest , we are not trying to be anything ..we are just going to have fun and let our guests enjoy too ".
" But Sahil … she protested

"Tonites the Nite ..dear Mami . sahil spinned around on his Heels .excited .
"I think u have lost it Sahil Bani declared

I think so too…kya baat kar rahen hain ye log…Klue give me some clue…😉

here also...saahil's part was very real...the conversation was real...not made up or forced upon👏
"Arre The Walia's always come Out with a Blast " yes they do…😳
".. yeah .. Your mama will be thrilled at your spirit .In case u haven't noticed .. I am pregnant . u better be prepared if I faint from panic or shock "she warned lightly . .faint….from panic or shock…hello…ye kya baat kar rahen hain😕…what are these two upto😡…. Wait just let JW come…wo khabar lega tum dono ki…😡
" Relax, Baby's going to have fun tooo sahil coaxed ,just leave everything to Me , he winked "..Mujh pe vishwas hai na Maami ..? "he looked at her taking her hand in his
"I wish your mama ji would think like you he does trust you… warna ab tak tum facets jaa nahi rahi hoti…samjhi😡…give the guy some credit….😳,Don't know how I got sucked into this ..?You and Anu " she expelled a breath , shaking her head in disbelief ."Anyways I have to go for an urgent and important appointment .. will be back in time "


8pm
.Walia manson .. is decked like a beautiful bride for Diwali .there was not a corner of the mansion that was not lit ..thousands of twinkling , blinking light's .Terracota diya's in green , red, yellow, pink ,lined from the drivewayto the entrance and further on inside . fringed lanterns swaying from trees in the lawn outside , Inside the commotion was in full force
Raashi rushing to borrow a lipstick from Rano 😆mera wala pink…😆.
Of course Bani Maami was nowhere to be seen .ab kahan gayi…getting ready for the party…or is she still looking around for him..😉
Jigyasa had changed her saree for the 3rd time in a row and was still undecided on what was going to be her final Choice .! ! 😆I'm sure she'll be ready by the next diwali party…😉😆
Aditya Uncle ordering some last minute Booze for the party on the Phone ..practically shouting on top of his voice for .. a case of Red bordeux grand cru Premier classe jai's Favourite .Even Black Label ( Whiskey )had still not been delivered (aditya's Favourite ).
Sahil was testing the Mic. Hello , Hello .. …. 1..2…3…mic testing hello….kripya dhyaan de...JW ke ghar aaj party hai...and usne mujhe invite kiya hai...
a couple of Rangoli designers were creating colorful designs in every nook and corner of the mansion. outside at the entrance Bani seated on a low stool was engrossed in sketching out a rangoli design ,then filling it with colored .wondering just where hubby was ? probably stuck in traffic . bani wo aa jayega…u see he's come to pick me up….😉
Meanwhile Daadi was getting a last minute Facial and manicure done 😆! !..maasi was nursing a severe knee pain treating her knee with an electric heating pad
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8 . 30pm
Bani applied the final touch to her makeup eyeliner , mascara , lipgloss
She pulled out her drawer took out the swaroski crystal Bindi carefully pasting it on her forhead sajna hai mujhe…sajana ke liye….😳tried to button her blouse .. different from the ones she usually wore ..Flaming orange Bustier shaped supported by an inch wide straps lined with swaroski diamonds, a deep low square cut back almost like a full figured Bra exposing way too much of her midriff .after several protests .. Shamun suggested strings of swaroski crystals as icicles lined at the hem of her bustier to conceal her tiny bump almost like a beaded curtain displaying her waist from open slits beteen each string .. Very unique she thought , shut her eyes wondering if she could actually carry off this blouse even though it would be minimally cover her cleavage exposing a hint of her peaches and cream curves . Draped her saree in flaming orange ..the palav was bare only lined with a border of fine diamonds ,while the rest of the saree had swaroski diamonds in a consecutive set design How on earth was she convinced to wear it ..? . with trembling hands extracted a pair of breathtakingly beautiful diamond earrings from their velvet lined case ,put them on her ears . there was no need to fix her hair .it looked lovely the way it was , had visited the salon in the afternoon . slipped her feet into delicate sandals designed with fine swaroski crystals she took a look at he reflection in the mirror..couldnt believe it was her looking the way she was . spritzed on her favourite perfume touching up the delicate spot behind her ears , her wrists , inside her elbows and a generous splash on her cleavage . JW sweetheart…don't faint when u see her…usne tayaari saari kar li hai tumhe faint karane ki😉… but I'm sure u're jaw will drop the moment u set your eyes on your wife tonite….😳
She pulled out His attire for the evening .layed it on the bed with the accessories to go with it
good she took it out…warna morning wala scene repeat hota😆…well not that I would complain😉…. Wll I know why she did it…she wants him to wear her choice ke kapde…😉😆

great part...👏...but that i've already told you....

so lets get to the point...agla part kab???...😉....

Poo

love ur ff..kinda addicted to it..love the jb romance..i guess u shud update twice or thrice a day...plzzz continue asap

love ur ff plzz make the font a bit big...difficult to read...continue asap