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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys here i am with my first poem for my favorite asya.meine dono ko imagine karke yeh poem likhi hai so please support me as i hardly write poems😊

AN ASYA POEM-LOVE IS LIKE A CANDLE

Light a candle,
see it glow,
watch it dance,
Just like you and me,
think of me,
like the light of love,
I'll always be close,
like day or night,

A candle flickers,
out of sight,
but in your heart,
it still burns bright,
think not of sadness,
but of me,
think of gladness,
Just you and me.

I have not left,
I am not gone,
I'm here to stay
my lovely one,
the light in my heart
will glow and grow,

Watch our lights as they truly glow like love,
in our hearts we'll always know.
That never will I leave,
even when my feeling is blue

I'm sitting here, with you in my heart,
waiting one day, for you and me!

So guys bolo bolo kaisi lagi guys pls shower this poem with ur precious comments and likes as it's my first poem on asya and tell me if u love it then i'll be writing more😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great effort dear
I really like your poem
A real cute poem with all the meters and rhyme schemes used properly.
Do come up with more of your work.
Have a good night.
Love,
-Diya
Edited by asyaforlife - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow this was ver amazing. write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey itz awesome... Like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful poem love
I enjoyed reading it :)

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