First Date SwaRon OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: arch2012

Awesome os

Sharon's excitement & nervousness was beautifully penned down

Sharon was so much excited to go on date & wants everything perfect for it

Swayam was so cute and blushy too 😃

Swayam took Sharon to the Carnival for their date, something very Innovative Idea

and in last Sharon finally realizing that place, dress & perfect make up is not important but the person is important to whom you are going for your date if that person is perfect everything will go fine & your date will be magical for sure.

thanks a lot!!
yea that was the basic message i wanted to convey through this OS!!😊

That was a delightful read!
It was light and beautiful.
And it made me so so happy. :D
I especially loved the game they played!
Nice idea.
Your OS was totally and completely what I would call "feel good"! :D
Nicely done!
Very well written, I enjoyed your style.
Please write more, and PM me when you do.

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

A really beautifully expressed piece, depicting the true ,eaning of love and life. It's the person who matters and not the place. You described the nitty-gritty details flawlessly, and I am looking forth to read more of your SwaRon pieces.

thanks a lot. i am glad u have liked it! and its a pleasure to receive such amazing complements!!
ohh u will get a PM!!😆

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey swthrt..


Ur writing is like a breath of fresh air ...i loved the way u showed the 16 yr old SWARON...the excitement for 1st date ...was adorable..i loved the way she wanted everything to be perfect dreamlike...but end of the day wat mattered is she was him...i loved the whole idea of carnival and the truth game was just so cute...the beautiful time in the beach ...m loving ur writing ...simple...elegant ..these lines are my fav...


"You wanna finish that game now?" he said incredulously, pushing back his wet hair. I only smiled at him. "I like kissing in the rain." An expression of understanding flashed across his face, and he grinned. Bringing his hands up to cup my cheeks, he bent down and captured my lips with his. I felt water run through my hair and dress, but I couldn't care less. So maybe my dress wasn't perfect. Maybe my hair was now ruined. Maybe we didn't have a gourmet dinner. And if I told my friends about the carnival being my date sight, they'd laugh and tease me endlessly. Swayam might have gone to better places and better dates than this, but I didn't care. Because to me, tonight was perfection.

Lovely OS dear...keep them coming...

Luv
Deep

hi sweety...
i am glad u have liked it soo much...
i had a concept and i am happy it came out well *places dnt matter ppl do*
so thank u sooo much for ur lovely comments...
its a joy to read such comments esp from ppl who write exceptionally well!!!
luv
Safrena

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

Awesome os!!:)

thanks a lot!!😊