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SHAYAD YE HI TU PYAAR HAI

I posting three previous parts along with new part …becoz I lost my topic ..ad not able to find it ……so I m posting all four starting parts in one combine part …hope u like it !

" I m trying to realize that he is not mine…..it is useless to remind him again and again "….she said controlling tears swelling up in pretty big eyes….."But he is fiance di since childhood I saw u dreaming about him ….writing poems else then worship what not "…said young kaya her sister "but you know kaya he love some one else……bhabi said that too madly"…..she is crying now badly ….."Gauri ….gauri where is u ….beti "… prof. alok enter in room almost yelling …."Yes baba "now her face shown …pretty big black eyes a layer kajal giving them elegant look she has not so fair complexion but gifted with attractive features and dimples on her face make it feel as she is an angel ….she gauri …a 22 years old bachelors in arts , fiance of son of famous industrialist

Mahen kapoor. Shiv kapoor her fiance she never meet him before saw him only in pictures and today he is returning …..From London after completing his MBA ……with so many rumors of being that now he is committed to a lady other then gauri.

Professor alok is a middle class but best friend actually family friend of Mahen kapoor . Mahen kapoor and his wife nikhlia kapoor gauri are very dear to them. But their family members the don't want her as bahu of kapoors else then dadi …….meera kapoor and dada ji dilip kapoor. …..gauri's family is small …gauri herself , alok ji her father , her sister kaya , maushi maa …her brother and sister-in-law.

Gauri come to know from her sister in law about shiv's affair…and is very upset about it . kapoor's are happy that finally shiv is coming but the rumor about him is it true or not …….this some thing which is eating them …..!

Alok ji enter in room almost yelling "gauri don't u complete packing up till now we have to leave for Bombay "….gauri look at him .."baba wo ……I cant come "……alok ji is surprised .."what are u saying beti just on some rumors u r neglecting shiv and his family …hw bad they would feel u know .."…kaya stands up says .."di is coming with us baba".

COMING : kapoor family …shiv is finally there …….whether the rumor is right or wrong ?

Alok ji and his family reach to Mumbai. Every one happy else then gauri she is scared from inside. Her heart says that Shiv cannot do any thing wrong with her but her mind it set over what her bhabi told her. They enter in kapoor mansion some people are glad to see gauri some are making weird faces. They day passed in gossips but night it was longest one for gauri Shiv was coming with some or not this is on destiny ….!

The sun finally shinning on the moon with all his power …….but he is also waiting that sun of gauri's life Shiv kapoor!

The camera is now focusing on airport Mahen kapoor and Shiv's elder brother Rajeev kapoor waiting for Shiv to come out . finally the camera focus on foot steps of a guy wearing Gucci's designed shoes and moves in upward direction ……man in black finally seen with dashing masculine features he put-off of his spectacles his deep brown eyes finally caught his father and bro he smiled and move his right hand in backward direction and stretch some one towards him ……a short height fair lady with brown hairs pretty face and attractive eyes ….her smile seems as of million dollars !

Shiv move forward and hug his dad who hug him back but question about lady besides Shiv was grawling in his stomach he finally speaks …as Shiv moves to hug Rajeev …!

"Who is the pretty lady with you Shiv "…..Mahen asked …"oh dad sorry …" his voice was more attractive then his personality."she is kripa …kripa khanna …….I told bro about her …..bro u didn't tell to dad…about kripa .." ….Mahen …"why is she here " kripa taken a back with rude behavior of Mahen …"because she is no more kripa khanna …she is ..Kripa …kripa kapoor now …my wife …" Mahen hands form a fist and he left the place …………Shiv , kripa and Rajeev followed him silently …!

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They reach at kapoor mansion in complete silence...Mahen was fuming in anger while kripa was holding Shiv's tightly as if she left it ……..some thing more worst would happen …then this …..they enter in complete silence dadi move forward to hug Shiv while hugging her gaze fall on kripa …she taken a back and questioning eyes looked at Shiv ….he smiled and said …"dadi she is your bahu …." …other start questioning Shiv …but one person there was so numb …..And in this very moment lost her whole world …..That was gauri ……so many questions were there...and she had the right to ask them ……….her idol her dream was just in front of her with all his best looks and holding not her but another lady. She was beautiful …..Yes beautiful then gauri …but Shiv he was a person who can fall for looks …….there must be something wrong,……but what this question was the reason of her disturbance …Shiv and kripa left for their room and gauri enter in out house she was questioning herself why she waited for such person who even no care for her …not even said a simple word "HI" to her ………when some one taps her shoulders she turned around amit …… her so called friend was standing there …he had a frown over his face …she looked at him and asked .."Why this frown Mr. Amit?"…..he looked at her and pull her closer into his arms and speak "look gauri ….he is not for you he was not for you ...I told you earlier but you never except the fact infact you reject me for that idiot Shiv"…she gave him an angry look "will u stop calling him with bad names ?" ….amit taken a back the fell on sofa near by …"gauri please dear get a life …that man is married with some one else now so please …….."……gauri …"amit I know he never took interest in me but he never reject me too …..i don't know why but there is something still have to uncovered…"…amit now fuming in anger "enough is enough gauri ….kripa is truth of Shiv's life …he loves her she loves him and that's it …..why don't you except it damn it "……….gauri looked at him with teary eyes…"amit 15 years …..15 years I spend in dreaming about him …15 years I spend …..in thinking about him …..15 years …of my life I entitled with his name and now he come back with an other girl and want me to accept the girl as his wife …"….amit turned back "oh please he is not asking you to accept he is asking kapoors to accept kripa ...and gauri with in a day or two they with for sure …"….gauri look at him ..."amit"……"stop behaving like kids gauri …"she ran from there …………amit to himself ..."I cannot afford loosing this chance gauri …I love you and you are mine "

************************************************************ *****************scene switches to kripa- Shiv room*****

kripa is standing on window side with Shiv who is resting his chin over her little shoulders with close eyes and holding her tiny waist …….she is simply creasing his cheeks with her soft hands …"shiv…" ….his eyes are still close…….."hmmmm"…..he speaks …"bolo krips"……."Shiv will they ever except me …….."……she continues "Shiv angad ke janey ke baad main tumhey ab apnaya hai….aur main tumhey khona nahi chahti………..Shiv this kid "she place her hand on her belly …."it is not yours……."….Shiv keeps a finger over her lips "it is very much as it is yours"….."Shiv we cannot change reality this life with in me is granted by angad……Shiv I know he will never come back but I don't know why I m scared as if he is going to come back and separate us "……"no one can separate us kripa no one "said Shiv keeping his protective arms around her and almost hug her …………….he then pick her up and lay her on bed …..cover them selves in sheet and hugging each other they fall sleep !

Coming next : angad an identical person to Shiv …what relation does he share with Shiv …….why he left kripa and how will gauri come to this all….a little Shiv gauri convo …………………………….angad is back …..in kripa's life ……would he bring happiness or will he destroy her ……………………..could he take advantage of amit nd gauri's relation …….will Shiv ever fall for gauri !

ok it is my new fan fiction …of Shiv and gauri ……plus angad kripa I know it is bit weird about using one actor in double role that too in a fan fiction ..but I love trying different things ……plus angad and Shiv are different character always keep this in mind while reading ff ……….but have identical faces ……..reason I will post soon !

with love amna

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Posted: 19 years ago
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it is nice write next part but pl bring shiv&gauri pl but you story is nice write next part . 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amazing part!! i really love it!! 😳 😊 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh lovly it was good .angad and shiv both of them is the best because it iqbal 👏 👏 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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reallly nice n different ff continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz continue very very very very nice 👏 👏 i am
speechless after reading such a good post
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnk u so very much i will continue today inshallah 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART :2


Jumeirah Beach of Dubai shown near by it there are high buildings of beach apartments ……then camera focus on one …a big studio apartment is shown ….small counter kitchen at one side …… adjacent to there is dinning table …..then a sitting arrangement is there …in opposite a single bed is there on behind that on wall there are many pictures of kripa ..Hanging ….….along with wardrobe and dressing area ….in opposite a bathroom is there...The door opened a guy entered his shoes shown …….and camera moves in upward direction guy wearing baggy jeans …green vest …wearing four rings in one hand on wrist wearing silver bands ……..and watch ……in neck he is wearing a chain with a locket of cross ……his head shown he is wearing bandana ….brown strikes on hairs …..Ray ban big frame glasses and his killing smile he put off his glasses and his face ……..it exactly like Shiv the difference was ….he is some one else …with total different dressing sence ..which reflect that he only resembles Shiv he is not Shiv ..he moves towards bedding area …he look at pictures of kripa and smile …."you are mine ..kripa belongs to angad only "…….!


"angad…"……kripa wake up and sweating badly …on her scream ..gauri who was passing through corridors enter in her room with out knocking it is noon and Shiv was at office so gauri entered with out hesitation …"are u ok kripa " asked gauri giving her a glass of water …."w-what …yes yes I m alright thank you "….gauri smiled .."hi I am gauri "………"Shiv's ex-fiance"…..kripa look into pretty big eyes of gauri .."oh ..i m sorry gauri"…she said .."no …no please why are u sorry ..it was my destiny and luck nothing above or less forget it please ..but "……kripa cocked her brow .."but what ?" …"but why u screamed"……this question ….brought a scared look on kripa's face…"hmm nothing gauri it was just a bad dream ...between do you know something "…."hmm what" ..asked gauri …"omg wait u r pregnant right "……kripa lowered her eyes …"yes"………it was love no matter now it is lost in in many layers of hate but it was when she made it with angad ..now it is belong to Shiv only …"then I should tell this good news to maa….."…."I mean Shiv's mother"….kripa look at her "u call her maa"……gauri now lowered her eyes" yes I have no mother so .."….."oh I m sorry again "……..gauri look at her "no please ..thoes who have mothers are lucky ……I m not among lucky people u now "…..saying this she left ……..this was eating gauri from inside this girl was carrying Shiv's child …but she was scared …why this was bugging her she has now no right on Shiv …….but she has right to save kripa …..after all she was lady love of Shiv …and too pregnant ……..but with whom she have to save kripa from !


"please confirm my ticket for bombay…" said angad .."I want to reach there as soon as possible …"try to understand my wife is there and too pregnant …..so ..please sir "……….he took a breath "see I m not doing any concert ………I have so many things to do I missed my family for u …now …ok fine during my stay of India I would do two ..concerts is that alright now …" he ended he caal and fall on sitter "I m coming Shiv ..u snatch my kripa from now u will see who am I ?


ok this second part …….i have to bring gauri Shiv closer but first have to unite angad kripa it necessary na lol😆

with love amna 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amazing!!one the less!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part wo was awesome!!!!!!! Loved it!!!!!

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