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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay so I am back with another OS on RK-Madhu, had to pen down this version of the story. I know you people would be expecting something different.

Hope you enjoy it!

Rishabala OS- The Pain Of Love

RK's POV~

As her mother dragged her motionless body out of my house, I walked back to my room and I went straight for a shower. All I wanted was to cry, cry for hurting that one person, whom I truly loved.

I came out of the shower, expecting her to be sitting on the bed, flashing her beautiful smile, which lit her eyes up, her nonstop chatter and her favourite pastime of feeding me, lately which I had become used to. To enter an empty room, was surely eating me up, but I had to let her go. For she deserved happiness in her life, for she truly deserved true love in her life. I was sitting on my bed, all alone. I was shocked, shocked, and totally out of my wits. What had I done? I had been the one to cause her pain, I had been the one to make her cry, and I had been the one to put fear in her eyes. I will have to live the rest of my life knowing that the one person I had wanted to protect is the one person I had hurt. I will have to live the rest of my life knowing that the tears I had wanted to wipe were the ones I caused to spill. I will have to live the rest of my life knowing that I had broken the heart of the woman I loved mind, body and soul.

I am so sorry Madhu, he said as he collapsed to the floor, her photo clenched in his hand firmly and "mangalsutra" he slept as to never wake up to live a life without the woman he truly loved!

The End!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS mayu.RK remembering the moments spent with madhu.cute.poor RK he is in pain.loved this one.
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very emotional ...awesome 👍🏼
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very emotional ...awesome os 👏
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This was really emotional and just fantastic. I wish it didn't have to be like this. Very well written! Inner turmoil of RK! 👏
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@-Mayu-: Nyc OS!!!!😊
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mindblowing and a haert touching os.welldone
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Beautiful Mayu. So emotional. Cant wait to see the future track
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this os is simply wonderful mayu...i just wish the real episodes turn this way and rk is pretending to betray madhu...cant see the track going in a way that rk is really hating madhu...nicely portrayed the feelings of rk dear...keep writing more haan...
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Simple superb OS..!!
Loved it Mayu.

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