I Quit..OS updated

Hey guys m up with a OS ...its a sad one or i shud say very sad so please all who dont like said stories refrain from reading this ...

Small teaser is up will update soon ...

Kon hai bachi ??? tell me ur guesses??

BACHA ,shivam shouted ;CALL THE AMBULANCE ... koi ambulance bulao plzzz Bachi uth na bachi uth na ,he said..

Vicky went to him stopped him said ,Shivam but he didn't listened ...Vicky shouted SHIVAM she is no more ... he said the last sentence softly between his cries...

No No this cant happen bachi bachi ,he tried to wake her up ... But no she was not responding ...

They carried her hospital but she was no more ...

She had a letter in her hand ,said the nurse and handed it to Shivam

I want to read this letter in front of all of u ,said Shivam ...

They all gathered in a separate room.

I m sorry ,I m sorry but i cant take this pain anymore... Appko pata hai living every day like this is killing me bit by bit , i can see him loving some1 else but i can't see him Hating me ... Maa ke kehne par when i left my dance ,my love heartbroken i felt like thousands of pins are attacking towards my heart and wrenched it my heart in one go ... But i wanted him to move on ,main chahti thi ke wo aage barh jayein ,he lives his life happily aur jab aapne mujhe bataya ke he's again fallen in love i was so happy for him that atleast one of us MOVED ON aur ho bhi kyun na He found his PERFECT match Tani i hope she'll be like her Dreamgirl who fulfill his dreamz which i wasn't able to do ... main hamesha se yahee chahti thi ..i always wanted him to live his life to fullest just i wanted was He never regret me as a MISTAKE ...mere pyaar ko wo galti na samjhein , use kabhi bhoolne ki koshish na karein ...I always wanted him to remember our memories happily ... Par bhai i was a BAD LOVER mene ajj jab Sharon ko kehte hue dekha ke He's forgotten me as a BAD memory . Main khatam hogai bhai , main kya karun my memories meri wo yaadein jisko main apni zindagi samajh kar jeeti hun wo...wo sab bhul gaye ... Haan main chahti thi wo aage barh jayein par I never wanted him to FORGET me ... Shayad kabhi main unhe bata paati how much i loved u ,mene appko cheat nahee kia ,main

Mere Dost mere dost mujhe bhool gaye ,Mera best friend Swayam who use to tell me everything forgot me like i never Existed ,I know why because I was a BAD FRIEND ..Main unko aise chor ke agai ,meri team ko ... Unhe meri zarurat thi par main unke paas nahee thi ..

Maa ,I m sorry main aik achi beti bhi nahee ban payi ..When i was in Mumbai i was not loyal to u because i persuaded dance and i did the MISTAKE of loving someone without asking u ... Par main ..main kya karti bahi mujhe tou pata hee nahee tha IT WAS LOVE ... Maa bhi mujhse Naraz hokar mujhe chor ka chali gayi ,Maa aap bhi mujse pyaar nahee karti thi naa ... Mere paas koi nahee tha jab mujhee apne Doston ki zarorat thi i had no one ...When i needed some1s support i found no 1 ...

Phir Tum aaye , pata hai bhai jo tumne kia wo tumhari galti nahee thi agar tum maa ko nahe batate tou kahin aur se unhe pata chal jaata aur mere saath aisa hee hota ... Tum jab mere paas aaye mujhe sambhalne ki koshish ki ,par main tumhare lie bhi problem ban gayi ..Mene tumhe tumhere family se door kardiya ... Muhje maaf kardo bhai pata nahee main, main har kisi k liye problem kyun ban jaati hoon?? tumhere dad se tumne mere lie jhagra kia aur ajj main tumhe chor ke jarahee hoon bhai ... Tumne mere lie sab kia ... yaad hai bhai jab mene tumhe kaha tha ke mujhe buht acha lagta tha jab Maa mujhe Bacha bulati thi aur tumne kaha ke tum mujhe ab Bacha buloge ... I felt mere paas bhi koi hai ,mere lie bhi koi hai ... Aur tum hamesha chahte the ke aik din main tumhe Bhai bulaun par mene kabhi bhi nahee kaha par ajj main tumhe bol rahee hun ke U r my Bhai , tumne mujhe hasane ki koshish ki mujhe uthane ki koshish thi par ...par main tumhara saath nahee de paungi , main ja rahee hun bhai ...

Main kuch bhi kar paayi ... I WAS A BAD DAUGHTER , A BAD SISTER , A BAD DANCER ,A BAD FRIEND ,A BAD SISTER AND A BAD LOVER ...

She left me forever ,KRIA why u did this , Shivam shouted ... U know what Reyaansh Singhania she never wanted to tell all this to u ever but i wanted to ..I want u to live in this pain in which she was living from the last ONE YEAR when u thought she backstabbed u .. U never ever tried to findher ,know her problem ,try to know why she did all this ... U cant get a bigger punishment than this to live in this pain for FOREVER ...

After her THE ST LOUIS was not the same one THE Reyaansh Singhania who use to be the cool dude of ST LOUIS vanished somewhere and never came back ...

Swayam Shekhawat married Sharon Raiprakash but he wasn't the old Swayam, he was a violent Swayam who use to get his anger out on him for not believing his friend HIS BEST FRIEND.. Sharon was the one to support her ...

Shivam now live with the orphanage kids to prosper his happy memories with his sister ..

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So this is it ...

lame/bad/good/excellent dont know ..

plzz Review ..

MY 10,000 post but a sad one this time ..

love ya guys ..

any prob with respect to the OS ..do ask me ...

i dont know how to write OS much it was just a thought wanted to share..

KRIYAANSH FOREVER...

Coming to the OS, looking forward to it.

And I guess Bacha will be Kriya or Taani. Don't know...

Update soon.

A beautiful OS.

Really loved it!

Can you change one thing?

I want to see reactions of the louians properly.

Please, please add it in the OS.

I don't mind the sad ending.

I want to see reaction of Taani too!

Please do it if you can!

Over all, mind blowing.

Loved Shivam very much!

And, PM me your other works.

Wanna read them badly!

loved it very much

it was good

heart touching i felt like to cry

shivam was too ...hw sweet of him

i loved it

really was good

life made her quit her self