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Teju š¤
Firstly u dint tell me that u were writing an os...and coz of that ur pm almost surprised me...
Secondly I am glad that u did post it,though it was inspired from 3mistakes...still u gave it a try by characterizing the whole part with swaron...And anything related to swaron is just magical...I m sure even the creator of the actual work(CB) wouldn't deny that fact... š
Now coming to the update...The whole story narrated from swayam's pov is always a treat to read...:)
Rey so much involved in the cricket match that he even forgot to wish his sister happy bday...and ther parents considering him as the monster... š
Now my fav part where swayam is with a cake to surprise Sharon and their sweet convo...all these made me go awe...:D
And then the hawt part I m not saying anything...just super hot... š
Though the ending was absurd...overall it was a pleasure to read...:D
Do keep writing more...:)
Ur Binny š³
Firstly u dint tell me that u were writing an os...and coz of that ur pm almost surprised me...
Secondly I am glad that u did post it,though it was inspired from 3mistakes...still u gave it a try by characterizing the whole part with swaron...And anything related to swaron is just magical...I m sure even the creator of the actual work(CB) wouldn't deny that fact... š
Now coming to the update...The whole story narrated from swayam's pov is always a treat to read...:)
Rey so much involved in the cricket match that he even forgot to wish his sister happy bday...and ther parents considering him as the monster... š
Now my fav part where swayam is with a cake to surprise Sharon and their sweet convo...all these made me go awe...:D
And then the hawt part I m not saying anything...just super hot... š
Though the ending was absurd...overall it was a pleasure to read...:D
Do keep writing more...:)
Ur Binny š³
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