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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmm..Better than expected..Thanks for the like and support...Here goes Chapter 1 ...
I am on a 2week vacation right now...I am not going to update until mid of Feb...Il try posting if I have net or time..
Please do like and comment..Suggestions could be mailed to madhudarling234@gmail.com

CHAPTER 1

"Khushiii'..Finally madam arrived'."

Anjali and khushi were in touch on phone Anjali saw khushi's photos thus she recognized..Arnav doesn't know yet that anjali talks to khushi

"Di'how can I not come? Its your wedding afterall'I had to be there'vaise'Who is jeejaji here'kahan hay apke Shyam ji?"

"chup..shut up'they aren't here yet'.and I am upset that you are reaching delhi on my wedding day seedha? No engagement sangeet etc..etc"

"Anji'Come soon'oh hey Khushi?"

"and you are Kritika Di'she has told a lot about you'.Do you mind if I call you Di?"

"Of course you can'by the way shall I tell an interesting news..Anjali raizada is my to be devrani ji"

"that awesome Di'Ok I'l go get ready and come'Mansi mom and dad are already ready"

Guest room

Khushi's dress : http://indiaemporium.com/women/lehengas/party-wear-lehengas/exquisite-deep-pink-lehenga-choli.html

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"tummm?"

"Yes'Nav'!!!"

"hey'stop calling me that.."

"Nav..\Nav'"

"Forget it '.!!! Who am I talking to..?"

"Stop fighting..Its my wedding for God's sake"

"For you Di!! " in unison

Arnav steps forward to pounce..She steps back and moves

Flashback

"Intercollege fest .. Coordinator Arnav Singh Raizada'.to be assisted by Akash'and NK"

"huh'not again"

"OH ASR..dance we are going to win"

"Coordinator hu Maya'.I am not participating'."

~~

"Whaaat? What do you mean buses haven't reached'? God..NK'.ek kaam teek se nahi karoge..?"

"Nannav'that girl'.she is a brat you know'.sabko pareshan karke raka hay'"(She has been troublesome since she arrived)

"Dekhiye'Look We are sorry'we didn't expect"

"If you don't know how to oragnise an event why do you guys even try?"

"excuse me'you reached right'.now Go'.this is your room key'"Arnav glared at her as he said

Her lips turned into cute O expression

Arnav was amused

"I mean seriously'you sent a dog van'."

Arnav glared at Akash

"Whaat? Aur koi rastha nahi tha"(there was no choice)

"Useless'.huh'"

"We'r sorry Sir..woh..she is mad you see very short tempered.."

Arnav smirked at his effect..Khushi ignored and left to her room

~~

"Classical singer"

"Singer and she?" arnav giggled

"Certificate dikhaun?"

"No need not'show me your ID'"

"ID..tho..Its in the room"

"3 minutes registrations are closed'by the time you go to your room and get it'.its closed'"

"Please'Its important for me to participate"

"excuse me'Pardon'.I couldnot hear.."

Khushi stomped her foot

"Please I love singing'..Please proceed towards your room" Arnav mocked at Khushi

"Priya right?"

She nodded excitedly

"I need an apology for today morning"

Khushi snapped a look at him

"dekh khush'you have to participate and for that he is needed'please ego cho do.."(Leave your EGO)

Khushi glares at him

"Sorry"

"What? Little louder"

She calms herself'

"I am sorry Sir'.Can you please register my name'I am sorry for forgetting my ID"

"your forgiven'I did register'Tomorrow 9am'.auditorium'.see you"

"Thank you"

"All the best!!!"

"khadoosLaad governor'."

"I heard that'."

"Its for you to listen"

~~

Auditorium

The finale performance by Mother Teresa Medical College'Mumbai."

Radhe Radhe

Mana bole'

Arnav froze' he raises his hand to cup his cheek in shock

"KhushiGupta?? 'urf Khoochi'.I dont believe this"

Raadhe raadhe mana bole

Manme amruthe rasa bole

Thu hee meri aradhana

Prema mahi hay thu saadhanaa'..(2)

Radhe radhe manaa bole

Maname amrutha rasa bole

Har sans meri

pooj tumhari

Har vajan mera jai jai tumhara

Har kadam meri pradakshina teri'

Hara raghaveena sansara the raaa'ra'.

Radhe radhe mana bole'.

Man me amrutha ras bole'.

Radhe radhe manaa bole'.ah'

Her friends and the others were sure that she would win the competition

Arnav had a wide smirk on his face

He looked at the judge

The judge looked at him happily telling that she was awesome

Arnav glared and nods a NO..

He threatens him to bash him up

The judges fumble and nods'.

"And the first position goes to Ekta Sood from IIT Kanpur'"

All of them gasped

Khushi was confused..she was confident on winning

"Well there are few special mentions too'"

"Nannav..What?"

"shh!! There are condolence prizes too oops consolation prizes'.And that goes to Khoochi'."

Khushi's eyes widen

"ahem ahem'.Sorry'Khushi Gupta Please come onto the dias"

The whole gathering were laughing hysterically

Khushi was beyond angry

"Nav?"

She went onto the dias took the bouquet from his hands

She took the podium

"Good morning everybody'.Thankyou for this condolence oops consolation prize'this wasn't needed actually'everybody knows who sang well and who did not ..thank you NAV'Sorry..Arnav Singh Raizada if I am not wrong thanks once again"

Arnav was angry that she called him Nav'

She stared him right into his eyes

" nahi badley na? you dint change at all'.the same old arrogant snobbish raizada'.What else can I expect from you'.Have a good day'I am leaving today'"

Flashback ends

"hey what happened'where are you lost?"

"Nothing Di'finally Mrs.Anjali Shyam Manohar Jha'.I am so happy for you'."

"My wedding gift?"

"You will love it'."

"What is it?"

"Forever we have shifted to delhi Di'.She is supposedly joining sanjeevani with dad from Monday"

Anjali squeeked like a kid and pulled Khushi into a bear hug

"What the'"

Khushi smirked

"Kya hua? What happened Nav?"

Arnav left leaving gleeing Khushi'.

Precap : "Di'muje bacha lo..Save me'both of you good for nothing women..huh'.Di please if tear queen sees me..I am done for'.please please.."

NOTE : KHUSHI AND ARNAV MET ONCE IN THEIR CHILDHOOD AT A COMMON FRIENDS WEDDING..THEY ARE NOTCHILDHOOD FRIENDS'KHUSHI STRIKED OFF WITH ANJALI AND KEPT IN TOUCH THROUGH PHONE THUS FAMILY KNOWS EACH OTHER'ONLY AT ANJALI'S WEDDING THEY GREW CLOSE'KHUSHI CAME ON THE WEDDING DAY WHILE HER FAMILY WERE AT SHANTIVAN SINCE THE RITUALS BEGAN

Purple - flashbacks gold - song blue - present
Edited by madhuishq - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
R

Un-R

Awesome..!
Good First Chapter.

Loved the way you inserted the flashback and brought the story forward.
waiting for more...
😉


Edited by morning_star - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Nice update
Loved Nav oops Arnav nd Khoochi sorry Khushi
Awesome
loved it
continue soon
thnx for d pm
Edited by sweet_sanju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
awesome updt

luv it

updt sooon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
thnxx fr p loved the update. Their nok jhok is cute. Keep updating.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
great update
loved their nok-joks
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
awesome update

loved it😳

update soon

thanks for pm

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