OS- MAKE UP FOR THE SLAP

heyyy guyzzz this is my frst attempt on my beloved ASYA
aftr the slap incident i could not holf myself back
here we go

MAKE UP FOR SLAP
Zoya's POV
I jst went there to apologize to him and to console him but what he did what he did jst slapped me for the mistake which i havent even committed
I knew he was kinda judgemental in my case
but what he did today was not expected from him

Zoya after coming from Mangalpur was now sure tht she was immensely and madly in love with her JAHAPANA BOND

Asad's POV
Oh God what have i done!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I always misjudged her, accused her for no reason but she never said a single word to me. But today it was heights...
I just slapped her
how could i!!!!!!!!!!!!
and after knowing tht she was innocent my guilt has increased by infinite times
now i 100% sure tht she is the rite grl fr me

here i m standing behind her to gain her apology

Asad- Ms Farooqui...emmm...actually i m sry
she turned and looked at him as if he was an alien
Zoya-whts the use of saying sorry...fir se kuch hoga...fir aaap mujhe accuse karenge...fir se sorry bolenge so jst leave me alone...

Asad's anger rose and he harshly pulled her up by her elbow and said
Do u thnk i like to hurt god dammit...and wht u said to leave u alone for god sake i cant live without u even for a second...
and pulled her by her waist and kissed her with passion
firstly she protested but then even she strtd to respond
aftr a long tym they broke apart
asad said I love you
zoya i love u too
the end
plzzz comment

Awesome OS.
I loved it a lot
Keep writing dear

It romanticizes violence where he forces himself on her. Granted she might have feelings for him - heaven knows why she would after he slapped her...but then for him to not even give her a chance to have feelings for her again or even see an apology...terrible. It's like here's my apology and i am going to force it down your throat with a kiss. For me it was not delightful or charming - just a continuation of the abuse we saw. This style of writing went out 30 plus years ago...no western television show or program promotes this type of relationship.

Its the sweetest nd the shortest i hv ever read

Originally posted by: --Kriti--

Its the sweetest nd the shortest i hv ever read

thnx kriti 😊

Originally posted by: Laila2009

It romanticizes violence where he forces himself on her. Granted she might have feelings for him - heaven knows why she would after he slapped her...but then for him to not even give her a chance to have feelings for her again or even see an apology...terrible. It's like here's my apology and i am going to force it down your throat with a kiss. For me it was not delightful or charming - just a continuation of the abuse we saw. This style of writing went out 30 plus years ago...no western television show or program promotes this type of relationship.

thnx laila no problem darling as it is my frst attempt i get to know my drawbacks while writing nxt ttym vil tc

thnx guyz fr encouraging me

Originally posted by: sweetypie_16

Really cute...! :)

That was short nd the sweetest one...