For all my dear TR ians updated check pg 17

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As I have already mentioned in the title this is only for TR ians'.Haters '. STAY AWAY!!!!!! YOU ARE NOT INVITED HERE!!! ALREADY I AM IN A VERY BAD MOOD, DON'T TRY TO INCREASE IT!!!!!😡 😡

Hii my dear TR ians ... hmmm ... I am also sad with the current track... don't know whats going on in the BRAIN of palki maam...with each passing day I am getting more irritated ... okk today there was lots of dosti part,. But how could they forget taani like that... No one missed her[ya ofcourse there was Rey]CV's are completely sidelining taanii and now Its above the limit and I cant stand this so I changed the track!![😆 😆!] no one has put chains to my imagination so I can do that😆 and the 1st part is here enjoy guys.. THIS IS GONNA BE COMPLETELY TAAREYLICIOUS GOA TRIP ENJOYYY...[mera exams hai.. but I am pissed off with the track to such a point I couldn't help but form a taarey track of my own ]

OUR TRIP TO GOA

The story begins where rey becomes angry at the entire gang and leaves as he wants to tell taani bout the Goa plan

Evening-Rey's room

"what to do?? hmm[he sat on his bed in in deep thought murmuring to himself] anyways I cant hide from taani…but mera friends!!hmmm kuch socho rey… soch[he said to himself and tried to calm himself]" suddenly an idea struck in his mind .. "yes yahi sahi rahega… with this both sides will be fine .. yes!!!"

He grabbed his phone which lay on the bed and made a call " hii Sharon.."

Sharon:"hmm… I suppose you have thought over the issue"

Rey: "yaa.. I am ready.." before he could complete Sharon cut in"kya!!![in excitement] matlab finally you have decided to stand on the side of your passion ..soo.. when are we going??"

"sharon.. Sharon… please be calm okk .. pehle listen to me .. see you guys leave today I will be there tomorrow but as for now I cant join you.." before he could complete Sharon interrupted again.." But why Rey?? I mean all are going to the same place and.."

" see sharon .. please I cant say anything now .. trust me I will be there 2morrow" and he cut the call.. " I am sorry Sharon .. but I have to do this…"

Sharon was a little bit confused at reys behavior but decided to leave the thought as she was more happy with the news that he will join them the next day… she called the rest and made arrangements for their trip, soon Sharon , swayam , nil and aashi left for goa in sharons car

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7.30pm

She switched off the television hearing the door bell " bhai hoga…"she said to herself and went to open the door.. "AAPPP???[her eyes widened seeing him] aap yahan?? Is vaktt?"

"kyu nahi aa sakta??" he started walking in and she stepped backwards

"nahi mera matlab.." she lost her words somewhere as he made his steps towards her .. "toh phir kya hai tumara matlab?? Huh?? …"he pulled her towards him in a swift movement, holding her round her waist… a soft smile accompanied the crimson that started spreading on her cheeks..they stood lost in each others deep eyes for a few min until his phone started ringing… "ha swayam… ha mujhe pata hai… tu tension mat le ..i will be there .. okk.."

"bhai ka phone tha?? Kahan hai wo ? aura Ab tak ghar kyu nahi aye?"

" k .. now don't get tensed [he made her sit on the sofa] , first listen to me[she looked at him with doubtful eyes].. listen taani, swayam and the others had left for goa

"kyaa?? Goa?? bhai n backi sab?? India fest k liye?? Rules break karke??"

"see taani, you know na dance kitne important hai hum sab k liye…[she nodded her head but still in fear and not knowing what to do]… actually even swayam wanted to tell you but sab itna jaladi jaldi decide hua [he never wanted to see taani hurt and feel bad for her bro ,so he lied]n also kyunki tum GS ho n rules breaking n all , I hope you understand [she bit her lower lips and nodded her head which was drooped down]"

"soo aap bhi jaa rahe ho??" she asked him still facing down

" mein nahi hum" he replied back

"KYAAA??? HUM??? MATLAB??"

" matlab mein aur tum !!! aur kaun??" he hit her forehead playfully

"lekin rey.."

"lekin wekin kuch nahi… we are going.. come on pack your things and get ready fast"

" but rey .. how will i??"

"so you don't want to come with me " he asked in a sad tone

"mera matlab vo nahi tha.."

" so no more arguments … [he held her shoulders from behind and pushed her forwards towards her room] we are going…"

He made her walk towards her cupboard and he opened the door of the cupboard " so now get your things ready fast.." he looked at her and signaled with his hand… his eyes accidently fell on his photo… with a curved brow he opened the door of the cupboard fully and looked inside …. His photo's pasted on the inner side of the cupboard with messages … he gazed with amusement and then turned to look at her . she stood biting her tongue with closed eyes… how could someone look so innocent and cute ??? he couldn't help but smile at his beautiful cute love…he went towards her and placed a cute peck on her forehead and whispered in her ears " now leave this shy mode kyunki tum jab shy hote ho toh aur bhi zyada cute lagti ho and then I wont be able to take my eyes of my cute gf and then .." [he said in a husky voice coming more close with a naughty smirk], she hit him on his chest, her tender cheeks were now more crimson …. he smiled and continued "okk so now get ready , and lets leave else we will miss the bus"

"bus[she looked at him , her eyes twinkling due to excitement] ,hum bus mein jayenge?"

"ha voh kya hai, car is in repair and there are no trains right now and we have to be there by atleast tomorrow noon so we will have to go by bus… kyu tume koi problem?"

"nooo [she winked her eyes in glee] in fact I am so excited … hum dono bus mein… goa…"she shut her eyes and smiled [you can imagine na ,I love vrinda doing this]

Soon taani packed her things and they closed the main door and got out ..

Part 2 coming soon…. TaaRey bus journey

So what say?? How was it shall I continue??

part-2

part-3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome! n duh u should con't! lol!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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1 side you make me smile by dis supereb story and other side palki make me angry and sad ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG Indu why CV's don't hire u for TR story 😆
sachi yaar itna mess hi na hota...
its fab yaar, i mean everybody is happy...
i wish CV's ko bhi akkal aa jaye...
and they also give us such happy moments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u so much fr liftng up my mood wit ur wndrful stry(sinc i'm miffed by d curnt trck of taarey/taani).so swt of rey!he dsnt wnt to hurt her,tkng hr alng wit hm&evn lied abt hr bro.(y cnt ty shw sch gd tngs in shw).plz cntinue.al d best fr ur exams.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Indu luv u for dis ...i ws hell disappointed nd frusted thnk u so much for such wonderful story ... U shoul continue lol ye b koi puchne ki baat hai?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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osmm lovd it 👏👍🏼
plz updaste soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I so love you for this meenu di!! Thank you so so so much!! Calmed me a bit!! Jaldi jaldi update karo!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome,amazing,mind blowing...!yeh sbb show main kioo nhii hotaa 😭😡palki mam n cv's ap sb taarey writters se seekhna chahyee..!
but still i just loved itt..!
plzzz plzzz plzzz continuee..!
and update jaldi jaldii..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing... its like a treat after this irritating track going on... thank you so much... =)

please do continue really soon :D

thank you for changing the mood...kash yeh hota... :(

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