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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: desigirl_taarey

super cute! i wish cvs would have done something like this!

cnt wait for next update


hii sanju😊 thank you dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
its awesome...
plz update next part sooonnn can't wait...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
The way Rey said huskily to Taani seeing his photo and Taani shying. So romantic. Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Awsm do continue da 2nd part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
it was too good start di very good u r a awesome writer👏 plz plz plz plz plz continue👏👏👏👏plz continue di i m eagerly waiting and sorry for late comment di 😔 😊😛😉😃😆 bye update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: navamanks

This is the kind of track we all deserve in D3!

This one is soo good...And I cant wait for taarey bus ride now...woohoo!!

hii next part is coming up soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

I am soo happy everyone liked it '. ⭐️Hiii this part is full on tareylicious'☺️ if anyone allergic to our hot couple had mistakenly opened this , I warn you to back off, don't blame me later for what effect they create on you😆 so here you go with part2⭐️

Part-2

Bus station

There was a lot of rush , he held her fingers firmly in his hand and made way through the crowd .. she followed him in the direction he led her . soon they reached a low floor luxury bus to Goa and got in.. he put the luggage on the luggage bar above .. " shall I sit by window's side plz plz plz" she made a cute face… he couldn't help but smile "ya sure " she got in and sat by the window and he sat beside her.. the conductor came and checked the tickets and soon the bus started … she put her head out of the window allowing the night breeze to caress her face… her soft curls danced in the soft chilling breeze …. He kept smiling at his cute love enjoying …. She turned to him in full excitement, he lifted his eyebrows with her sudden action " kitni tand hai na??" she crossed her arms around her chest and shut her eyes tight feeling the chillness…. He kept adoring her and slowly snaked his left hand around her shoulders… feeling some warmth on her shoulders she opened her eyes and tilted her head to her left shoulder…a blush of red slowly started penetrating her weatish skin seeing his arm around her, slowly he put her strands behind her ear and whispered in her ears " abhi bhi hai? Mmm??" she replied him in a smile that formed on her lips hearing his words…he moved more close to her and her and held her more tight, " ab???" he whispered in her ears again… she turned to her right and hugged him on his chest hiding her face… he caressed her hair… she lay on his chest enjoying the coziness… a few minutes later she opened her eyes … her eyes soon caught the sight of a newly married couple sitting parallel to them , she freed herself from the hug and kept looking at them[he was startled a bit and looked in the direction she looked]… the man held his lady in a side hug , the girl had her maang red with sindoor, her neck adorned with the mangalsutra and her hands bejeweled with bangles… taani kept looking at the girl with a smile "lagta hai ki they are newly married " he lifted his brows and said with a smirk "sooo??" she looked at him in a doubtful mode "so ?? kya???[she curved her thin brows] Lagta hai honeymoon k liye jaa rahe h[she said with a smile]"

" sooo?" he dragged her more close with a naughty smirk

"kyaa app ye sooo… sooo laga rakha hai??... mein bas yuhi keh rahi thi[she pouted her pink lips in an angry mode and turned her head to face the window and managed to rescue herself from his grip] .. he lifted his brows in a naughty smile seeing his cute gf in an angry mode, each and every expression of hers brought a smile to his face , every gesture made him feel gifted to have her as his love …. He bent sidewards and put his both palms on her shoulders and rested his head on her shoulder and looked outside the window in the same manner as she did… soon the lights in the bus was switched off to allow the travelers to have a sound sleep as it was night and the bus didn't have any stops…. he could see her face in the feeble street lights that penetrated in… "sooo my taani is angry with me???[she gave a fake 'I don't care' expression ] he lifted his right palm from her shoulders [ she didn't expect this , she kept murmuring to herself in her mind"re eh kya [she curved her brows in doubt], meine socha kuch sweet bolke mujhe convince karega, but yeh toh.." [she made a more angry pout]… soon she felt some warmth crawling her belly over her top.. she felt a sudden current of electricity through her spines … her eyes widened in startle , her sight shifted from the outside scenery to where his fingers played… she tilted her head to his face in a side view "reyyy!!! Aap yeh kya kar rahe ho???" she said in an angry expression but feeble tone due to the weakness she felt .. he tilted his head more towards her neck… "kkk.koo..koi dekh lega rey"

"par lights off hai" he whispered holding her more tight, enjoying her smell mixed with the soft breeze that gushed in through the window…

All off a sudden the lights were turned on … he straightened himself to his seat from his earlier position…. she chuckled naughtily holding her palm on her mouth to hide her laugh…

The conductor bent down to take something that dropped from his hand ["kya muzeebath hai yaar" a nagged rey murmured to himself] and then turned off the light…. She kept giggling at his cute expression… he turned sideways to look at her …. He felt jealous with the soft breeze that still now played with her silk curls… she looked even more beautiful now…. He bent his head more towards her … her giggles decreased as his face came more near to hers …. He couldn't take his eyes off from her angelic face… there was something in her that always dragged him towards her….Slowly he caressed her soft face with his rough fingers removing her strands from her face…. Her eyelids that were now closed looked so perfect, indeed everything about her seemed perfect to him… her beats increased rapidly as she felt the warm air he exhaled on her face…..her breathing became more erratic as his hard stubble brushed her tender cheeks…. He moved from the side of her ear slowly towards her lips….

***FLASH*** someone switched the lights on again…… he tightened his fist and gritted his teeth and came back to his seat murmuring " ab kya hua yaar"… she chuckled seeing his cute angry face , " ye na sahi jagah nahi hai" she whispered in his ears with a naughty smile.. he turned to look at her with a cute angry expression " lagta hai mera nazeeb mein likha hi nahii, else kitna acha mauka tha , ye tandi hawa , tum aur mein[he gave a sigh cursing his plight]"

"chu .. chu…[she made a naughty sound ] and caressed his cheeks and pinched them …awww my hero… but this a BUS!!! Remember that!!!! [made an angry face all off a sudden] aapka kamra nahi jahan hum dono…" she blurted out not knowing what she just said…but he sensed it correctly and gave a naughty smirk.. she thought of what she said and got nervous .. " ohhh kamra??? Eh kamra kaha se aa gaya miss taani??[he was in a mood to tease her] so you were dreaming something else huhh??? Kya tha bolo?? Bolo?? Hum dono .. mera kamara huh?? Huh???"

She turned tomato red .. to avoid the awkwardness she gave a soft hit on his chest "chiii… aap… app ye sab apna dimag se nikalye aur .. aur so jayiyae .. dekho backi sab so rahe hai.." she said facing outside not having guts to face him … he chuckled " achha baaba , come lets sleep…" he said in between his chuckle seeing her plight… he pulled her in a side hug … she adjusted herself and placed her head on his chest holding him tightly….. the cool breeze that blew in made the angel close her eyes enjoying his warmth…her soft curls caressed his face , he put his arms around her and closed his eyes…. Soon both of them fell asleep

SHRIEEKKK … the bus came to a stop and the lights were turned on the driver came out of his seat and made an announcement "Gaadi kharab hua… ab kal subah 8 ya 9 baje tak yahi rukhna padega"…. rey opened his eyes and rubbed them with the sudden flash of light and the disturbance, the passengers murmured among themselves cursing the bus and sometimes even the driver… he looked at her , she was sound asleep on his chest…. He caressed her face and whispered in her ears " taani…. Taani,"…

"hmmm.." she gave a beautiful drowsy groan… " utho… gaadi kharab hua … taani…" she rubbed her eyes and looked at him " kya hua rey?? Hum goa pahonch gaye?? Itni jaldi??" she rubbed her eyes and looked at him through her half open lids "nahi meri jaan… [he cupped her face]we haven't reached , its just that something went wrong with the bus and they say that we will have to wait till morning 9 am" "kyaaa???" she widened her eyes …. " hmmm I know … I promised the others that I will be there by tomorrow noon….We have to be there by atleast tomorrow evening kyunki we have our performance at night" he said in a tensed tone

"rey [she kept her palm on top of his in assurance]… don't be tensed , koi toh raasta hoga…. " she looked at him in a comforting and soothing look…


Ab kya hoga??? 😲😆Will rey and taani reach goa???😲😉😆 Watch out for the hottest couple's hottest journey to Goa '. ☺️Till then enjoy in taareylicious dream land '. Byeee'. I hope everyone liked it'⭐️...

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Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Damn awesum indu!! Wish yeh khatam nai hota...bt since woh ho nai sakta...plz jaldi update kardo..n hehe read it b4 d pm 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Amazing. Both are so naughty and hot. Keep updating.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Indu its a very Taareylicious bus ride indeed, I love it. Lol it so funny everytime Rey trying to get too close to his princess the lights come one lol. Aww their bus is broken, u did a fab job plz update soon excited to see what they do next to reach to Goa.

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