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Awesome update
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-DHDAJS Part 22-

"Cold" Maan asked as he sat beside Geet, and handed her a towel to wrap around her wet body. Geet took it with her shivering hand and said "Thanks" warping around her body. "want something to drink...I mean Juice" Maan asked as he pour glass of Juice for himself, making sure no drinks were kept there for them by the servant. "I like that" Geet said seeing him looking at the table.

"Kya" Maan asked.

Geet- ummm, that there is no drink.

Maan- ummm" Maan gets up after having his juice and pulls out his hand in front of Geet and says "walk" to which Geet just puts her hand in his as she looked at him and stood up to walk with him, as they still held there hand together.

Geet- thanks

Maan- kis liye

Geet- wo kal raat aap ne jo kaha uske liye.

Maan- in that case I should also say thanks to u

Geet- and may I know for what

Maan- for coming in my life" hearing that Geet just stops in her track and looked at Maan, while Maan just closed his eyes on realizing what he said, and then turned facing her and quickly said "I meant, that if u hadn't come in my life then..." he got confused in the mid.

"Then" Geet said as she titled her neck a little seeing his confused face.

Maan- Then I would have been living in peace" Maan said teasingly to cover up for his talk

"Wattt" Geet Shouted and then Geet started chasing Maan as he ran laughing. "arggg I hate u Maan"

Maan- U can hate me as much as u want Geet, u have ur full life left to that.

Geet- u stupid, I won't leave u.

"when did I said to leave me Geet" saying that he winked at her and again went in the water, Geet for a sec stood their staring at him, then she also went in the water and soon they both started splashing water at each other, playing just like a kid.

"Ooo, How I wish I was in his arm, instead of that chudail" Rashmi said all day dreaming seeing Arjun dancing with the girl he came with.

"Kuti kamani" Annie whispers then says "bhar main jaye wo aur tum log, main ja rahi if u both want to come with me then come nahi tu main ja rahi hoon"

Anaya- chill na yaar tu kyun itna gussa ho rahi hai, chal hum bhi dance karte hai" saying that she just dragged Annie without giving her a chance to speak or protest.

On the other hand Arjun just smirked seeing her gusse se lal cheek and says to himself "lets see Annie for how long u keep urself in control from coming to me" thinking that He pulls the girl very close to him and starts dancing with her making sure Annie had a very good view of their dance.

Annie dance with her friends trying her best to ignore Arjun, but her eyes were gazing them every now and then. "what is it Annie, why are u keep looking at that side" Anaya asked seeing the side she was constantly looking at.

Annie- kuch nahi, I...I'll be just back" saying that she left the dance floor and went in the bar that was there and ordered a soft drink for herself as she stared at Arjun dancing very closely to that girl. As she stared at them she felt like burning everything around and in anger she didn't notice that by mistake she took drink of the person who was sitting next to her drinking. At first her throat burn making her feel like throwing up, she wasn't use to drinking and the drink she just had was very strong one which made her to be tipsy quick and the next moment she was on the dance floor dancing all dhoon in herself. Her friends gave her a weird look and said "Annie are u ok"

"haan kyun" Annie said innocently as she jumped up and swing her head around. her both friend knew she was drunk seeing her state and Anaya asked "tune kya drink ki hai aanie"

"main ne to juice order kari thi tu juice hi drink karungi na, tu stupid" Annie said laughing at their stupidity and then she turned when her eyes fell on Arjun who was staring at her only and she fumed in anger. She straightly walked to him and pushes the girl away from Arjun and says "bauth maza a raha hai na tumhe us kuti ke saath"

"Annie are u ok" Arjun asked as she stumbled.

"tumhe ise kya" Annie snapped back at him and says "U go na with that chudial and have fun, why u worrying about me, tum jao us ke pass"

Arjun- Annie lets go, ur drunk

Annie- no I am not coming with u, ur a cheater, u say to me u love u but u...u...are on a date with ur client.

Arjun- Annie come lets go" Arjun said as he held her hand. "NO Arjun I hate u, u lie to me, u don't love me" with no other option left Arjun just pick her in his arm and walks out while Annie wiggled in his arm to get down. "Arjun u lie to me na, u don't love me hai na"

Arjun- u know thats not true Annie.

"So u love me" Annie asked like an innocent baby.

Arjun- apni jaan se bhi zidya" saying that he placed a kiss on her forehead.

Annie- u didn't go on a date with her na

Arjun- nahi

Annie- u were trying to make me jealous isiliye u were dancing with her na

Arjun- hmmm

Annie- u think I am drunk

Arjun- hmmm...No...yes

Annie- I hate u Arjun just put me down

Arjun- u were pretending to be drunk Annie.

"Put me down Arjun" Annie screamed and Arjun instantly let her down and made a baby face. and says "Wo Annie, I was..."

"Not a word Mr. Arjun Rathord" Annie said sternly and then starts walking toward her car.

Arjun- Annie plz listen to me...Annie plz ek bar meri baat sun lo

Annie- mujhe tumhari koi baat nahi suni, so for u it would be better to go back in the disco and dance with that girl. and don't worry this time I won't disturb u. I just needed to know why u were doing all this, now that I know I don't need to do anything else.

Arjun- Annie I agree it was wrong, but trust me she was my client and she is the one who asked me for a dance, and when I saw u getting jealous I thought to

"kya socha tha tumne Arjun" Annie said interrupting him "yeahi ke Annie tumhare pass un deewani ladkyun ki tarha tumhare bahon main a jaungi aur kahungi Arjun I Love u, u can't be with someone else...haan yeahi socha tha na tumne tu sorry ur dream will be only a dream coz I don't love u Arjun, I don't and it doesn't make any difference to me that ur with that girl or any other girl" Saying that she turned to open her car door but Arjun harshly pulled her facing him and held her against the car and said "acha tu u don't love me na tu why does it even bother u that I lie to u or why did u even had bothered to find out why I was doing whatever I was doing in the disco"

Annie- Arjun leave me, I don't want to talk to u

Arjun- tell me ke tumhe mera tumhare pass na hona acha nahi lagta, tell me u didn't wanted to be in my arm instead of that girl.

Annie- No I didn't, now leave me mujhe jana hai

Arjun- kab tak khud se jhot bol ti raho gi Annie, akhir kab tak u will keep testing my love for u, jaisa chaha, jaise socha tumne main ne wo hi kiya, but tumhe meri koi baat pasand hi nahi aait, sorry I should be saying this instead of that, ke na jane wo aakhir aisa kaun si baat hai jo tumhe mere pass ane se rok ti hai Annie kyun ki tumne tu mujh se kuch kaha nahi bas jo kuch bhi bola ye tumhari aankhon ne bola aur ye saaf wo dar bata ti hai jis ki wajha se tum mere pyar ko apna na nahi chathi ho.

"aisa kuch nahi hai Arjun plz just leave me" Annie said struggling to free herself and the next moment Arjun left her and said "theek hai Annie, the day u will realize ur love for me remember one thing, ke tum mujhe kitna bhi wapus kyun na bola lo I won't come back to u, itna dor chala jaunga tumhari zindagi se ke u will carve to just see my glimpse but I won't come back Annie I won't" Saying that Arjun left from there without giving her a second glance, while Annie just stood staring at him as his word sunk in her.

Annie:

Teri mohabbat hai sachi, yakeen dile koi hamein

ho pyar tera sirf mere liye, yakeen dile koi hamein

na koi dard na koi dhoka na ko chaal ho tere pyar main

kuch aisa kar ja tu, jo yakeen dila jaye mujhe

Kar loon main bhi tujhse pyar, koi bharosa dila ja hamein

Annie sat back in her car shutting the door with bang while she rested her head on the steering wheel, letting her tears come out that she had been holding it. She slowly looked up at her side view mirror and saw Arjun standing there looking at her and in response to it Annie just starts the car in no time she was out of his sight.

Arjun:

I wish you could have seen the love I see in ur eyes for me,

I wish you could have understand the love u have for me

I wish u didn't keep running away from the truth coz,

its hurts to see u deny ur love for me when u know it is true

It hurts to see u being cold as ice, but inside u are in pain just as I am in pain

I wish you could really believe in my words when I say,

you are not just my wants but also my need,

A need to breath, a need of my heart, A need to live this life

And whenever u are with me I am the happiest person ever.

I wished you could just trust me and my love for u is as pure as God blessing.

Arjun went back in and said sorry for Annie behavior to his client and then continued on with his meetings.


Author Note: I know there wasn't lot of Maaneet Moments and was only Arjun & Annie part, I had to have their part as it was necessary for the story to move ahead, and from here the real story will be starting of Maaneet falling in love, I will let u guys figure out what it is, and how it will take place in Maaneet life.

Regarding Likes: Will Update only after you all give 118 Likes. This time I am serious.

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Edited by Mariam94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab kya hoga love it waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

liked the small fight between maaneet

annie arjun part was good
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
aniee and arjun part was nice
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i just love this story sooo much
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hmm maaneet fought
nice update
plz give regular updates of this ff dear
missing ur updates
thanx for the pm dear
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