TR ff:kahin pyar na ho jaye ch 11 pg 140 - Page 33

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hi guys...i m back again...and sad news is iske baad sunday tak me update nahi kar paungi...pehle hi din clg walo ne bomb fod diya ...3 assignments de kar...so i have to complete them.i hardly get time to come here bcoz my clg is from 8.30 to 4.00 and then 5.00 to 7.30 tution...so ab updates late milenge...


rey go to buy juice.

mean while yug reach home and scream.."mummaaa..."

he enter in the house ...

sharon come out of taani's room when she heard yug...

yug run and hug sharon...sharon take him in her hands and both sat on sofa...

sh:maza aaya park me???

yug:ha mumma...bahot maza aaya...yug ne bahot masti ki aur naya friend bhi banaya aur pata hai usne yug ko icecream bhi khilayi..."

yug told all this in one breath...

yug:mumma kaha par hai??...he look here and there...

sh:me to yahi par hu...

yug:aap nahi...

sh:ha...aap ki mumma chocolate lene gai hai...kal vo aap ke liye chocolate cake banane wali hai...

yug:wow...chocolate cake...yug ko bahot pasand hai ...ek baat bolu aap se???

sh:ha bolo...

yug:yug aap dono ko mumma bulata hai to pata hi nahi chalta ki me kise bula raha hu...so...

sh:so...

yug:yug mumma ko mumma bulayega aur aap ko mom...

sh:hmmm...thats a good idea ...

yug:thank u mom...

here taani go in a store...and mean while rey also go there...

in between them two ladies are standing...so both cant see each other...suddenly rey heard:kitne paise hue???

rey:ye aawaz to...naughty bird ki hai...

he try to saw her...but this two ladies are not moving ...

but after some time...when they leave from there ...he saw her and a smile appear on his face...

he go near her...she is busy in paying when he said:hi naughty bird...

taani shocked hearing rey's voice...

she look at him...he smile at her...

ta:aap???

rey:ha...me...

ta:aap yaha bhi aa gaye mujhe pareshan karne???

rey:ye lo...me kyu tumhe pareshan karne aaunga??me to yaha juice lene aaya tha...

ta:oh ...ok...bye...me chalti hu...

taani start walking...

rey:are...thodi der baat to kar lo apne naye dost se. ...

he also walk behind her ...

ta:mujhe der ho rahi hai...

rey:itni jaldi hai tumhe???

ta:ha...par aap kyu mere piche aa rahe hai??aap ko kuch lena tha na???

rey:ha...par ab nahi lena hai...

ta:bade ajib ho aap...

rey:vo to me hu...ajib types...

taani smile at his this sentence...

both stop near a park...

ta:aap ko koi aur kam nahi hai kya jo mere piche aa rahe hai???

rey:nahi esa nahi hai...

ta:to phir...but suddenly taani's expression change...and she run in the park...rey also go behind her to see why she is so worried...rey stan at some distance...

actually sone girls are playing and one girl fell down and start crying...seein her crying taani run to her...put her bag aside abd make the girl stand and said:kuch nahi hua...chup ho jao...dekho aap ko chot bhi nahi lagi hai...shh...chup ho jao ...

girl stop crying...taani wipe her tears and kiss her on her cheek and said :thats a good girl...

rey is watching this from there...he looking at her and thinks:how caring she is...he lost in her...

girl:didi...aap hamare sath khelogi???

ta:vo...kya hai...

al girls:plz didi...plz...

ta:ok thik hai...kya karna hoga???

grl 1:bas ye patti apni aankho pe bandh lo aur hame pakdo ...

ta:ok...chalo...

one girl tie a cloth piece on taani's eyes...

and they start...

ta:kaha ho sab...

all:didi...yaha par...yaha...

taani searching for them...

here rey unknowingly start walking towards her...and reach near her...

and suddenly taani's hand touch on his cheek and he come into his sense...

rey:(thinking)me yaha kaise aa gaya???

taani ask:are aap kon ho...??aap to bachhe nahi lagte??

rey:ha...me bachha nahi hu...

taani recognize his voice and said:mr.akdu...aap side me hatiye...

and she turn and start to catch the girls...and catch one girl...

taani remove the cloth and said:ye...dekha mene aap ko pakad liya...

girl:ha didi...

ta:ok...bye bye...aap log khelo...mujhe ghar jana hai...

all:ok didi...bye...

ta:bye...

as she turn to go she found rey in front of her...

rey:are...aur nahi khelna???

ta:nahi...mujhe der ho rahi hai...aap hatiye mere raste se...

rey:achha achha thik hai...angry bird mat ban jana...jao...

taani go from there...

rey:angry bird...(slowly)and he also go back to his home...

taani reach at her home...

and see shayug are watching tv together...yug is sitting in sharon's lap...and he is clapping and laughing ...

they are watching tom and jerry...

as jerry success to hit tom yug said:yee...jerry...i love u...dekha mom...jerry ne kaise tom ko hit kiya...

sh:ya yug...mom ne dekha...

but as tom hit jerry...he become sad and said:oh no...tom hit jerry...

sharon laugh seeing him...

taani also join them...

after some time sharon:ok taani...me chalti hu...

ta:sharon ...dinner karke jana...

sh:nahi taanii...

yug:kyu...plz mom aap aaj yahi ruk jao...

ta:ab bolo...yug chahta hai ki tum aaj yahi ruk jao ... ...

sh:ab yug ne bol diya to mom ko rukna to padega...

ta:hmm...chalo me dinner ready karti hu...tum yug k sath khelo ...

sh:ha... thik hai...

here at rey's apartment:

rey is sitting on his bed and watching tv...he is changing channels as he dont like anything...but he stop at one channel...one movie is running...

in this heroin is playing with kids and hero is looking at her chupke chupke and walking at her unknowingly...

seeing this rey remember him and taani and thinks:are ye to bilkul vesa hi scene hai...jo aaj sham ko mere aur naughty bird k bich hua tha...

but in the film after both see each other there is an eyelock between them...seeing this rey said:are esa to hamare bichme hua hi nahi...par kyu nahi hua???...are mr.akdu...vo thodi na tumhari girlfriend hai jo tum dono k bich esa scene hoga...kuch bhi soch raha hai rey tu...he turn off the tv...and sat on a couch near the window...

he close his eyes but as he close his eyes he saw taani's cute face while she was kissing the girl...he immidgetly open his eyes...

rey:ye kya ho raha hai...mujhe naughty bird dikh rahi hai...oh god lagta hai me pagal ho jaunga...

saying this he think to dance and he play the song and danced for some time...

here taani prepare dinner and all finish their dinner...then taashayug play games for sometime and then yug slept...

shani are in taani's room...yug is in between them...both are studying...

ta:sharon vo table par se meri book dena...

sh:ha...deti hu...

sharon took the book and just going to give it to her when three photographs fell down...sharon take them and ask:taani ye photoes???

taani take one photo and said:ye hai yug and me...ye tab ki photo hai jab me usse ghar lekar aayi thi...

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flashback:

taani enter with a baby in the house...

td:taani...kaha thi tum beta???pata hai me kitna pareshan ho gaya tha???aur ye bachha kiska hai???

ta:papa ye mujhe akela mila...to me usse apnesath le aayi...me isse apne sath rakhna chahti hu papa...

td:ok beta...agar tumhe isi me khushi milti hai to thik hai...

ta:thank u papa...

td:ek minute...me tumhari photo le leta hu...

her dad take his camera and took photo...


flashback end.

taani take another photo and said:ye tab ki photo hai jab yug 3 months ka tha...aur tab mene uska name rakha tha.

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flashback:

taani wake up at 7 am in the morning...with hearing yug crying...

taani took him in her hands...

ta:aww...kya hua shona??why r u crying???

she went in the hall where his dad is reading newspaper...

td:kya hua taani???

ta:dekhona papa...kab se ro raha hai...

td:lao mujhe do...

taani gave yug to her dad...

td:kya hua???kyu ro rahe ho???tum...are taani...humne to abhi tak iska name hi nahi rakha ...

ta:ha papa...(to yug)to aap chahte hai ki aap ka bhi name ho...)

yug smile jeseki usse samaj me aa gaya ...

ta:thik hai...hmmm...to aap ka name hoga...yug...achha hai na???

yug smile more...

td:dekha isse name bahot pasand aaya...

ta:mujhe bhi bahot pasand hai...yug...sweet name...

taani's dad put yug on sofa and take his camera and click his photo...



flashback end:

she take third photo and said:ye bas ese hi ek din yug betha to mene uski photo le li...

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sh:wow taani ...he is looking so cute...

ta:vo to hai...achha chalo ab so jate hai...kal college bhi jana hai...

sh:ha...thik hai...gud night...

ta:gud night shar...

both sleep...

precap:rey saw taani dancing and crying...


tell me guys...how is yug??and hows the update??


patie thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
oww such a sweet update dips luvd it ...lvd shaani's bonding... Nd yug is so cute:-*
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayyeee... rey is so cutee... and so is taani... hehe :D
and yug and sharon bhi... love where the story line is heading to... :)
and precap mein... wondering how rey will react... but awesome post! it was so cute... esp d part when rey unknowingly walked towards her... :*

thanks 4 d PM...and super excited already 4 the next update... do update soon ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Loved it. So sweet photos. Loved them. Precap made me excited. Please cont soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: patie


oww such a sweet update dips luvd it ...lvd shaani's bonding... Nd yug is so cute:-*



thanks pikky...yug is cute just like u...
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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks dear...
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Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

hayyeee... rey is so cutee... and so is taani... hehe :D

and yug and sharon bhi... love where the story line is heading to... :)
and precap mein... wondering how rey will react... but awesome post! it was so cute... esp d part when rey unknowingly walked towards her... :*

thanks 4 d PM...and super excited already 4 the next update... do update soon ;)



thanks dear...next chapter mujhe bahot soch kar likhna hoga...i will try to update soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey



thanks pikky...yug is cute just like u...

lol shukriya taarif ke liye :-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dips sweet short update... Loved yug... The aankh macholi scene of TaaRey was awesome dear... :)

Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abhi_arshilover

Awesome update. Loved it. So sweet photos. Loved them. Precap made me excited. Please cont soon. Thanks for pm.



thank u dear...i will try to continue soon...

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